Poet Of The Month February 2013

Jahil · Feb 16, 2013

Sabah said:
MashAllah superb poetry duffer aur mai surprise nai hu k yeh aapnay he likha hai because yeh aapnay likha hai and to be honest buhut he zaberdast likha hai MashAllah aur mujhay MSC ne already padh ker sunaya thi aapke poetry so tabhe sunker buhut acha laga and abhi comment ker rahe hu.. brilliant poem so keep it up...

thank u alote sabahhhhhhhhhh for ur precious wordsssssssss

Sabah · Feb 16, 2013

DuFFer said:
thank u alote sabahhhhhhhhhh for ur precious wordsssssssss

you really deserve to be appriciated..

Jahil · Feb 16, 2013

thank u sabah

faari · Feb 16, 2013

Rubi said:
lol dekha chalakoooooooooo

chandalooo main ne hi bataya hai 20 tak ka {(moc)}

Rubi · Feb 16, 2013

faari said:
chandalooo main ne hi bataya hai 20 tak ka

lol bachon k saath aisi zuban nii bolti baji {}{5tr

Rubi · Feb 17, 2013

... @S_ChiragH @faari @hoorain @Fa!th

Main actually aisa e kch socha tha jysa fari darling ny share kiya ;))

bt fahadd bro & fari donon ki nazam thi so ab main ghazal likh k share kr rhi hun

achi na lagy toh bataana

agr apna hashar nashar krwana hy toh /:)

Mujhy lahu pr lahu-luhan sy acha word nii suja

Sharm-o-haya ky pardy mein lipti gairat lahu-luhan hy ,

Tery ghar ky kony mein simti pari izzat lahu-luhan hy ,

Kahin nanhe-paudy pr sy hy paed ka saya uth gaya ,

Kahin be-zubaan bachy ki masumiyat lahu-luhan hy ,

Jhoot ko chupany ki mijalen pakar rahin hyn zor ,

Aaj sach kehny ki himmat lahu-luhan hy ,

Kahin daulat ki hawis , Koi bhuka shohrat ka ,

Ae shehr-e-khwahish teri badolat insaniyat lahu-luhan hy ,

Hasad sy chalni hy har kaleja yahan ,

Aaj bhai-chary ki riwayat lahu-luhan hy ,

Khaak-nasheenon mein hy akad chit'tanon ki si ,

Qaum ko sudharny chali hakumat ' lahu-luhan hy ... !

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Guneh-gari mein inteha kr chuka jo ,

Us musalman ki ibadat lahu-luhan hy ... !

Fa!th · Feb 17, 2013

Rubi said:
... @S_ChiragH @faari @hoorain @Fa!th

Main actually aisa e kch socha tha jysa fari darling ny share kiya
bt fahadd bro & fari donon ki nazam thi so ab main ghazal likh k share kr rhi hun
achi na lagy toh bataana agr apna hashar nashar krwana hy toh

Mujhy lahu pr lahu-luhan sy acha word nii suja

Sharm-o-haya ky pardy mein lipti gairat lahu-luhan hy ,
Tery ghar ky kony mein simti pari izzat lahu-luhan hy ,

Kahin nanhe-paudy pr sy hy paed ka saya uth gaya ,
Kahin be-zubaan bachy ki masumiyat lahu-luhan hy ,

Jhoot ko chupany ki mijalen pakar rahin hyn zor ,
Aaj sach kehny ki himmat lahu-luhan hy ,

Kahin daulat ki hawis , Koi bhuka shohrat ka ,
Ae shehr-e-khwahish teri badolat insaniyat lahu-luhan hy ,

Hasad sy chalni hy har kaleja yahan ,
Aaj bhai-chary ki riwayat lahu-luhan hy ,
Khaak-nasheenon mein hy akad chit'tanon ki si ,
Qaum ko sudharny chali hakumat ' lahu-luhan hy ... !

[DOUBLEPOST=1361103343][/DOUBLEPOST]

Guneh-gari mein inteha kr chuka jo ,
Us musalman ki ibadat lahu-luhan hy ... !

wah wah wahhh kya baat hai rubi tumhari tou ghzal bhi lahu-lahan hai

all the best {}{43r5

Rubi · Feb 17, 2013

Fa!th said:
wah wah wahhh kya baat hai rubi tumhari tou ghzal bhi lahu-lahan hai
all the best

haha .. i knw bahut funny lg rha hy yeh word

Fa!th · Feb 17, 2013

Rubi said:
haha .. i knw bahut funny lg rha hy yeh word

sirf wahi word lag rha hai baki k wordings achey hai
waise tumne choose ki thi yeh word kya ?

Rubi · Feb 17, 2013

Fa!th said:
sirf wahi word lag rha hai baki k wordings achey hai
waise tumne choose ki thi yeh word kya ?

arry nahin ... word chiragh ny di thi

uspy e likhna tha {(suicide)}

Aayat · Feb 17, 2013

Rubi said:
... @S_ChiragH @faari @hoorain @Fa!th

Main actually aisa e kch socha tha jysa fari darling ny share kiya
bt fahadd bro & fari donon ki nazam thi so ab main ghazal likh k share kr rhi hun
achi na lagy toh bataana agr apna hashar nashar krwana hy toh

Mujhy lahu pr lahu-luhan sy acha word nii suja

Sharm-o-haya ky pardy mein lipti gairat lahu-luhan hy ,
Tery ghar ky kony mein simti pari izzat lahu-luhan hy ,

Kahin nanhe-paudy pr sy hy paed ka saya uth gaya ,
Kahin be-zubaan bachy ki masumiyat lahu-luhan hy ,

Jhoot ko chupany ki mijalen pakar rahin hyn zor ,
Aaj sach kehny ki himmat lahu-luhan hy ,

Kahin daulat ki hawis , Koi bhuka shohrat ka ,
Ae shehr-e-khwahish teri badolat insaniyat lahu-luhan hy ,

Hasad sy chalni hy har kaleja yahan ,
Aaj bhai-chary ki riwayat lahu-luhan hy ,
Khaak-nasheenon mein hy akad chit'tanon ki si ,
Qaum ko sudharny chali hakumat ' lahu-luhan hy ... !

[DOUBLEPOST=1361103343][/DOUBLEPOST]

Guneh-gari mein inteha kr chuka jo ,
Us musalman ki ibadat lahu-luhan hy ... !

waooo bht hi acha likha ap ne Masha ALLAH i realy like ur thinking !

Rubi · Feb 17, 2013

Aayat said:
waooo bht hi acha likha ap ne Masha ALLAH i realy like ur thinking !

thnx

Hoorain · Feb 17, 2013

Rubi said:
... @S_ChiragH @faari @hoorain @Fa!th

Main actually aisa e kch socha tha jysa fari darling ny share kiya
bt fahadd bro & fari donon ki nazam thi so ab main ghazal likh k share kr rhi hun
achi na lagy toh bataana agr apna hashar nashar krwana hy toh

Mujhy lahu pr lahu-luhan sy acha word nii suja

Sharm-o-haya ky pardy mein lipti gairat lahu-luhan hy ,
Tery ghar ky kony mein simti pari izzat lahu-luhan hy ,

Kahin nanhe-paudy pr sy hy paed ka saya uth gaya ,
Kahin be-zubaan bachy ki masumiyat lahu-luhan hy ,

Jhoot ko chupany ki mijalen pakar rahin hyn zor ,
Aaj sach kehny ki himmat lahu-luhan hy ,

Kahin daulat ki hawis , Koi bhuka shohrat ka ,
Ae shehr-e-khwahish teri badolat insaniyat lahu-luhan hy ,

Hasad sy chalni hy har kaleja yahan ,
Aaj bhai-chary ki riwayat lahu-luhan hy ,
Khaak-nasheenon mein hy akad chit'tanon ki si ,
Qaum ko sudharny chali hakumat ' lahu-luhan hy ... !

[DOUBLEPOST=1361103343][/DOUBLEPOST]

Guneh-gari mein inteha kr chuka jo ,
Us musalman ki ibadat lahu-luhan hy ... !

Hasad sy chalni hy har kaleja yahan ,
Aaj bhai-chary ki riwayat lahu-luhan hy ,
Khaak-nasheenon mein hy akad chit'tanon ki si ,
Qaum ko sudharny chali hakumat ' lahu-luhan hy ... !
superbbbbb @Rubi
too gud u kinni achi shayra ho MASHAALLAH :-bd

bohat zabardast khyalat aur bohat ache se likha apa ne proud of u

Gud Luck

Rubi · Feb 17, 2013

hoorain said:
Hasad sy chalni hy har kaleja yahan ,
Aaj bhai-chary ki riwayat lahu-luhan hy ,
Khaak-nasheenon mein hy akad chit'tanon ki si ,
Qaum ko sudharny chali hakumat ' lahu-luhan hy ... !
superbbbbb @Rubi
too gud u kinni achi shayra ho MASHAALLAH
bohat zabardast khyalat aur bohat ache se likha apa ne proud of u
Gud Luck

Oh... thnku thnku ;;)

Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh · Feb 17, 2013

Anhaan MASHA'ALLAH behad khoobsurat
ghazal @Rubi aur bilkul bhi funny nahin
lag rahi hai wording : ) balke bohot hi
khoobsurat shayari hai

Rubi · Feb 17, 2013

S_ChiragH said:
Anhaan MASHA'ALLAH behad khoobsurat
ghazal @Rubi aur bilkul bhi funny nahin
lag rahi hai wording : ) balke bohot hi
khoobsurat shayari hai

hmm thnx

@saviou @Mahen

saviou · Feb 17, 2013

Rubi said:
... @S_ChiragH @faari @hoorain @Fa!th

Main actually aisa e kch socha tha jysa fari darling ny share kiya
bt fahadd bro & fari donon ki nazam thi so ab main ghazal likh k share kr rhi hun
achi na lagy toh bataana agr apna hashar nashar krwana hy toh

Mujhy lahu pr lahu-luhan sy acha word nii suja

Sharm-o-haya ky pardy mein lipti gairat lahu-luhan hy ,
Tery ghar ky kony mein simti pari izzat lahu-luhan hy ,

Kahin nanhe-paudy pr sy hy paed ka saya uth gaya ,
Kahin be-zubaan bachy ki masumiyat lahu-luhan hy ,

Jhoot ko chupany ki mijalen pakar rahin hyn zor ,
Aaj sach kehny ki himmat lahu-luhan hy ,

Kahin daulat ki hawis , Koi bhuka shohrat ka ,
Ae shehr-e-khwahish teri badolat insaniyat lahu-luhan hy ,

Hasad sy chalni hy har kaleja yahan ,
Aaj bhai-chary ki riwayat lahu-luhan hy ,
Khaak-nasheenon mein hy akad chit'tanon ki si ,
Qaum ko sudharny chali hakumat ' lahu-luhan hy ... !

[DOUBLEPOST=1361103343][/DOUBLEPOST]

Guneh-gari mein inteha kr chuka jo ,
Us musalman ki ibadat lahu-luhan hy ... !

Masha Allah

kaafi sanjeeda kalaam hai mohtarma
aur mauzu jo simeta hai aap ne wo bhi kaafi hassaas hai
bohot khoob
Allah aap ke qalam me barkat de Aameen

Mahen · Feb 17, 2013

Rubi said:
hmm thnx

@saviou @Mahen

kaha hai tumeri sharing me ko mil hi nhi rhai /:)

faari · Feb 17, 2013

ary waah @Rubi ji ap ne tu kamal kr dya great wording really buhat acha likha :-bd

@S_ChiragH ko mushkil hone wali hai choose krne k lye

Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh · Feb 17, 2013

faari said:
ary waah @Rubi ji ap ne tu kamal kr dya great wording really buhat acha likha @S_ChiragH ko mushkil hone wali hai choose krne k lye

Haan wahi to @faari

ab mene iske liye
saaaaaaaaaaare staff se help leni hogi

aur aap subki sharing kahan hain
...@Miss_Khan @Shailina @rahath @Prince_Farry @hoorain @Nelly @sabha_khan40 @ChoCo
and otherssssssssssssssssssssss ??

Poet Of The Month February 2013

Jahil

Sabah

Jahil

faari

Rubi

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Rubi

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Fa!th

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Rubi

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Fa!th

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Rubi

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Aayat

Rubi

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Hoorain

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Rubi

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Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh

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Rubi

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saviou

Mahen

Alhamdulillah

faari

Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh

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Poet Of The Month February 2013

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Alhamdulillah

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In search of Oyster Pearls