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Assalm u alaikum wrwb
umeed hai Alhamdulillah ap zindgi ko behtareen andaz me ji rahe ho ge..
main shairy me ap k liye ek muqalba ly kr aayi hon..
jis me apko ek topic diya jaye ga..
is topic k mutaliq apko shairy likh kr yahan share krni hai
apko is muqable me jo topic diya ja rha hai.. woh hai
"YAAD"
ap yaad/yaadain se mutaliq koi b shairy likh kr share kr sakte hain.

Rules:
1=shairy apki apni likhi huvi ho.
2=shairy Nazm,Ghazal ya aazad nazm kisi b surat me ho sakti hai.
3=jo shairy ap is muqable k liye share kren woh pehle kisi jaga share na ki gyi ho.
4=ek member sirf ek hi sharing kr sakta hai.
5=sharing krne ki akhri tareekh 27 july hai.
umeed hai ap bharpor shirkat kren ge..:)
best of luck:)
 
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Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb :)
masha Allah bohot acha silsila shuru kiya hai anu apne

hamari taraf se ek sujhao bhi hai agar sahi lage to is par gaur karen
iske jeetne wale k liye aap award bhi rakhen jisse sabme dilchaspi hogi inshaAllah
 
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saviou said:
Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb :)
masha Allah bohot acha silsila shuru kiya hai anu apne

hamari taraf se ek sujhao bhi hai agar sahi lage to is par gaur karen
iske jeetne wale k liye aap award bhi rakhen jisse sabme dilchaspi hogi inshaAllah
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ji bilkul bhai..
main ne pehle wale competition k liye b rakha tha lekin abi RR sis hi nhi aayi...woh winner ko Award zarur den gi..:)

apki sharing ka intazar rhe ga
 
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walikum As salam.................
hahahhaa...Azaad Nazm...bole to no radeef no qafia....
Different person ko dawat e khaas ata farmayen:)):))
Anyway apun shayera toh nahi magar aye Annu jabse dekha meine ye thread likhne ka khyal agaya...{(wacko)}
Funny bhi chalegi kya?
 
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~Bahaar~ said:
walikum As salam.................
hahahhaa...Azaad Nazm...bole to no radeef no qafia....
Different person ko dawat e khaas ata farmayen:)):))
Anyway apun shayera toh nahi magar aye Annu jabse dekha meine ye thread likhne ka khyal agaya...{(wacko)}
Funny bhi chalegi kya?
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sb chale ga..lekin topic yaad hona chaheye...
Azaad Nazm me b kuch zabte hote hain madam..ye na ho k woh Nazm na bal'k Nasr lge..muqble me shairy k asolon ka khas khayalrakha jaye ga..is liye likhte huve is baat ka khas khayal rakhen..is waja se marks na km hon kise k..
 
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nazm,ghazal khud ki likhi hui.
lagta hai aap yahan sabko shayer banakar hi chorengi.
inshaAllah main zaroor koshish karunga.
laikin marks acche dena ok.
 
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mohdbinqasim said:
nazm,ghazal khud ki likhi hui.
lagta hai aap yahan sabko shayer banakar hi chorengi.
inshaAllah main zaroor koshish karunga.
laikin marks acche dena ok.
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han g...:)
dekh len..main sb ka chupa huva talent bahir nikalne ki har mumkin koshish kr rhi hon:)
ji zarur inshaAllah..muje intazar rhe ga..ap achi koshish kren ge to inshaAllah ache marks aayen ge..:)
 
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Anaaya Ali said:
Assalm u alaikum wrwb
umeed hai Alhamdulillah ap zindgi ko behtareen andaz me ji rahe ho ge..
main shairy me ap k liye ek muqalba ly kr aayi hon..
jis me apko ek topic diya jaye ga..
is topic k mutaliq apko shairy likh kr yahan share krni hai
apko is muqable me jo topic diya ja rha hai.. woh hai
"YAAD"
ap yaad/yaadain se mutaliq koi b shairy likh kr share kr sakte hain.

Rules:
1=shairy apki apni likhi huvi ho.
2=shairy Nazm,Ghazal ya aazad nazm kisi b surat me ho sakti hai.
3=jo shairy ap is muqable k liye share kren woh pehle kisi jaga share na ki gyi ho.
4=ek member sirf ek hi sharing kr sakta hai.
5=sharing krne ki akhri tareekh 27 july hai.
umeed hai ap bharpor shirkat kren ge..:)
best of luck:)
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waah ji waah kya hi umdaah silsila start kiya gaya hai
bilkul dil pasand bohot hi maza aayega is mein to

Thanks for the awesome muqabla's beginning annu ji
 
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Anaaya Ali said:
ji bilkul bhai..
main ne pehle wale competition k liye b rakha tha lekin abi RR sis hi nhi aayi...woh winner ko Award zarur den gi..:)

apki sharing ka intazar rhe ga
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inshaAllah waqt se pehle share karne ki koshihs karenge :)
 
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inshaAllah..:)
 
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jaldi hi koshish kijiye ga..din boht km hain..ek week hi hai baki..
 
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Assalam o alaikum doston humara ghazal peish e khidmat hai aap sab ke
umeed hai mere toote phoote alfaaz per aap loug waah waah kahoge
jisse meri housla afzaiy hi ho jayegi and really thanks very much thanks to
Anaaya ali hum ne apni poetry jab likhna start kiya tha tab humara pehla topic
hi yaad tha hum ne apne eik poore diary per only yaad ke hi muta'aliq likha hai
lekin baad mein phir yaad ko chhod kar aur har topic pe likhte they lekin
Anaaya siso ke is thread ke sabab ALLAH ke hukm se hum ne
phir se yaad topic pe kuch likha hai umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayega........

Hum ne kab yeh inakaara

Hum ne kab yeh nakaara ke tumhein khuda yaad hai
haan tumhein dukhon mein apne woh sada yaad hai

mein to khush hoon ke yeh loug mujhe bewafa jaante hain
guman hai ke shayad inhein mohammad saw ki wafa yaad hai

hum ne na kaha ke majnoon ke charche tum kam kar do magar
per sath kaho ke tadap e laila dard e laila ishq e laila yaad hai

teri laali se larki us laal ke lahoo mein surkhi zyada thi jo kehte mara
ke Pak mulk deeni mulk hai kya tumhein waisa jazbah yaad hai

tum se kis ne kaha ke apne tamaam zouq o shouq se munh pheir lo
sawal yeh tha ke maa ki nafarmaani ki kya hogi saza yaad hai

kyunkar na mar jaun kyun na mein raah e haq mein kat jaun
ke zalim ka dost kaise banun mujh abhi waqia e karbala yaad hai

haq per tum ghaafil la sha'oor o be dil jaane jaate ho ChiragH
inhein eimaan ka hosh nahin tum poochhte ho baab e wafa yaad hai

***S_ChiragH***​
 
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S_ChiragH said:
Assalam o alaikum doston humara ghazal peish e khidmat hai aap sab ke
umeed hai mere toote phoote alfaaz per aap loug waah waah kahoge
jisse meri housla afzaiy hi ho jayegi and really thanks very much thanks to
Anaaya ali hum ne apni poetry jab likhna start kiya tha tab humara pehla topic
hi yaad tha hum ne apne eik poore diary per only yaad ke hi muta'aliq likha hai
lekin baad mein phir yaad ko chhod kar aur har topic pe likhte they lekin
Anaaya siso ke is thread ke sabab ALLAH ke hukm se hum ne
phir se yaad topic pe kuch likha hai umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayega........

Hum ne kab yeh nakaara

Hum ne kab yeh nakaara ke tumhein khuda yaad hai
haan tumhein dukhon mein apne woh sada yaad hai

mein to khush hoon ke yeh loug mujhe bewafa jaante hain
guman hai ke shayad inhein mohammad saw ki wafa yaad hai

hum ne na kaha ke majnoon ke charche tum kam kar do magar
per sath kaho ke tadap e laila dard e laila ishq e laila yaad hai

teri laali se larki us laal ke lahoo mein surkhi zyada thi jo kehte mara
ke Pak mulk deeni mulk hai kya tumhein waisa jazbah yaad hai

tum se kis ne kaha ke apne tamaam zouq o shouq se munh pheir lo
sawal yeh tha ke maa ki nafarmaani ki kya hogi saza yaad hai

kyunkar na mar jaun kyun na mein raah e haq mein kat jaun
ke zalim ka dost kaise banun mujh abhi waqia e karbala yaad hai

haq per tum ghaafil la sha'oor o be dil jaane jaate ho ChiragH
inhein eimaan ka hosh nahin tum poochhte ho baab e wafa yaad hai

***S_ChiragH***​
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Masha Allah saif...bohat khoob aap to bare ache shayer hain... Allah kare zor e qalam aur ziyada... :)
 
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