zara itna to bata dein - ADi
- Thread starter Atif-adi
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Walakium aslaam. MASHAALLAH intahai khubsurat.. bohat ummdhaa...=D>hey guys
after a long time
mera mood hua k kuch likhun phir se
per kai sare members k shikwe they k me sirf sad poetry hi likhta hun
to humne socha k kuch romantic poetry likhte hain
me kal movie dekh raha tha koi old pakistani
to me us ki urdu se kafi impress hua
n situation ye thi k ek newly married couple hai n
wife apne jis ka husband dosre country ja raha hota hai
to us se shikwe ker rai hain k ap k bagher kese din guzrenge
to wo akhri lamha us hubby ko yad araha hai
jab wo apni newly married wife se duur ho raha tha
usi base per mene ye poetry likhi
hope k ap sab ko pasand ae
hume umeed hai is shyeri me her ek shohar ko un ki shareek-e-hayat ki jhalak dikhegi
note: meri urdu itni achi nai ager koi shyeri k point se ghalti hui ho ya urdu k point of view se to mazrat chahta hun
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n ye dosra design with out border
kuch time pehly main ne bhi 1 story padh k ye he harkat ki thi
thanku white white rose
ohoo saba romantic hi hai sad thori hai, judai jo dikhai gai hai is me wo salo ki nai kuch hi dino ki hai per mashriki larki hone ki waja se wo use zada lag rai hai n wo shikwe shikayat ker rai hai na 
haww ye koshish thiiihmm...kiya baat hy
yahan toh sb shayer log bethy hyn :-B
btw achi koshish hy...
likhty rao
or u bhi to afsane likhti ho na ({kopping)}
acha yeh koshish nhin thi..haww ye koshish thiii
or u bhi to afsane likhti ho na ({kopping)}
khair jo bhi tha acha tha...
lolz...sshhhh...
???
lols
acha yeh koshish nhin thi..
khair jo bhi tha acha tha...
lolz...sshhhh...
apke kuch ghante khatam nai hue muhtarmaHmmm....Hum apne comments kuch ghanton baad pesh karenge..
Intezar kijiye...
