Dard-e-na-Ashana

[فہد]

you welcom bro

 

[MSC]

OMG!!! MASHALLAH
Awesome, superb,fantabulous
I really dnt believe it k hamare beach itnaaaaaaaaa Mahir Shayar bhiii hai
Loved it...
keep it up PF...

Na jaane kaha hai khushiyo ki bahar is baras
Dil ki wiraniyo mei jazabaat ki aahat nai hai

 

[Prince-Farry]

OMG!!! MASHALLAH
Awesome, superb,fantabulous
I really dnt believe it k hamare beach itnaaaaaaaaa Mahir Shayar bhiii hai
Loved it...
keep it up PF...

Na jaane kaha hai khushiyo ki bahar is baras
Dil ki wiraniyo mei jazabaat ki aahat nai hai

thanks msc...

 

[Tariq Saeed]

Dei chuke hai hum qurbani apne armano ki
Duniya mei kaboliyat ki gunjaish nahi hai

bahot khooooooob partner

 

[Prince-Farry]

Dei chuke hai hum qurbani apne armano ki
Duniya mei kaboliyat ki gunjaish nahi hai

bahot khooooooob partner

shukriya partner.......

 

[Tariq Saeed]

wesay yeh kaam kab say shuru kr diya

 

[Prince-Farry]

wesay yeh kaam kab say shuru kr diya

yeh to teen saal pehle shuru kiya tha..pher humne soch liya tha ke ab se nai likhege..magar nasir bhai ki famaish thi to unki khatir likh diya..

 

[Tariq Saeed]

ahan..... but you to phir poet ho human nai

 

[Prince-Farry]

ahan..... but you to phir poet ho human nai

kyon..poet human nai hote?

 

[Tariq Saeed]

hotay hayn......... shayad

 

[Prince-Farry]

hotay hayn......... shayad

to matlab nasir bhai aur farasat human nai?

 

[Sabah]

JazakAllah khair....
so very true and really beautiful poem PF
Dhukko ke sahiloon pe hai kashti zindagi ki
Samandar mei bhi hamdardi ki wosaet nahi hai



Dei chuke hai hum qurbani apne armano ki
Duniya mei kaboliyat ki gunjaish nahi hai


yeh lines mujhay buhut passand aye and aisa lagta hain jaise its written for me.. khair..
aap sub mei jenho ne yaha poems likhe hain they all are really apreciatable aur yeh ek Art hain jho sub mei nahin hota so you guys should keep it up...
at last I would just say your poem is really heart touching..
May Allah (SWA) Bless you...

 

[Prince-Farry]

JazakAllah khair....
so very true and really beautiful poem PF
Dhukko ke sahiloon pe hai kashti zindagi ki
Samandar mei bhi hamdardi ki wosaet nahi hai



Dei chuke hai hum qurbani apne armano ki
Duniya mei kaboliyat ki gunjaish nahi hai


yeh lines mujhay buhut passand aye and aisa lagta hain jaise its written for me.. khair..
aap sub mei jenho ne yaha poems likhe hain they all are really apreciatable aur yeh ek Art hain jho sub mei nahin hota so you guys should keep it up...
at last I would just say your poem is really heart touching..
May Allah (SWA) Bless you...

poetry share karne ka maqsad hi ap sab ko dedicate karna tha...
to pher aisa lagna ya waisa lagna ki gunjaish hi nai paida hoti...
jee...shurkiya hamari poetry ko pasand karne ke lie.

 

[*Maryam*]

Farry ap b poetry likhty hn...strange...
well vry sad bt zabrdast....

 

[Tooba Alvi]

nice poetry......

 

[Prince-Farry]

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[Hoorain]

arre wahhhh barre shayrana hoing

 

[Prince-Farry]

jee...bht new users agae heina..to unke lie opar laya thread ko

 

[Hoorain]

Gud Gud

 

[Prince-Farry]

jeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...ab jaldi se koi darwaze mei dastak bhi karde