TM Poet Muqabla - Nov 2011

[NamaL]

so sweet of u dear

thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuu sisoooooooooooooo

 

[Asma24]

wow very nice Asma itni larakooo itni achi poet ho he nahi sakta zaroor meri likhi poetry tumhare hath lag gae hogi....

well jis ki bhi hai superb n awsum.... {(dancing)}

sadey naal panga nai hy changa shb..hehehe...ab u ne apni nahi likhi to mene likh dali aur kya...{(dancing)}bas koshish kerte hain janab achi poet banne ki..thanxx for nice and nice comments...

 

[SHB_Bhaiya]

({kopping)}bechara karan johar tmhari poetry ko sun nahi saka shb ..warna aaj tum na jane kahan hote

dekhooo me is pe yaqeen nahi kerta

keh me kahan hota ya yeh kerta to woh ker leeta

me beleive kerta hon ke jahan me hon mujhe yahan pe he hona tha per me yahan kyon hon mujhe yeah find out kerna hai aur ager yeah bhi pata naaa chale keh me yahan kyon hon to khasman noo khawe chalooo phangra shangra paen

 

[mashraki.larka]

en lamhon se guzarish kerta hy dil
dil ki dhadkno ki aah abhi baki hy
chahaton ka sisila abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
waqt ka karwan abhi ruka nahi
hawaon ka sama abhi thama nahi
phoolon ka jharna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aankho se khuwabon ka parda hat jane do
neendon se aankhien oujhal ho jane do
raaton me jugna ka chamkna abi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aati jati muskurati yaadon ka tasawar
gaya nahi mere her pal se door
abhi lamhon pe hasraton ka chehra hata nahi
tum na jao rooth ker
wo rahat jo tmhne dekh k mil jati hy
wo betabi jo tere aane se mit jati hy
me kerlon qaid tmko apni aankhon me
tmhen jee bhar k dekhna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum bin kuch nahi
bas aik baat hy mere hoonto pe
k mujhe tmse mohobat hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum na jao rooth ker.........
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Masha Allah Alfaz bht strong hn ....

or rythem bi bht khubsurat hai ..

Beautiful Asma {(dancing)}

Besk ov Luck ....

 

[d3siikurii]

en lamhon se guzarish kerta hy dil
dil ki dhadkno ki aah abhi baki hy
chahaton ka sisila abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
waqt ka karwan abhi ruka nahi
hawaon ka sama abhi thama nahi
phoolon ka jharna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aankho se khuwabon ka parda hat jane do
neendon se aankhien oujhal ho jane do
raaton me jugna ka chamkna abi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aati jati muskurati yaadon ka tasawar
gaya nahi mere her pal se door
abhi lamhon pe hasraton ka chehra hata nahi
tum na jao rooth ker
wo rahat jo tmhne dekh k mil jati hy
wo betabi jo tere aane se mit jati hy
me kerlon qaid tmko apni aankhon me
tmhen jee bhar k dekhna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum bin kuch nahi
bas aik baat hy mere hoonto pe
k mujhe tmse mohobat hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum na jao rooth ker.........
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V nice

 

[Jiya.]

en lamhon se guzarish kerta hy dil
dil ki dhadkno ki aah abhi baki hy
chahaton ka sisila abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
waqt ka karwan abhi ruka nahi
hawaon ka sama abhi thama nahi
phoolon ka jharna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aankho se khuwabon ka parda hat jane do
neendon se aankhien oujhal ho jane do
raaton me jugna ka chamkna abi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aati jati muskurati yaadon ka tasawar
gaya nahi mere her pal se door
abhi lamhon pe hasraton ka chehra hata nahi
tum na jao rooth ker
wo rahat jo tmhne dekh k mil jati hy
wo betabi jo tere aane se mit jati hy
me kerlon qaid tmko apni aankhon me
tmhen jee bhar k dekhna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum bin kuch nahi
bas aik baat hy mere hoonto pe
k mujhe tmse mohobat hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum na jao rooth ker.........
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wow asma beautiful :x
BEST OF LUCK shayirana girl
​

 

[~Ambitiou$ Girl~]

nice thread ...but m not interested in poetry

 

[~Ambitiou$ Girl~]

aik toh poetry samajh main nahi ati n 2nd headache start ho jati hai

 

[Qawareer]

en lamhon se guzarish kerta hy dil
dil ki dhadkno ki aah abhi baki hy
chahaton ka sisila abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
waqt ka karwan abhi ruka nahi
hawaon ka sama abhi thama nahi
phoolon ka jharna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aankho se khuwabon ka parda hat jane do
neendon se aankhien oujhal ho jane do
raaton me jugna ka chamkna abi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aati jati muskurati yaadon ka tasawar
gaya nahi mere her pal se door
abhi lamhon pe hasraton ka chehra hata nahi
tum na jao rooth ker
wo rahat jo tmhne dekh k mil jati hy
wo betabi jo tere aane se mit jati hy
me kerlon qaid tmko apni aankhon me
tmhen jee bhar k dekhna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum bin kuch nahi
bas aik baat hy mere hoonto pe
k mujhe tmse mohobat hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum na jao rooth ker.........
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hmmm hmmmmmmm..
khoob...!!!
best of luck dear

 

[Hans_Mukh]

Very Nice Poetry Asama

Best of Luck

 

[SHB_Bhaiya]

bohat khoooob poetry........

 

[Asma24]

dekhooo me is pe yaqeen nahi kerta

keh me kahan hota ya yeh kerta to woh ker leeta

me beleive kerta hon ke jahan me hon mujhe yahan pe he hona tha per me yahan kyon hon mujhe yeah find out kerna hai aur ager yeah bhi pata naaa chale keh me yahan kyon hon to khasman noo khawe chalooo phangra shangra paen

{(haha)}{(haha)}{(haha)}{(haha)}very funny shb

 

[Asma24]

Masha Allah Alfaz bht strong hn ....

or rythem bi bht khubsurat hai ..

Beautiful Asma {(dancing)}

Besk ov Luck ....

thankuuu ML

 

[Asma24]

v nice

thankuu dear

 

[Asma24]

wow asma beautiful :x
best of luck shayirana girl :d
​

soooo sweeet of u jiya thanku sweet jiya..bas dua kerna me k liye

 

[Asma24]

hmmm hmmmmmmm..
khoob...!!!
best of luck dear

THANKUUU SISOOO...hmmm hope for the best same here

 

[Asma24]

Very Nice Poetry Asama

Best of Luck

thanxx HM bhai

 

[Hans_Mukh]

u r welcome sis

 

[Asma24]

bohat khoooob poetry........

thanxxx teen numbri..

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

en lamhon se guzarish kerta hy dil
dil ki dhadkno ki aah abhi baki hy
chahaton ka sisila abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
waqt ka karwan abhi ruka nahi
hawaon ka sama abhi thama nahi
phoolon ka jharna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aankho se khuwabon ka parda hat jane do
neendon se aankhien oujhal ho jane do
raaton me jugna ka chamkna abi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aati jati muskurati yaadon ka tasawar
gaya nahi mere her pal se door
abhi lamhon pe hasraton ka chehra hata nahi
tum na jao rooth ker
wo rahat jo tmhne dekh k mil jati hy
wo betabi jo tere aane se mit jati hy
me kerlon qaid tmko apni aankhon me
tmhen jee bhar k dekhna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum bin kuch nahi
bas aik baat hy mere hoonto pe
k mujhe tmse mohobat hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum na jao rooth ker.........
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Waah waah Asma baji ouststanding poetry likhi hai
aankh bhar aaye yeh nazm parhte parhte
yeh waqt to katta jaye aapki tareef karte karte


humein to lagta hai u hi win karoge insha'ALLAH Ameen
leikin hum bhi agar poetry likh liye to participate karengein
insha'ALLAH