thx bro for liking...ajayega din woh bhi..dekhe kab ata hai..Waah Choto kiya zabardast likha
leikin mujhey itni choti omer aur dard itna, meri tu Dua hay k app k yeh sub dard churanay wala koe jald app ki zindagi may aye aur in sub cheezo ku bahaar may badala day aur Allah karay woh din bohat jald aye (Ameen)
thnx bro...nai bro..shair kaha banna hai...uske lie kabhi socha nai.....Mashallah buhat nice poetry hay
or bohit si achi poetry perhny ko mily gi
weldone keep it up
insha allah ak din achy shaeer banny gay appp,,,
haan jee...nai ban sakte..?bht zaberdast.. app to shayer ban gaye g
thank u....Good going PF really beautifully written ther words are really heart touching =D> specially these twolines
De chuke hai hum qurbani apne armaano ki
Duniya mein kaboliyat ki gunjayish nahi hai vow really something
shukriya...jee jee zaroor...kyon nai...oh wow mashaAllah,waqas sach may bht he acha likka hay,wo b itne choti c umar may...amezing...
keep it up little bro....
1 poem maray lie b agar lik laytay to...
thanks db...Zabardast bro bohat khoob likha ap nae God bless you
thanks browoww what a beautifull poetry zabardast farry carry on