TM Poet Muqabla - Nov 2011

[SHB_Bhaiya]

Tum pass aaye

Youn muskaraye

TUm ne naa jane kya sapne dikhae

Aub to mera dil jage naas sota hai

Kya keron hayeee

SHB kO sub kuch hota hai...

This is my poetry.... Abhi abhi likhi hai..... Umeed hai achi lagi hogi so comments den...:x

Ager achi nahi lagi to apne cmments apne pass rakhen

 

[-Mahi-]

ok i will share soon

 

[NamaL]

very nice sharing asma sisoooooooooooo

 

[Zee Leo]

en lamhon se guzarish kerta hy dil
dil ki dhadkno ki aah abhi baki hy
chahaton ka sisila abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
waqt ka karwan abhi ruka nahi
hawaon ka sama abhi thama nahi
phoolon ka jharna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aankho se khuwabon ka parda hat jane do
neendon se aankhien oujhal ho jane do
raaton me jugna ka chamkna abi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aati jati muskurati yaadon ka tasawar
gaya nahi mere her pal se door
abhi lamhon pe hasraton ka chehra hata nahi
tum na jao rooth ker
wo rahat jo tmhne dekh k mil jati hy
wo betabi jo tere aane se mit jati hy
me kerlon qaid tmko apni aankhon me
tmhen jee bhar k dekhna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum bin kuch nahi
bas aik baat hy mere hoonto pe
k mujhe tmse mohobat hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum na jao rooth ker.........
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welldone buhat khoob likha hai really i like this u stupid

 

[Dawn]

en lamhon se guzarish kerta hy dil
dil ki dhadkno ki aah abhi baki hy
chahaton ka sisila abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
waqt ka karwan abhi ruka nahi
hawaon ka sama abhi thama nahi
phoolon ka jharna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aankho se khuwabon ka parda hat jane do
neendon se aankhien oujhal ho jane do
raaton me jugna ka chamkna abi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aati jati muskurati yaadon ka tasawar
gaya nahi mere her pal se door
abhi lamhon pe hasraton ka chehra hata nahi
tum na jao rooth ker
wo rahat jo tmhne dekh k mil jati hy
wo betabi jo tere aane se mit jati hy
me kerlon qaid tmko apni aankhon me
tmhen jee bhar k dekhna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum bin kuch nahi
bas aik baat hy mere hoonto pe
k mujhe tmse mohobat hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum na jao rooth ker.........
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wow kia baat hai asma aapki lagta hai aap bahot romantic hain.
bahot accha likha keep writing

 

[Dawn]

Tum pass aaye

Youn muskaraye

TUm ne naa jane kya sapne dikhae

Aub to mera dil jage naas sota hai

Kya keron hayeee

SHB kO sub kuch hota hai...

This is my poetry.... Abhi abhi likhi hai..... Umeed hai achi lagi hogi so comments den...:x

Ager achi nahi lagi to apne cmments apne pass rakhen

oho kia likhi hai shoeb aapne.
jo pahle kabhi nahi suni.nice one.

 

[Hoorain]

en lamhon se guzarish kerta hy dil
dil ki dhadkno ki aah abhi baki hy
chahaton ka sisila abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
waqt ka karwan abhi ruka nahi
hawaon ka sama abhi thama nahi
phoolon ka jharna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aankho se khuwabon ka parda hat jane do
neendon se aankhien oujhal ho jane do
raaton me jugna ka chamkna abi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aati jati muskurati yaadon ka tasawar
gaya nahi mere her pal se door
abhi lamhon pe hasraton ka chehra hata nahi
tum na jao rooth ker
wo rahat jo tmhne dekh k mil jati hy
wo betabi jo tere aane se mit jati hy
me kerlon qaid tmko apni aankhon me
tmhen jee bhar k dekhna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum bin kuch nahi
bas aik baat hy mere hoonto pe
k mujhe tmse mohobat hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum na jao rooth ker.........
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ahan likhne ka style acha hay

 

[Sara Cilli Milli]

ary wah u to sayara ban gyi kia potery likhi hy lajawab

 

[Sara Cilli Milli]

agr mjhy poetry likhny ati to mai bhi participate karti par mjhy to likhni bhi nhi ati hy

 

[SHB_Bhaiya]

en lamhon se guzarish kerta hy dil
dil ki dhadkno ki aah abhi baki hy
chahaton ka sisila abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
waqt ka karwan abhi ruka nahi
hawaon ka sama abhi thama nahi
phoolon ka jharna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aankho se khuwabon ka parda hat jane do
neendon se aankhien oujhal ho jane do
raaton me jugna ka chamkna abi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aati jati muskurati yaadon ka tasawar
gaya nahi mere her pal se door
abhi lamhon pe hasraton ka chehra hata nahi
tum na jao rooth ker
wo rahat jo tmhne dekh k mil jati hy
wo betabi jo tere aane se mit jati hy
me kerlon qaid tmko apni aankhon me
tmhen jee bhar k dekhna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum bin kuch nahi
bas aik baat hy mere hoonto pe
k mujhe tmse mohobat hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum na jao rooth ker.........
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wow very nice Asma itni larakooo itni achi poet ho he nahi sakta zaroor meri likhi poetry tumhare hath lag gae hogi....

well jis ki bhi hai superb n awsum.... {(dancing)}

 

[Asma24]

very nice sharing asma sisoooooooooooo

thankuuuu sisoooo

 

[SHB_Bhaiya]

oho kia likhi hai shoeb aapne.
jo pahle kabhi nahi suni.nice one.

Well me kya kahoun apne baare me jitnee bhi tareef kero kum hai

by the way yeah indian movies waloun ne bhi chura lea tha per woh to acha hua aap Indian movies nahi dekhte

 

[Asma24]

welldone buhat khoob likha hai really i like this u stupid

thankuuuu stupidi know ur prayz are with me...

 

[Asma24]

wow kia baat hai asma aapki lagta hai aap bahot romantic hain.
bahot accha likha keep writing

thanxx arshad bhai for ur sweet comments...heheh bhai topic hi zara hatke hy to socha poetry b zara hatke ho...anywaz

 

[NamaL]

thankuuuu sisoooo

u welcome asma sisooooooooooooo

 

[Asma24]

ahan likhne ka style acha hay

thankuuu hoorain

 

[Asma24]

Well me kya kahoun apne baare me jitnee bhi tareef kero kum hai

by the way yeah indian movies waloun ne bhi chura lea tha per woh to acha hua aap Indian movies nahi dekhte

({kopping)}bechara karan johar tmhari poetry ko sun nahi saka shb ..warna aaj tum na jane kahan hote

 

[Asma24]

ary wah u to sayara ban gyi kia potery likhi hy lajawab

han poetry ka bhoot ghus gaya hy sayed{(dancing)}

 

[Asma24]

u welcome asma sisooooooooooooo

so sweet of u dear

 

[Asma24]

agr mjhy poetry likhny ati to mai bhi participate karti par mjhy to likhni bhi nhi ati hy

sara ...kash poetry ki b classez hoti({kopping)}