masha Allah mabroookAur yeah saviou bro le thread ki pori hundred post ho gayi {(yahoo12)}
bohot bohot shukriya mohtarmaBohat khOob..! Hamesha ki terah acha likha. {(dancing)}
Bass Differnce yah hay k aap nay Sad ki bajaye is bar Romantic pOetry likhi. @-)
But dOnO main andaz-e-Biyan acha hay..! wOrds ki selection bhi. ~
Keep writin mOre..! {}
shukran behnawalaikum assalam
umda sharing bhai....
mazeed likhte rahen
hahahaha don't worry saviou bro
By the way nice ghazal... Acha "in" ke bare me kuch aur bhi likha ho ga naaa kuch aisa jo is ghazal jaisa behtreen ho to plzzz share zaroor kerna.... Hum jante hain hamare saviou bro bohat ache aur khush ikhlaq hain is lea thora sa tung ker rahe the....
Acha by the way yeha phir se muhabbat ager porani ghazal hai to its means is ghazal se pehle ek muhabat fir second muhabbat is ghazal le waqt aur fir shadi..... Great job bro
naya part banana padega2ND PART JALDI SAY JALDI SHARE KERIAN,,
zaroor behnaNasir bahi mai b poetry liko gi
then ap ko pehle dehkao gi
ap os mai corection kerna
shukran behnaahan nice shair by u saviou bhai...
keep great sharing
waitig for next part.....
naya part banana padega
waitig for next part.....
With title.....
Ek aurPehli muhabbat
hahahaha..... waiting for it.....
haha zaroor ab ye line par hi khaas kar poetry likhenge aur apko dedicate karenge
Assalamu Alaykum Wrwb
kaise hain doston
aaj ek baar phir ek toote phoote kalaam ke sath hazir hain
ye ghazal bohot pehle likhe the lekin share nahi kiye the soche aaj tarteeb karke share karden
aur ya rahi hamari koshish apke samne
Na Jaane Aisi Halat Kyun Ho Gayi Hai Phir Se
Na Jaane Aisi Halat Kyun Ho Gayi Hai Phir Se
Lagta Hai Mohabbat Ho Gayi Hai Phir Se
Na Din Ko Chain Hai Mujhe Na Raton Ko Sakoon
Wohi Purani Kaifiat Ho Gayi Hai Phir Se
Na Bhuk Hai Ab Na Pyas Lagti Hai Mujhko
Haye Ye Kaisi Zehmat Ho Gayi Hai Phir Se
Aine Me Dekhta Hun Khud Ko Kitni Baar Main
Ajeeb Ye Museebat Ho Gayi Hai Phir Se
Jisse Bhi Dekhu Ussi Ka Chehra lagta Hai
Kya Karun Mujhe Ulfat Ho Gayi Hai Phir Se
Dekhlun Usko Ek Baar Ajaye Wo Mere Samne
Ankhon ko Ye Hasrat Ho Gayi Hai Phir Se
Dil Kahin Bhi Nahi Lagta Mera Yaron
Mujhe Kisi Se Raghbat Ho Gayi Hai Phir Se
Dost Kehte Hain Pyar Ho Gaya Hai Mujhe
Meri Ab Koi Chahat Ho Gayi Hai Phir Se
Umeed Hai Ke Ab Hoga Itmenan e Qalb Nasir
Kisi Ko Meri Zarurat Ho Gayi Hai Phir Se