Poet Of The Month February 2013

[Hoorain]

meki sharing to ab tak maire mind may b nhi aayi

 

[shailina]

Haan wahi to @faari ab mene iske liye
saaaaaaaaaaare staff se help leni hogi

aur aap subki sharing kahan hain
...@Miss_Khan @Shailina @rahath @Prince_Farry @hoorain @Nelly @sabha_khan40 @ChoCo
and otherssssssssssssssssssssss ??

bhiyooo mujhe u ki tarah poet nhi ati.........​

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

meki sharing to ab tak maire mind may b nhi aayi

To jaldi se laayen use zehen mein abhi kam time bacha hai

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Lekin aati to hai naa : )
aur aap bhi bakamal ho shayara ho I know MASHA'ALLAH
jaldi jaldi likh kar share karein @Shailina .

 

[shailina]

Lekin aati to hai naa : )
aur aap bhi bakamal ho shayara ho I know MASHA'ALLAH
jaldi jaldi likh kar share karein @Shailina .

ok khosis karo gi..........

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Okay so sweet of you @Shailina sisteroooooo
INSHA'ALLAH aap likh logi

 

[shailina]

hmmmm.........
inshaallah bhiyoo

 

[Ezio]

... @S_ChiragH @faari @hoorain @Fa!th​

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Main actually aisa e kch socha tha jysa fari darling ny share kiya ​

bt fahadd bro & fari donon ki nazam thi so ab main ghazal likh k share kr rhi hun​

achi na lagy toh bataana agr apna hashar nashar krwana hy toh ​

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Mujhy lahu pr lahu-luhan sy acha word nii suja ​

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Sharm-o-haya ky pardy mein lipti gairat lahu-luhan hy ,​

Tery ghar ky kony mein simti pari izzat lahu-luhan hy ,​

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Kahin nanhe-paudy pr sy hy paed ka saya uth gaya ,​

Kahin be-zubaan bachy ki masumiyat lahu-luhan hy ,​

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Jhoot ko chupany ki mijalen pakar rahin hyn zor ,​

Aaj sach kehny ki himmat lahu-luhan hy ,​

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Kahin daulat ki hawis , Koi bhuka shohrat ka ,​

Ae shehr-e-khwahish teri badolat insaniyat lahu-luhan hy ,​

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Hasad sy chalni hy har kaleja yahan ,​

Aaj bhai-chary ki riwayat lahu-luhan hy , ​

Khaak-nasheenon mein hy akad chit'tanon ki si ,​

Qaum ko sudharny chali hakumat ' lahu-luhan hy ... !​

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Guneh-gari mein inteha kr chuka jo ,​

Us musalman ki ibadat lahu-luhan hy ... !​

Wahh wahhh wahhhhhh, tum ne to mehfil hi loot li, *Whistle*, kamaal hi kr diya rubi
Bht achi ghazal likhi hai

 

[MysTeri0uS]

... @S_ChiragH @faari @hoorain @Fa!th​

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Main actually aisa e kch socha tha jysa fari darling ny share kiya ​

bt fahadd bro & fari donon ki nazam thi so ab main ghazal likh k share kr rhi hun​

achi na lagy toh bataana agr apna hashar nashar krwana hy toh ​

​

Mujhy lahu pr lahu-luhan sy acha word nii suja ​

​

Sharm-o-haya ky pardy mein lipti gairat lahu-luhan hy ,​

Tery ghar ky kony mein simti pari izzat lahu-luhan hy ,​

​

Kahin nanhe-paudy pr sy hy paed ka saya uth gaya ,​

Kahin be-zubaan bachy ki masumiyat lahu-luhan hy ,​

​

Jhoot ko chupany ki mijalen pakar rahin hyn zor ,​

Aaj sach kehny ki himmat lahu-luhan hy ,​

​

Kahin daulat ki hawis , Koi bhuka shohrat ka ,​

Ae shehr-e-khwahish teri badolat insaniyat lahu-luhan hy ,​

​

Hasad sy chalni hy har kaleja yahan ,​

Aaj bhai-chary ki riwayat lahu-luhan hy , ​

Khaak-nasheenon mein hy akad chit'tanon ki si ,​

Qaum ko sudharny chali hakumat ' lahu-luhan hy ... !​

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[DOUBLEPOST=1361103343][/DOUBLEPOST]

Guneh-gari mein inteha kr chuka jo ,​

Us musalman ki ibadat lahu-luhan hy ... !​

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[Hoorain]

Okesh g chiraghu bhaya k kehne pey main b try karing shayron ki roohon ko besakun krne ki

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Main kis baat par karun matam aey Dunya​

Auron ki tara wo bhi bewafa nikla,aur to kuch nhi!​

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Kio har waqt k giley shikwe Rona Dhona​

Bas lahu k Rishton may na rhi Wafa,Aur to Kuch nhi!​

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Kio Hama Waqt Poochtey rehte ho sabab-e-bezari​

Dil ko na rha ab kisi ka aitbaar,aur to kuch nhi!​

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Dukh nhi us k yun badal jaane ka aey dost​

bas usse samjha tha dunya se juda,aur to kuch nhi!​

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na kar zeya-e-waqt hamdardiyan jataney may​

bas yhi na k main aitbara haar betha hun? aur to kuch nhi!​

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ye na samajh k ik main hi hun bawafa bharri dunya may​

bewafayi ka na mil sakka mujey moqa ,aur to kuch nhi!​

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na daikh yun afsurda si nazron se chehrey ko maire​

bas kuch aansu hi to hain zabt-e-gham se mawra, aur to kuch nhi!​

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@Rubi @S_ChiragH @faari​

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[Rubi]

Okesh g chiraghu bhaya k kehne pey main b try karing shayron ki roohon ko besakun krne ki

​

Main kis baat par karun matam aey Dunya​

Auron ki tara wo bhi bewafa nikla,aur to kuch nhi!​

​

Kio har waqt k giley shikwe Rona Dhona​

Bas lahu k Rishton may na rhi Wafa,Aur to Kuch nhi!​

​

Kio Hama Waqt Poochtey rehte ho saba-e-bezari​

Dil ko na rha ab kisi ka aitbaar,aur to kuch nhi!​

​

Dukh nhi us k yun badal jaane ka aey dost​

bas usse samjha tha dunya se juda,aur to kuch nhi!​

​

na kar zeya-e-waqt hamdardiyan jataney may​

bas yhi na k main aitbara haar betha hun? aur to kuch nhi!​

​

ye na samajh k ik main hi hun bawafa bharri dunya may​

bewafayi ka na mil sakka mujey moqa ,aur to kuch nhi!​

​

na daikh yun afsurda si nazron se chehrey ko maire​

bas kuch aansu hi to hain zabt-e-gham se mawra, aur to kuch nhi!​

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@Rubi @S_ChiragH @faari​

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waah waah TM ki anarkali
bahut acha likha hy sachi

bas usse samjha tha dunya se juda,aur to kuch nhi!​

bewafayi ka na mil sakka mujey moqa ,aur to kuch nhi!

 

[faari]

Okesh g chiraghu bhaya k kehne pey main b try karing shayron ki roohon ko besakun krne ki

​

Main kis baat par karun matam aey Dunya​

Auron ki tara wo bhi bewafa nikla,aur to kuch nhi!​

​

Kio har waqt k giley shikwe Rona Dhona​

Bas lahu k Rishton may na rhi Wafa,Aur to Kuch nhi!​

​

Kio Hama Waqt Poochtey rehte ho saba-e-bezari​

Dil ko na rha ab kisi ka aitbaar,aur to kuch nhi!​

​

Dukh nhi us k yun badal jaane ka aey dost​

bas usse samjha tha dunya se juda,aur to kuch nhi!​

​

na kar zeya-e-waqt hamdardiyan jataney may​

bas yhi na k main aitbara haar betha hun? aur to kuch nhi!​

​

ye na samajh k ik main hi hun bawafa bharri dunya may​

bewafayi ka na mil sakka mujey moqa ,aur to kuch nhi!​

​

na daikh yun afsurda si nazron se chehrey ko maire​

bas kuch aansu hi to hain zabt-e-gham se mawra, aur to kuch nhi!​

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@Rubi @S_ChiragH @faari​

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eik waqt tha tere intzaar me bethta tha
ab wo kal wala waqt nahi ,aur tu kuch nahi
very nice buhat achi likhi best of luck

 

[Rubi]

Wahh wahhh wahhhhhh, tum ne to mehfil hi loot li, *Whistle*, kamaal hi kr diya rubi
Bht achi ghazal likhi hai

lol thnx [DOUBLEPOST=1361188103][/DOUBLEPOST]

Masha Allah
kaafi sanjeeda kalaam hai mohtarma
aur mauzu jo simeta hai aap ne wo bhi kaafi hassaas hai
bohot khoob
Allah aap ke qalam me barkat de Aameen

thnx bro

@Mahen post #166 chck kro bibi [DOUBLEPOST=1361188200][/DOUBLEPOST]

ary waah @Rubi ji ap ne tu kamal kr dya great wording really buhat acha likha @S_ChiragH ko mushkil hone wali hai choose krne k lye

thnxxxx jaan

 

[Hoorain]

eik waqt tha tere intzaar me bethta tha
ab wo kal wala waqt nahi ,aur tu kuch nahi
very nice buhat achi likhi best of luck

waah waah TM ki anarkali
bahut acha likha hy sachi

bas usse samjha tha dunya se juda,aur to kuch nhi!​

bewafayi ka na mil sakka mujey moqa ,aur to kuch nhi!

shankuuu

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Okesh g chiraghu bhaya k kehne pey main b try karing shayron ki roohon ko besakun krne ki

​

Main kis baat par karun matam aey Dunya​

Auron ki tara wo bhi bewafa nikla,aur to kuch nhi!​

​

Kio har waqt k giley shikwe Rona Dhona​

Bas lahu k Rishton may na rhi Wafa,Aur to Kuch nhi!​

​

Kio Hama Waqt Poochtey rehte ho sabab-e-bezari​

Dil ko na rha ab kisi ka aitbaar,aur to kuch nhi!​

​

Dukh nhi us k yun badal jaane ka aey dost​

bas usse samjha tha dunya se juda,aur to kuch nhi!​

​

na kar zeya-e-waqt hamdardiyan jataney may​

bas yhi na k main aitbara haar betha hun? aur to kuch nhi!​

​

ye na samajh k ik main hi hun bawafa bharri dunya may​

bewafayi ka na mil sakka mujey moqa ,aur to kuch nhi!​

​

na daikh yun afsurda si nazron se chehrey ko maire​

bas kuch aansu hi to hain zabt-e-gham se mawra, aur to kuch nhi!​

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@Rubi @S_ChiragH @faari​

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MASHA'ALLAH MASHA'ALLAH bohot bohot achhi ghazal likhi hai @hoorain sister
bilkul dil chhu gaiy aapki ye ghazal

 

[Hoorain]

MASHA'ALLAH MASHA'ALLAH bohot bohot achhi ghazal likhi hai @hoorain sister
bilkul dil chhu gaiy aapki ye ghazal

thanx for encouragement bro

 

[ChoCo]

bht khoob @Rubi MASHALLAH!
Bht zabardast sharing hai! yh me ne nahi parhi thi muje iss ka tag ni mila tha

 

[Rubi]

bht khoob @Rubi MASHALLAH!
Bht zabardast sharing hai! yh me ne nahi parhi thi muje iss ka tag ni mila tha

hmm main tag krti toh milta naw
khair thnx

 

[ChoCo]

@hoorain
Muje ap ki ghazal parh k smjh ayi kuch and kuch nahi,
Sochta hoon tareef me is ki likhoon kuch and kuch nahi

Boht umda [DOUBLEPOST=1361290337][/DOUBLEPOST]

hmm main tag krti toh milta naw
khair thnx

oh tau ap ne khud he tag ni kia me smjha shayad bhool gai ho

 

[Rubi]

oh tau ap ne khud he tag ni kia me smjha shayad bhool gai ho

haan toh aap aisa e smjjh lo mjhy koi masla ni
abhi toh dikha di naw sharing