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Atif-adi

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asalam walikum wa rehmatullahi wabaraktu
kese hain ap sab dost?
:) :) :)
abhi kuch der pehle mene DB ka ek photoshp work dekha,
to socha kuch us ko explain kerta hun,
jo bhi us me dikhta hai mujhe,

ye ek choti c koshish hai,
me koi poet nai,
poetry k usolu ka mujeh ilm nai hai
to ager kahi koi ghalti hui ho to
mazrat khwa hun...

ye DB ka photoshop work


ye rahi huamri shayeri
roshni kabhi bujhti nai

bijli ki tarey bhi hain,
mager in me bijli nai
andhera charo taraf hai,
roshni kahi dikhti nai,
ao dost chalo chale,
duur bagh me kahi,
k asman k chand sitaro ki,
roshni kabhi bujhti nai ...


kuch aditional lines...
lakh ho pareshani mumino,
sajdo se ye sir hatao nai.
k mah-e-ramazan abhi baki hai,
rehmato ka darwaza abhi band nai...
​
 
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Atif-adi said:
asalam walikum wa rehmatullahi wabaraktu
kese hain ap sab dost?
:) :) :)
abhi kuch der pehle mene DB ka ek photoshp work dekha,
to socha kuch us ko explain kerta hun,
jo bhi us me dikhta hai mujhe,

ye ek choti c koshish hai,
me koi poet nai,
poetry k usolu ka mujeh ilm nai hai
to ager kahi koi ghalti hui ho to
mazrat khwa hun...

ye DB ka photoshop work


ye rahi huamri shayeri
roshni kabhi bujhti nai

bijli ki tarey bhi hain,
mager in me bijli nai
andhera charo taraf hai,
roshni kahi dikhti nai,
ao dost chalo chale,
duur bagh me kahi,
k asman k chand sitaro ki,
roshni kabhi bujhti nai ...


kuch aditional lines...
lakh ho pareshani mumino,
sajdo se ye sir hatao nai.
k mah-e-ramazan abhi baki hai,
rehmato ka darwaza abhi band nai...
​
Click to expand...
hahaha

wowww superb adi bro ekia zabardast explain kiya DB bro k bnaye img ko wah wah cha gaye ho :-bd

lakh ho pareshani mumino,
sajdo se ye sir hatao nai.
k mah-e-ramazan abhi baki hai,
rehmato ka darwaza abhi band nai...

MASHAALLAH superb:)
 
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hoorain said:
hahaha

wowww superb adi bro ekia zabardast explain kiya DB bro k bnaye img ko wah wah cha gaye ho :-bd

lakh ho pareshani mumino,
sajdo se ye sir hatao nai.
k mah-e-ramazan abhi baki hai,
rehmato ka darwaza abhi band nai...

MASHAALLAH superb:)
Click to expand...
shukriya moharma :p

ye sab anu ka kia dhara hai sab ko shayer bana dia {(doh)}
 
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ohhhh wowowow ap nae meri image ko dehk kar poetry likhe hai wah kya baat hai{(oh0(}
mtlb waqai mai meri image hai khas baat hai{(ok)}

ap nae tu bohat ache sai define kiya bro meri banaye hue image ko thanks:)
bohat zabardast likha hai:-bd
 
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*Sonu*

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walikum salam
:)
bht hi acha likha hai u na Adi
:)
sply last lines
:)

[GLOW=Red]lakh ho pareshani mumino,
sajdo se ye sir hatao nai.
k mah-e-ramazan abhi baki hai,
rehmato ka darwaza abhi band nai...[/GLOW]

stay blessed
:)​
 
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wah wah wah...................
DB ka work apni jagah satayesh k layek hai...lekin ye DB k image se ap mohtaram ki ek line bhi nahi milti...{(wacko)}
Waise apki shayeri ki daad deni paregi....75% achi lagi....Well Done
 
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