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HuriYa

(¯`★´¯)I'll Always Be Daddy's Doll(¯´★`¯)
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Bohat khOob..! Hamesha ki terah acha likha. {(dancing)}

Bass Differnce yah hay k aap nay Sad ki bajaye is bar Romantic pOetry likhi. @-)

But dOnO main andaz-e-Biyan acha hay..! wOrds ki selection bhi. ~:>

Keep writin mOre..! {(happy)}
 

saviou

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Aug 23, 2009
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Bohat khOob..! Hamesha ki terah acha likha. {(dancing)}

Bass Differnce yah hay k aap nay Sad ki bajaye is bar Romantic pOetry likhi. @-)

But dOnO main andaz-e-Biyan acha hay..! wOrds ki selection bhi. ~:>

Keep writin mOre..! {(happy)}
bohot bohot shukriya mohtarma :)
wo asal me sab sanjeeda aur sad poetry sun sun kar bore na hojayen isliye thora change karna parha
inshaAllah zaroor aage bhi share karte rahenge
aur sath hi apki poetry ka bhi intezar rahega /:)
 

saviou

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hahahaha don't worry saviou bro:))

By the way nice ghazal... Acha "in" ke bare me kuch aur bhi likha ho ga naaa kuch aisa jo is ghazal jaisa behtreen ho to plzzz share zaroor kerna.... Hum jante hain hamare saviou bro bohat ache aur khush ikhlaq hain is lea thora sa tung ker rahe the.... :)

Acha by the way yeha phir se muhabbat ager porani ghazal hai to its means is ghazal se pehle ek muhabat fir second muhabbat is ghazal le waqt aur fir shadi..... Great job bro {(moc)}

jee jee zaroor inshaAllah :)
waise hamne pehle hi kaafi sharing kar chuke hain aap issi section me dekhlen aur khud se pata lagalen
 

-Mahi-

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Assalamu Alaykum Wrwb :)
kaise hain doston
aaj ek baar phir ek toote phoote kalaam ke sath hazir hain
ye ghazal bohot pehle likhe the lekin share nahi kiye the soche aaj tarteeb karke share karden

aur ya rahi hamari koshish apke samne :)



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