bohot bohot shukriya mohtarmaHamisha k terha behtereen poem likha hain aapne...
Dekhlun Usko Ek Baar Ajaye Wo Mere Samne
Ankhon ko Ye Hasrat Ho Gayi Hai Phir Se
Dil Kahin Bhi Nahi Lagta Mera Yaron
Mujhe Kisi Se Raghbat Ho Gayi Hai Phir Se
heart touching lines aur Raghbat ka kia matlab?
bohot bohot shukriya behnaMashallah
bohot hi achi lekhi hai aap ni Nasir bhai
thanks for sharing bhai
muje ye line bohot achi lagi hai
Jisse Bhi Dekhu Ussi Ka Chehra lagta Hai
hmmmmmmmm
bohot bohot shukriya behna
acha ye line pasand aane ki koi khaas wajha
shukran
hmmmmmmmm
nai to bus achi lagi
to kehdia
shukran behnaoye hoye nasir bhai....
kia bat hay...
very nice bhaya ji............
bht khoob....
pyare c bahabi ko salam kahye ga mare taraf say...aham...aham......
wah ..saviou bhai kia bt hay ap ki.......kia ap nay khud likhe hay??
mjhy to bhut ache lge....
jee zaroor iske poore parts share karenge inshaAllahNasir bhai plzzzzzzz as ko mukamal kerian as ka 2nd part bhi share kerian,