roshni kabhi bujhti nai

[Khwahish]

wowwwww
nice work Adi bro
keep it up

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

asalam walikum wa rehmatullahi wabaraktu
kese hain ap sab dost?

abhi kuch der pehle mene DB ka ek photoshp work dekha,
to socha kuch us ko explain kerta hun,
jo bhi us me dikhta hai mujhe,

ye ek choti c koshish hai,
me koi poet nai,
poetry k usolu ka mujeh ilm nai hai
to ager kahi koi ghalti hui ho to
mazrat khwa hun...

ye DB ka photoshop work

ye rahi huamri shayeri
roshni kabhi bujhti nai

bijli ki tarey bhi hain,
mager in me bijli nai
andhera charo taraf hai,
roshni kahi dikhti nai,
ao dost chalo chale,
duur bagh me kahi,
k asman k chand sitaro ki,
roshni kabhi bujhti nai ...


kuch aditional lines...
lakh ho pareshani mumino,
sajdo se ye sir hatao nai.
k mah-e-ramazan abhi baki hai,
rehmato ka darwaza abhi band nai...
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Wa'alaikum assalam

bohot hi umdaah soch aur koshish hai atif bhai ghaltion ke bina strong experience thorai hasil hota hai

 

[mashraki.larka]

Superb JOB Adi .. & Mashallah Cute poetry

 

[Atif-adi]

But DB ki Tasweer se nainsaafi ki apne...
pucho kyunnn?

kyu?

 

[Atif-adi]

Ricshaw aur truck k picahy jo shayeri hoti hai bahut umda aur manjhi hui hoti hai janab..To aap kahan wahan...?

han u ho na richkshaw k piche jo likhne wale hote hian un ki incharge {(nea)}

 

[~Bahaar~]

kyu?

Masoom Kavvon ka zikr kya apni poetry me?very bad...{(nea)}

 

[~Bahaar~]

han u ho na richkshaw k piche jo likhne wale hote hian un ki incharge {(nea)}

Mei to bas sabki islah karti hun..zer zabar ki...
Koi mera ehsan hi nahi manta?{)^}){)^})

 

[Fa!th]

bhttt acha likha hai adi keep it up xD

 

[Atif-adi]

u ka bhi ziker kerna tha uff

Masoom Kavvon ka zikr kya apni poetry me?very bad...{(nea)}

 

[Atif-adi]

Mei to bas sabki islah karti hun..zer zabar ki...
Koi mera ehsan hi nahi manta?{)^}){)^})

ehsan hai apkaaa {(oh0(}

 

[Atif-adi]

bhttt acha likha hai adi keep it up xD

thanku dear

 

[Qawareer]

wssalam u alaikum
hmmmm.boht khoob Adi..
main ne to ab dekha..uper wale shair parh k bijli k jane ka khayal aata haiboht ache andaz me bayan kia..
neche jo shair likha boht umdah

likhte rahen..

and nice work DB

 

[Atif-adi]

wssalam u alaikum
hmmmm.boht khoob Adi..
main ne to ab dekha..uper wale shair parh k bijli k jane ka khayal aata haiboht ache andaz me bayan kia..
neche jo shair likha boht umdah

likhte rahen..

and nice work DB

thnx anu
u ne appriciate kerlia meri mehnat safal hogai {(oh0(}

 

[Qawareer]

inshaAllah ap boht jald or acha likhen ge..

 

[~Bahaar~]

inshaAllah ap boht jald or acha likhen ge..

To iska matlab abb acha nahi likhte...hai naa..saaf saaf kaho naa..Shawaal me lapetkar na maara karo Annu..

 

[~Bahaar~]

u ka bhi ziker kerna tha uff

Kavvay male hote hain...

 

[~Bahaar~]

ehsan hai apkaaa {(oh0(}

Jeete Raho Baccha...humare shishye bane rahoge to yunhi safalta prapt hogi

 

[Atif-adi]

inshaAllah ap boht jald or acha likhen ge..

thnx acha acha feel ho raha hai ab me ko

 

[Atif-adi]

Kavvay male hote hain...

to phir female kawa ko kya kehte hain?

 

[Atif-adi]

Jeete Raho Baccha...humare shishye bane rahoge to yunhi safalta prapt hogi

kya matlab hai is ka?