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hey guys
after a long time
mera mood hua k kuch likhun phir se
per kai sare members k shikwe they k me sirf sad poetry hi likhta hun
to humne socha k kuch romantic poetry likhte hain

me kal movie dekh raha tha koi old pakistani
to me us ki urdu se kafi impress hua
n situation ye thi k ek newly married couple hai n
wife apne jis ka husband dosre country ja raha hota hai
to us se shikwe ker rai hain k ap k bagher kese din guzrenge
to wo akhri lamha us hubby ko yad araha hai
jab wo apni newly married wife se duur ho raha tha

usi base per mene ye poetry likhi
hope k ap sab ko pasand ae :D

hume umeed hai is shyeri me her ek shohar ko un ki shareek-e-hayat ki jhalak dikhegi

note: meri urdu itni achi nai ager koi shyeri k point se ghalti hui ho ya urdu k point of view se to mazrat chahta hun :)


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masha Allah :)
bohot achi koshish bro

waise ye wife hubby ko yaad kar rahi hai naa ke hubby /:)
aur isme me bhi to thora gham chupa hai

likhte rahen inshAllah aur nikhar ayega apki poetry me :)
 
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Walaikumsalam

MA Shaa Allah Bohat acha likha hy

aur aik dum sahe mashriki husband wife ki situation ku app ny lafzo ma dhalnay ki kosish ki hay

Allah talah app k kalam ki taqt ma mazeed izafa paiada karay aur likhtay rahay (Ameen)
 
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wah wa bohat achhy se kheyalat biyan frmay aap ne us ladki kay ,,
n poetry is GREAT
 
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saviou said:
masha Allah :)
bohot achi koshish bro

waise ye wife hubby ko yaad kar rahi hai naa ke hubby /:)
aur isme me bhi to thora gham chupa hai

likhte rahen inshAllah aur nikhar ayega apki poetry me :)
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ye darasal wife k alfaz they hubby k lie jane se pehle jab hubby dosri country chale gaya to usey ye alfaz yaad ainga na {(confuse)}

thanku bhai jaan {(popcorn)}
 
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Hans_Mukh said:
Walaikumsalam

MA Shaa Allah Bohat acha likha hy

aur aik dum sahe mashriki husband wife ki situation ku app ny lafzo ma dhalnay ki kosish ki hay

Allah talah app k kalam ki taqt ma mazeed izafa paiada karay aur likhtay rahay (Ameen)
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thanku BIG B wo kya hai na me thora mature hogaya hun to samjh ne laga hun her jazbat ko :D thanku bro
 
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Atif-adi said:
hey guys
after a long time
mera mood hua k kuch likhun phir se
per kai sare members k shikwe they k me sirf sad poetry hi likhta hun
to humne socha k kuch romantic poetry likhte hain

me kal movie dekh raha tha koi old pakistani
to me us ki urdu se kafi impress hua
n situation ye thi k ek newly married couple hai n
wife apne jis ka husband dosre country ja raha hota hai
to us se shikwe ker rai hain k ap k bagher kese din guzrenge
to wo akhri lamha us hubby ko yad araha hai
jab wo apni newly married wife se duur ho raha tha

usi base per mene ye poetry likhi
hope k ap sab ko pasand ae :D

note: meri urdu itni achi nai ager koi shyeri k point se ghalti hui ho ya urdu k point of view se to mazrat chahta hun :)

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n ye dosra design with out border
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Buht Achy.........

Aur kafi kamal Ki designing hy Bhai.............


{(popcorn)}
 
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Wah bOhat khOob..! Very Nice Effort..! :-bd

Simple wOrds main chupi Feelings aur Depth ko bOhat achay se Describe kia hay aap nay..!

keep Writin n sharin..! :)
 
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Ohhh Yeah Designing Zaberdast hay accOrdin to Poetry n situatiOn..! :-bd

specialy BG n Colors CombinatiOn..!
 
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Ma Shaa Allah , khushi hoe yeh sun ker k app aub bharay ho gaye hy , tu phir bol day gher walo ku k app per aub koe aisy zummadari daal day jis say yeah pata chalay k app waqie ma aub mature aur jazabt ku smjahnay lagay hoo {(haha)}

Atif-adi said:
thanku BIG B wo kya hai na me thora mature hogaya hun to samjh ne laga hun her jazbat ko :D thanku bro
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wah adi...kia baat hai...
kitna batayein... :s
aur yeh zara kaise bhai...{(confuse)}
jokes apart...wonderfully written bro..
keep up ur gud work{(popcorn)}
 
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Hans_Mukh said:
Ma Shaa Allah , khushi hoe yeh sun ker k app aub bharay ho gaye hy , tu phir bol day gher walo ku k app per aub koe aisy zummadari daal day jis say yeah pata chalay k app waqie ma aub mature aur jazabt ku smjahnay lagay hoo {(haha)}
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naiiii wo zimedari naiii bhaii bhagoooo {(running)}
 
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~Prince-Farry~ said:
wah adi...kia baat hai...
kitna batayein... :s
aur yeh zara kaise bhai...{(confuse)}
jokes apart...wonderfully written bro..
keep up ur gud work{(popcorn)}
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wo larkio k sawal ese hi hote hain :s
or phir wo zara to kabhi khatam hi nai hota na zara ye kerde zara wo kerde zara sauda le aein {(doh)}

thanku bro {(popcorn)}
 
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