Wo To Khwab Tha

[~Bahaar~]

ji bilkul apne khyalath ko safhaat p phailate rahen..ek roz DEEWAN E NASIR pay e takmeel ko pahunchega

 

[*Sonu*]

walikum salam
mashAllah bht hi acha likha hai nasir bhai​

 

[saviou]

ji bilkul apne khyalath ko safhaat p phailate rahen..ek roz DEEWAN E NASIR pay e takmeel ko pahunchega

array nahi mohtarma wahan tak nahi pahunchna hame
waise apne abhi tak hame intezar me rakha hai
kab dekhne ko parhne ko milega apka kalaam

 

[saviou]

Kafi achi hai...par agar radeef qafiye ka dhyan rakha jata to aur achi ho sakti thi

shukran mohtaram
inshaAllah koshish karenge k ainda khayal rakhne
jazakallah

 

[saviou]

wssalm u alaikum
boht arse baad apki ko shairy parhne ko mili..
boht umdah..
boht ache andaz me ap ne ek khawb ko shairy ka sahara lete huve bayan kia hai..mashAllah..

bohot bohot shukriya behna
jazakallah khair

 

[saviou]

Bohot khoob bhai jan kya khoob andaz se aapne khwaab ko
ghazal mein bayaan kiya maza aa gaya bohot hi umdaah

Rehmat e khushi ko har koi karna chahe apna
phir kyun rehmat e ghum ko har koi karna chahe sapna

***S_ChiragH***
​

shukran janab

 

[saviou]

bohat khub bhai kya bat hai

sada khus raho

Aameen
shukran bro

 

[saviou]

Nicely written . . . .

shukran janab

 

[saviou]

bht khoob bro

shukran bro

 

[saviou]

BOHAT umda likha hai bro

bohot shukriya bro

 

[saviou]

walaikum salam
Mashallah Bhtttt umda poetry hai....
nice wording n well designed
Keep sharing

bohot bohot shukriya mohtarma pasand karne k liye

 

[Fa!th]

mashalllah bht aalllaaa poetry likhi hai bro .............

 

[NamaL]

Masha allah nice poetry.......................

 

[Rubi]

nyc portey bro...

 

[Sabah]

u tu pahle bhi read kerchuke hain but wakiye mei buhut achi poem likhe aapne and enke kuch lines hame buhut passand aye:

Kyun Bhaag Rahaa Hun Mainn Khud Se Door

Ye Ajeeb Si Kaifiat Kaisi,Kyun Hun Uljhan Me

Milaa Tab Qalb Ko Sukoon, Hai Zindagii Baki
Warna Kya Leke Jata, Ye Khote Sikke Daman Me

Rabb Ke Aage Tah e Dil Se Dua'go Hai Nasir

Naa Aaye Phir Kabhii Aisi Aafat Jeewan Me..

in short sabhe buhut ache hain keep it up

 

[mirza37]

Bohit khooob paa gi ,, kiya baat hay ap ki
nice designing sabah sis .

 

[Deep Silence]

wa alikum asalam wrwb..

masha Allah aap ne waqi buhot acha likha.
kia aap ne bhi koi esa khwab dekha tha k phir aap ne ye likha?

 

[lavina]

Beautiful wordings dear keep it up ​

 

[fiza.saeed]

walikum u salaam very well sharing... i like it...

 

[saviou]

wa alikum asalam wrwb..

masha Allah aap ne waqi buhot acha likha.
kia aap ne bhi koi esa khwab dekha tha k phir aap ne ye likha?

bohot shukriya mohtarma
haan ji kuch is tarah ka khwab dekhe the ham aur bohot se dost bhi apne khwab hamse share karte hain to samjhe ke ye sabke majmuae ko hamne ek jagah jama kiya hai

isliye isme alfaz bhi urdu ke sath hindi me hain