~TM poet competition~

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Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh

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Walaikum salam wrwb!
Nakaara ka matlab jho kessi kaam ka na ho yaha pe yahi murad hain?
and MashAllah aapke poem buhut achi hain I really like it.. so keep it up.. :)
I am reall sorry for watching it late aur nahin yahan nakaarne se murad inqaar karna hai
i will try my best for continiusely writing thanks and sorry once again
 

lavina

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Lijiye ji hamari taraf se bhi pesh hai umeed hai pasand aayegi


Woh Ashk Ho Ke Barsaat Rone Rulane Mein Tum Yaad Rahe
Kabhi Sang Tanhayi Ke Ashqon Ke Pee Liye The Humne
Kabhi Hansne Muskurane Mein Tum Yaad Rahe
Woh Tumhari Talkhiyan Khaar Phir Taaza Kar Gaye
Aur Ulfaton Ke Sabab Phool Khilane Mein Tum Yaad Rahe
Apni Apni Ulfatein Hai Hum Ab Kya Kahein
Mujhe To Mandir-o-Aastane Mein Tum Yaad Rahe
Kabhi Barf Ki Barsaat Mein Teri Dil Thand Baatein Yaad Aayi
To Kabhi Hamein Dil Ke Jalne Jalane Mein Tum Yaad Rahe
Pehli Milan Ke Baad Tumhein Yaad Kabhi Na Kiya Ke
Har Ghari Har Saans Har Fasane Mein Tum Yaad Rahe
 
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Toobi

dhondo gy molko molko milnay k nae,nayab hum..
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nice tread....but................{)^}){)^})
 

Hoorain

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A n3st!
I am reall sorry for watching it late aur nahin yahan nakaarne se murad inqaar karna hai
i will try my best for continiusely writing thanks and sorry once again
nakara ka matlab yahan ho ya kahi bhi bekaar hi hota hay bro :s

meko to khud parh k confusion hui thi

i guess inkara likhna chahtey thay aap???
agar aisa hay to edit karwa lain
 

Talib

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Assalam O Alaikum

Sorry me ne kafi arse bd thread dkha hai abi mere zehn me yahi shair bn paye hain puri ghazal nai bn ski sorry for that

Hope u like it


Kb talak shab me thi tanhai kuch yad nai
phr aa gai teri yad raha aur kuch yad nai

Chashm e rawan se ashko me kb lahu nikla
Naam tera suna tha bs, aur kuch yad nai

Daikhye kia zulm hua un ki behijabi k sabab
Nikab hata, qayamat ayi aur kuch yad nai
 

Qawareer

میرا خدا ہر روز مجھے نئی خوشیاں دیتا ہے
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hmmmmm..
mashAllah..
saviou,bahaar,hoorain,mohdbinqasim,nello ap sb ki sharing kahan hai...{(nea)}

jaldi share kren..
 
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