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hey guys
after a long time
mera mood hua k kuch likhun phir se
per kai sare members k shikwe they k me sirf sad poetry hi likhta hun
to humne socha k kuch romantic poetry likhte hain
me kal movie dekh raha tha koi old pakistani
to me us ki urdu se kafi impress hua
n situation ye thi k ek newly married couple hai n
wife apne jis ka husband dosre country ja raha hota hai
to us se shikwe ker rai hain k ap k bagher kese din guzrenge
to wo akhri lamha us hubby ko yad araha hai
jab wo apni newly married wife se duur ho raha tha
usi base per mene ye poetry likhi
hope k ap sab ko pasand ae
hume umeed hai is shyeri me her ek shohar ko un ki shareek-e-hayat ki jhalak dikhegi
note: meri urdu itni achi nai ager koi shyeri k point se ghalti hui ho ya urdu k point of view se to mazrat chahta hun
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n ye dosra design with out border
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u ROCK dear
tm to achey khasey SHAAIR ho yar.....{Nice post Tm}
u ROCK dear
tm to achey khasey SHAAIR ho yar.....{Nice post Tm}
waow adi zabradast poetry likhi hy tmne to ..very impressing and full with emotionsshey guys
after a long time
mera mood hua k kuch likhun phir se
per kai sare members k shikwe they k me sirf sad poetry hi likhta hun
to humne socha k kuch romantic poetry likhte hain
me kal movie dekh raha tha koi old pakistani
to me us ki urdu se kafi impress hua
n situation ye thi k ek newly married couple hai n
wife apne jis ka husband dosre country ja raha hota hai
to us se shikwe ker rai hain k ap k bagher kese din guzrenge
to wo akhri lamha us hubby ko yad araha hai
jab wo apni newly married wife se duur ho raha tha
usi base per mene ye poetry likhi
hope k ap sab ko pasand ae
hume umeed hai is shyeri me her ek shohar ko un ki shareek-e-hayat ki jhalak dikhegi
note: meri urdu itni achi nai ager koi shyeri k point se ghalti hui ho ya urdu k point of view se to mazrat chahta hun
with border
n ye dosra design with out border
beautifull
likhte rehte kun nhi ho??likha karo ..gehrayi hy tmhare likhne me
thanx dear, han ab suchta hun TM designer ka to rank mila hi hai ab TM poet ka bhi le lun
waow adi zabradast poetry likhi hy tmne to ..very impressing and full with emotionss
beautifull
likhte rehte kun nhi ho??likha karo ..gehrayi hy tmhare likhne me
well what ever i do i do it from my heart n soul chahe wo music ho designing ho ya poetry
han ese hi samjhlo chotuwah zabardast bhai bohat acha likha hai and design bhe fit hai kamal hai
yai tu maire upar suit karta hai
shayad maire liye likhe hai ap nae
yea siss Heart touching..
Adi iz Mirza Ghalib Of TM
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to phir abhi u yaha kya karing meri poetry chori
Adi iz Mirza Ghalib Of TM
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