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hmmmmmmmmmm sonu..mashAllah..ho gya na asar poetry section ka..
aati rha kro.{(gimmefive)}
 

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jee apka ye sawal to sidhe dil me war kiya hai /:)

waise apki baat par ek ghazal yaad agaye faraz ahmed ki jisko jab bhi padhte hain lagta hai iska hamari zindagi se ya purani yadon se kuch lena hai

Guazre hue taveel zamane k baad bhi,,
Dil mei raha wo chod k jaane k baad bhi,,

Pehlu mei reh k dil ne diya he bahut fareb,,
Rakha he yaad usko bhulane k baad bhi,,

Go tu yaha nahi he magar tu yahi pe he,,
Teri hee hasrat he tere jaane k baad bhi,,

Lagta he kuch kaha hee nahi he use kabhi,,
Dil ka tamaam haal sunane k baad bhi,,

He yakee dil ko hamare to samajh lo itna,,
Laut kar aayega ek roz wo jaane k baad bhi..!!
hmmm very nice :)
 

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g to aap se agla sawal saviou bhaya


keh rha hay shor_e_darya se sumandar ka sakoot
jis may jtina zarf hay utna hi wo khamosh hay


n


guftagu kijey k ye fitrat_e_insan hay shakeeb
jaaley lag jaatey hain jab band makan hotey hain


ye dono ishaar aik doosre k opposite hain


aap k khayal may haqeeqat k ziada qareeb konsa hay?
 
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Qawareer

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wah ji kya sawal kia hai hoor aapa ..lgta hai humari asar ho gya hai ap par:p
 
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abi boht waqat hai bhai..jb yaad aaye to bata dijiye ga..{(popcorn)}

jee zaroor inshaAllah :)


wahhh..mashAllah..ap to shayer hain{(ok)}
hayeeeeeeee la main kis duniya me rehti hon..

ap ne itni sari poetry share ki hai..jb k main ne to 2 hi dekhi hain bs..baki abi dekh rhi hon:)
boht umdah..



bohot bohot shukriya behna :)
haan ji pata nahi aap kis duniya me rehti hain kahin hoor ki dunia me to nahi na
aur hamara toota phoota kalaam dekhni ki fursat apko kahan /:)
 
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shukran :)
apne ek sawal kiya tha pehle page me hamne jawab diya hai shayad apne nahi dekha /:)
daikh to liya na wohi na jis k jawab may aap ne ghazal share ki :s

sawal to maine aik aur bhi kiya hay issi page pe wo shayed aap ne nhi daikha :-? :p
 

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daikh to liya na wohi na jis k jawab may aap ne ghazal share ki :s

sawal to maine aik aur bhi kiya hay issi page pe wo shayed aap ne nhi daikha :-? :p

acha apne dekh liya /:)
haan hamne apka sawal thora parha hai abhi namaz k baad pura parh kar jawab denge :p
inshaAllah
 

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hahhah..{(haha})or chai k sath pakore b hone chaheye..{(thinkg)}
wese yahan apko shairy ki zuban me jawab dena tha..{(thinkg)}


haan ji sahi kaha pakore bhi :p
kahin hoor na padhle warna gayab hojayenge pakore
waise shayarana andaz me bohot kuch kehsakte hain lekin khud se likh kar abhi to itna time nahi lekin december par ek kalaam jo hame acha laga kuch yaad agaya wo apko sunate hain :)

Abhi Lamhe Nahin Bikhre
Abhi Mosam Nahi Bichre
Mere Kamry Ki Thandak Me
Abhi Kuch Dhoop Baqi Hay
Meri Diary K Kuch Safhay
Abhi Kuch Keh Nahin Paye
Mere Angan K Sab Poday
Abhi Bhi Gungunate Hain
Mere Be-Jaan Honton Per
Abhi Muskaan Waisi Hay
Kisi K Laot Aanay Ka
Abhi Imkaan Baqi Hay
December Baat Botoon Main,
Agar Tum Maan Jao
December
Tehar Jao….!!!
Tehar Jao…

ap k to dost b shayer hain..wahhh..boht pyara shair kaha ap k dost ne ap k lye..{(ok)}

shukran :)
haan ji kuch dost hain jo shayari karlete hain

umdah..

bohot bohot shukriya behna :)
han g..hoor sis se to har khane wali cheez bacha k hi rkhni chaheye:p

wah..booooht khoobsorat nazm hai:)



dekhlo hoor ye baten sab ko pata hai :p

:|

barra acha silsila shuroo kiya hay maire khilaaf saazishon ka {(nea)}
 

Qawareer

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nasir bhai ek sawal hum ne b kia tha..yaad kren zara..{(thinkg)}{(thinkg)}{(thinkg)}{(thinkg)}
 

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itna bhi mushkil sawal nhi tha bhaya :s
kinni dair se w8 karing main :((

chlain theek hay INSHAALLAH
take care
 

saviou

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itna bhi mushkil sawal nhi tha bhaya :s
kinni dair se w8 karing main :((

chlain theek hay INSHAALLAH
take care

sawal mushkil ki baat nahi behna bas thora busy the kal
aaj dedenge inshaAllah :)
 
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