roshni kabhi bujhti nai

[~Bahaar~]

AB RISHTA BAN RAHA HAI

huhhhhh....
Jab banjaye to inform karna.....{(pillow fight)}{(pillow fight)}

 

[Dreamy Boy]

SAMJHO BAN gaya hai

 

[~Bahaar~]

SAMJHO BAN gaya hai

Theek ahi theek ahi...abb dekho Kaise kaise kaam dungi Farasat k bacchay...

 

[Dreamy Boy]

Theek ahi theek ahi...abb dekho Kaise kaise kaam dungi Farasat k bacchay...

nahe mai farasat ka bacha nahe original farasat hi hun

 

[Entertainer]

Adi great yaar . *. . *.


logon ki baton par mat jana . . *. . *. i know . . . . *
aisey he likhney ki shuruwat hoti he, . . *. aur baad mein khud ba khud he deep ana shuru hojaati he, kalaam mein . *.. . *.*

kuchh to log kahenge, logaane kaa kaam hain kahanaa
*chhoro, bekaar kee baato mein , kahee beet naa jaaye rainaa . . *.


aur jo samgha rahey hein tumhein . *. . *unkey to jaisey deewan chap chukey hein . . *.yan woh konsa chacha ghalib k khandas se belongs karty hein . *. . *. *.. tanqeed krna kam he unka . *. . . *. .*

 

[Nelly]

nice qork both ov u

 

[Atif-adi]

kinta cool?

kewL...

 

[Atif-adi]

shukriya bhai jaan

Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb
masha Allah bohot khoob bro

 

[Atif-adi]

thnx hassu bhai

bohat khoob janab

 

[Atif-adi]

ohhhh wowowow ap nae meri image ko dehk kar poetry likhe hai wah kya baat hai{(oh0(}
mtlb waqai mai meri image hai khas baat hai

ap nae tu bohat ache sai define kiya bro meri banaye hue image ko thanks
bohat zabardast likha hai

thanku DB bas kabhi kabhi shayeri ka shok hojata hai hume bhi

 

[Atif-adi]

ye work DB or mene hi kia hia bro kisi kamal ne nai lols thanx bro

walakumsalam..
bohot acha likha hai adi...aur db bro ka work bhi kamal ka hai..
keep it up both of u..

 

[Atif-adi]

hmm thnx sona u ko pasand aya to achi hi hogi na

walikum salam

bht hi acha likha hai u na Adi

sply last lines


[GLOW=Red]lakh ho pareshani mumino,
sajdo se ye sir hatao nai.
k mah-e-ramazan abhi baki hai,
rehmato ka darwaza abhi band nai...[/GLOW]

stay blessed
​

 

[Atif-adi]

thnx chiriyaaaaaa

ZABARDAST aDI
gud work
​

 

[Atif-adi]

wah wah wah...................
DB ka work apni jagah satayesh k layek hai...lekin ye DB k image se ap mohtaram ki ek line bhi nahi milti...
Waise apki shayeri ki daad deni paregi....75% achi lagi....Well Done

dekho shayer bura ho sakta hun per artist bura nai, mujhse zada tasweero me koi nai doob sakta, me her rung se le ker her tasweer k pehlo ko feel kerta hun{(nea)}

 

[Atif-adi]

ab esa to nai kaho, kam se kam rickshaw or trucks k piche ki shyeri to likh hi sakta hun {)^})

Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Aisa sochna bhi nahi kabhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

 

[Atif-adi]

bht bht shukiyra bro asal me tankeed se me nai ghabrata takeed barae tameer ho to koi harj nai, mene to khud kaha hai k jise bhi jo bhi ghalti lagti hia to wo batae, isi tarha to hum apne ap ko sahi ker sakte hain bro , jo apki ghaltia nikale wo apka dushman nai dost hota hai

Adi great yaar . *. . *.


logon ki baton par mat jana . . *. . *. i know . . . . *
aisey he likhney ki shuruwat hoti he, . . *. aur baad mein khud ba khud he deep ana shuru hojaati he, kalaam mein . *.. . *.*

kuchh to log kahenge, logaane kaa kaam hain kahanaa
*chhoro, bekaar kee baato mein , kahee beet naa jaaye rainaa . . *.


aur jo samgha rahey hein tumhein . *. . *unkey to jaisey deewan chap chukey hein . . *.yan woh konsa chacha ghalib k khandas se belongs karty hein . *. . *. *.. tanqeed krna kam he unka . *. . . *. .*

 

[Atif-adi]

nice qork both ov u

thnx nelllllllllluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu {(gimmefive)}

 

[~Bahaar~]

dekho shayer bura ho sakta hun per artist bura nai, mujhse zada tasweero me koi nai doob sakta, me her rung se le ker her tasweer k pehlo ko feel kerta hun{(nea)}

But DB ki Tasweer se nainsaafi ki apne...
pucho kyunnn?

 

[~Bahaar~]

ab esa to nai kaho, kam se kam rickshaw or trucks k piche ki shyeri to likh hi sakta hun {)^})

Ricshaw aur truck k picahy jo shayeri hoti hai bahut umda aur manjhi hui hoti hai janab..To aap kahan wahan...?

 

[mirza37]

nice shairing adi bhai ap jaldi jaldi sehat yab ho ker ak achi image banaker shair kero,,{(gimmefive)}