~TM poet competition~

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

aik dafa phir bohat khooooob chiragh

eik dafa phir bohot bohot shukria saara{(gimmefive)}

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Masha Allah saif...bohat khoob aap to bare ache shayer hain... Allah kare zor e qalam aur ziyada...

Really thankyou very very much aameen aameen

Ya rab mere qalam ko aisi roshnaai de
jahan jhoot likhun wahan andhera dikhai de

 

[~Bahaar~]

Assalam o alaikum doston humara ghazal peish e khidmat hai aap sab ke
umeed hai mere toote phoote alfaaz per aap loug waah waah kahoge
jisse meri housla afzaiy hi ho jayegi and really thanks very much thanks to
Anaaya ali hum ne apni poetry jab likhna start kiya tha tab humara pehla topic
hi yaad tha hum ne apne eik poore diary per only yaad ke hi muta'aliq likha hai
lekin baad mein phir yaad ko chhod kar aur har topic pe likhte they lekin
Anaaya siso ke is thread ke sabab ALLAH ke hukm se hum ne
phir se yaad topic pe kuch likha hai umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayega........

Hum ne kab yeh nakaara

Hum ne kab yeh nakaara ke tumhein khuda yaad hai
haan tumhein dukhon mein apne woh sada yaad hai

mein to khush hoon ke yeh loug mujhe bewafa jaante hain
guman hai ke shayad inhein mohammad saw ki wafa yaad hai

hum ne na kaha ke majnoon ke charche tum kam kar do magar
per sath kaho ke tadap e laila dard e laila ishq e laila yaad hai

teri laali se larki us laal ke lahoo mein surkhi zyada thi jo kehte mara
ke Pak mulk deeni mulk hai kya tumhein waisa jazbah yaad hai

tum se kis ne kaha ke apne tamaam zouq o shouq se munh pheir lo
sawal yeh tha ke maa ki nafarmaani ki kya hogi saza yaad hai

kyunkar na mar jaun kyun na mein raah e haq mein kat jaun
ke zalim ka dost kaise banun mujh abhi waqia e karbala yaad hai

haq per tum ghaafil la sha'oor o be dil jaane jaate ho ChiragH
inhein eimaan ka hosh nahin tum poochhte ho baab e wafa yaad hai

***S_ChiragH***
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wah wah wah kya baat ahi Chiragh bhayi...
Waqei me aap TM ka chiragh ho..

kyunkar na mar jaun kyun na mein raah e haq mein kat jaun
ke zalim ka dost kaise banun mujh abhi waqia e karbala yaad hai

Zabardast...bahut Umdaaaaaaaa..

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

wah wah wah kya baat ahi Chiragh bhayi...
Waqei me aap TM ka chiragh ho..

kyunkar na mar jaun kyun na mein raah e haq mein kat jaun
ke zalim ka dost kaise banun mujh abhi waqia e karbala yaad hai

Zabardast...bahut Umdaaaaaaaa..

Achha siso yeh to breaking newz hai anywayz
thanks for liking and for lovely comments

 

[Sabah]

Assalam o alaikum doston humara ghazal peish e khidmat hai aap sab ke
umeed hai mere toote phoote alfaaz per aap loug waah waah kahoge
jisse meri housla afzaiy hi ho jayegi and really thanks very much thanks to
Anaaya ali hum ne apni poetry jab likhna start kiya tha tab humara pehla topic
hi yaad tha hum ne apne eik poore diary per only yaad ke hi muta'aliq likha hai
lekin baad mein phir yaad ko chhod kar aur har topic pe likhte they lekin
Anaaya siso ke is thread ke sabab ALLAH ke hukm se hum ne
phir se yaad topic pe kuch likha hai umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayega........

Hum ne kab yeh nakaara

Hum ne kab yeh nakaara ke tumhein khuda yaad hai
haan tumhein dukhon mein apne woh sada yaad hai

mein to khush hoon ke yeh loug mujhe bewafa jaante hain
guman hai ke shayad inhein mohammad saw ki wafa yaad hai

hum ne na kaha ke majnoon ke charche tum kam kar do magar
per sath kaho ke tadap e laila dard e laila ishq e laila yaad hai

teri laali se larki us laal ke lahoo mein surkhi zyada thi jo kehte mara
ke Pak mulk deeni mulk hai kya tumhein waisa jazbah yaad hai

tum se kis ne kaha ke apne tamaam zouq o shouq se munh pheir lo
sawal yeh tha ke maa ki nafarmaani ki kya hogi saza yaad hai

kyunkar na mar jaun kyun na mein raah e haq mein kat jaun
ke zalim ka dost kaise banun mujh abhi waqia e karbala yaad hai

haq per tum ghaafil la sha'oor o be dil jaane jaate ho ChiragH
inhein eimaan ka hosh nahin tum poochhte ho baab e wafa yaad hai

***S_ChiragH***​

Walaikum salam wrwb!
Nakaara ka matlab jho kessi kaam ka na ho yaha pe yahi murad hain?
and MashAllah aapke poem buhut achi hain I really like it.. so keep it up..

 

[Qawareer]

competition k baki boht km din reh gye hain abi tak Sirf ek sharing...baki sb kahan hai??????????

 

[Atif-adi]

anu me shayeri to likhu per me to songs wali hi shayeri kerta hun kya wesa shaeri share ker sakta hun?

 

[Qawareer]

anu me shayeri to likhu per me to songs wali hi shayeri kerta hun kya wesa shaeri share ker sakta hun?

han ji..ap woh b kr sakte hain..lekin shairy b lge.,,
jaldi share krna

 

[Atif-adi]

han ji..ap woh b kr sakte hain..lekin shairy b lge.,,
jaldi share krna

shyeri bhi lage matlab?
anu jese pakistani vehcles k piche likhi hoti hai us se to better hi hogi

 

[Atif-adi]

ek chota sa shair arz kia hai yaad per,

mulahiza ki jiye,

teri yaad me pal pal tarapta hun me farzana,

zara ghor farmana,

teri yaad me pal pal tarapta hun me farzana,

A for apple, B for banana ...

 

[Sabah]

Hmmmm hame poetry athe tu zaroor hessa lete, baki saviou and baki aur bhi poet hain yaha pe so where are they?

 

[Sabah]

ek chota sa shair arz kia hai yaad per,

mulahiza ki jiye,

teri yaad me pal pal tarapta hun me farzana,

zara ghor farmana,

teri yaad me pal pal tarapta hun me farzana,

A for apple, B for banana ...

haha buhut khob I mean awesome.. by the way who is ferzana?

 

[Dreamy Boy]

Mein tumhe pyaar ke teen lafz kehna chahta hoon... woh teen Lafz jo tumhara dil tak pahooch kar, tumhe gehraayi tak chhooh jaye. Yeh teen Lafz mere dil se nikal kar, tumhara dil par zaroor chhah jayenge. Ab sunlo yeh pyaar ke teen Lafz - \"Pakistan Zinda Baad\".

 

[Qawareer]

hmmmm hame poetry athe tu zaroor hessa lete, baki saviou and baki aur bhi poet hain yaha pe so where are they?

chalen khair siso...

han g..main b yahi poch rhi hon...kahan hain sb?????

 

[Dreamy Boy]

chalen khair siso...

han g..main b yahi poch rhi hon...kahan hain sb?????

fmmmmmmmmmm

 

[Qawareer]

shyeri bhi lage matlab?
Anu jese pakistani vehcles k piche likhi hoti hai us se to better hi hogi

jese song me shairy hoti hai woh b chale gi..
Kuch b likhen lekin shairy ho or topic k mutabik ho..

 

[Qawareer]

ek chota sa shair arz kia hai yaad per,

mulahiza ki jiye,

teri yaad me pal pal tarapta hun me farzana,

zara ghor farmana,

teri yaad me pal pal tarapta hun me farzana,

A for apple, B for banana ...

hihihi../
khair ab esi b na ho..

 

[Dreamy Boy]

dil ke zakhmo ko jab koi shayri kahe.
To dard nahi hota;
takleef to tab hoti hai ,,
jab koi waah waah krta ha
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[Qawareer]

dil ke zakhmo ko jab koi shayri kahe.
To dard nahi hota;
takleef to tab hoti hai ,,
jab koi waah waah krta ha
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DB competition ka thread hai..paglon ka mushaira nhi ho rah...

 

[Dreamy Boy]

jo kheta hai wohi hota hai