waja e gam e udasi.....

[Asma Shah]

mairy dada chunke angrezun k zamany k ty tu wo angrezi mai shayari kiya karty ty

ufffffffffffff......aik tu na tum b.....

acha phr koi sunao....

 

[SHB_Bhaiya]

kia hoti hia ye third degree...
zara hm ko b bata dy koi.............({kopping)}

naaa jee naa tum abhi bachi ho ...

 

[Babar-Azam]

Aey Thy Un Kay Sath.
my fav...

Aey thy un kay sath nazaray chalay gaey,
wo shab wo chandni wo sitaray chalay gaey,

shayad umhary sath bhi wapis na aa sakain,
woh walwaly jo sath tumhary chgalay gaey,

kashti tarap kay halka-e-toofan main reh gai,
dekho to kitni door kinaray chalay gaey,

har aastan agarcha tera astan na tha,
har astan pe tujh ko pukaray chalay gaey,

sham-e-wisal khana-e-ghurbat se rooth kar,
tum kya gaey naseeb hamary chalay gaey,

dekha to phir waheen thy jahan say chalay thy ham,
kashti kay sath sath kinaray chalay gaey,

mehfil main kisko taab-e-hazoor-e-jamaal thi,
aaey teri nigah kay maray chalay gaey,

jaty hajoom-e-hashr main ham aasiyan-e-dah’r,
aey lutf-e-yar tery saharay chalay gaey,

dushman gaey to kashmakash-e-dosti gai,
dushman gaey kay dost hamaray chalay gaey,

jaaty hi un kay Saif, shab-e-gham ne aa liya,
rukhsat hua woh chand, sitaray chalay gaey,

 

[Asma Shah]

naaa jee naa tum abhi bachi ho ...

han tum tu jaise bht jawan ho agy na...batao ab mujeeeeeeeeeeeee..jaldi se..............

 

[Asma Shah]

Aey Thy Un Kay Sath.
my fav...

Aey thy un kay sath nazaray chalay gaey,
wo shab wo chandni wo sitaray chalay gaey,

shayad umhary sath bhi wapis na aa sakain,
woh walwaly jo sath tumhary chgalay gaey,

kashti tarap kay halka-e-toofan main reh gai,
dekho to kitni door kinaray chalay gaey,

har aastan agarcha tera astan na tha,
har astan pe tujh ko pukaray chalay gaey,

sham-e-wisal khana-e-ghurbat se rooth kar,
tum kya gaey naseeb hamary chalay gaey,

dekha to phir waheen thy jahan say chalay thy ham,
kashti kay sath sath kinaray chalay gaey,

mehfil main kisko taab-e-hazoor-e-jamaal thi,
aaey teri nigah kay maray chalay gaey,

jaty hajoom-e-hashr main ham aasiyan-e-dah’r,
aey lutf-e-yar tery saharay chalay gaey,

dushman gaey to kashmakash-e-dosti gai,
dushman gaey kay dost hamaray chalay gaey,

jaaty hi un kay Saif, shab-e-gham ne aa liya,
rukhsat hua woh chand, sitaray chalay gaey,

ooooooo waooooooooooooooo......kis ki chura k lay ho ye..........

 

[SHB_Bhaiya]

han tum tu jaise bht jawan ho agy na...batao ab mujeeeeeeeeeeeee..jaldi se..............

arey third degree jab kisi ko chae do aur us mai cheeni naa ho to us ko boltey third degree....

 

[Babar-Azam]

hmmmm

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Rakhte huwe apne bhai ka khayal
karta hoon khud apne sher ko behaal

bhai woh sheir me shayar AsmA sis pe tanziya qalam ada kar raha tha
kyunke AsmA sis use us waqt reply nahin de rahi thi

 

[Asma Shah]

arey third degree jab kisi ko chae do aur us mai cheeni naa ho to us ko boltey third degree....

ohhh really............

 

[Asma24]

nice poetry asma

 

[Mantasha_Zawaar]

bhttt khoob
thnx 4 sharing

 

[Asma Shah]

bhttt khoob
thnx 4 sharing

thnx for liking sis...........{(dancing)}

 

[faari]

nice poetry hai but thori sad hai agr romantic k sath kuch ronaq hoti tu aur maza ata but now buhat achi likhi hai mere hiyaal se staff ko ek poetry contest krwana chahiye khud ki likhi hoi poetry jis word se eik poetry ka last word ho ga next me usi word se poetry likhi jaye gi aur bari bari se buhat mazy ka contest ho ga but any ways asma hoob likha hai

 

[U-nus-G]

Gud G

 

[Asma Shah]

nice poetry hai but thori sad hai agr romantic k sath kuch ronaq hoti tu aur maza ata but now buhat achi likhi hai mere hiyaal se staff ko ek poetry contest krwana chahiye khud ki likhi hoi poetry jis word se eik poetry ka last word ho ga next me usi word se poetry likhi jaye gi aur bari bari se buhat mazy ka contest ho ga but any ways asma hoob likha hai

ji sis zarur...aisi aik game hai na already shairi section mn.....well thnx for liking..........

 

[$HADOW]

{(goodpost)}..........

 

[whiteros]

waaaaaaa
ASMA bohat achhi likhi hai

 

[yoursks]

wonderful shayari Asma...

or iss ko share nah karne ki koi wajah to naheen thee...
keep sharing...

 

[Zee Leo]

wah bhae aik se barh ke aik poet hain yahan.. buhat he zabardast poetry hai..

 

[*khushi*]

waalikumaslam

poetry to zbrdasst hai phir share kion nahi krti? ({kopping)}