waja e gam e udasi.....

[Asma Shah]

Asalam o alaikum...kese hn sab...well guys mn yahan apne aik KHAS DOST ki farmaish pe apni poetry share kr rhi hn...jab k mera khud se man nahi krta apni poetry share krnno ko,,dn't know y...??({kopping)}
well kisi ko achi na b lagy tu bata dena ap sab...here is my lil sharing.....{(dancing)}

waja-e-gam e udasi ik tum bhi thy
har khushi k pechy ik raaz tum b thy
lagam di jiss ne meri betab nazron ko
wo ik kochwan tum hi thy
wqt tu behta rha ik darya ki tarha
bandha jiss ne bandh ik lamhy pe
wo ik mehrban tum hi thy
har kona dil ka khali hai ab
warna har tukra-e-dil tum hi thy

..................

{(Allah Hafiz)}​

 

[Wasif Safi]

Wow Asma bohot hi zabardast hai yaar u ki poetry..
Lekin ek ek lafz me gham chupa hai u ki poetry me....

 

[Asma Shah]

jazaka ALLAH wasif.......pata nahi mne sahi b likhi hui hai ya nahi.yehi dar rehta hai muje...........

 

[Wasif Safi]

Sahi hai aur bohot achi likhi hai u ne, maine u se pehle bhi kaha ki apni poetry share kiya karo lekin u ki marzi hai jab dil kare karlena share u ki poetry aur ye waali kaafi achi hai..... per itna gham kyu chupa hai isme....({kopping)}

 

[sweet_c_kuri]

Amazing asma sis really niceeeee

 

[Asma Shah]

hahaha,,bas ji,,,jab gum mn likhi ho tu gum tu hoga na...hahhaha

 

[Wasif Safi]

Hmm wo to pata hai per ye nahi pata ke gham kis baat ka hai u ko, abi to sab alryt hai na...

 

[Asma Shah]

Amazing asma sis really niceeeee

thnx sis...............

 

[Asma Shah]

Hmm wo to pata hai per ye nahi pata ke gham kis baat ka hai u ko, abi to sab alryt hai na...

yup now tu alright hai......
ALLAH ka shukar hai.........

 

[Wasif Safi]

Hmm bohot achi baat hai na ALLAH PAK ka shukar hai..

 

[Babar-Azam]

hmmmm nice....wese tu mera dil o demagh buht dry hai laikn jab achi poetry ko partha hun tu dil o damagh ko tar kar daite hai... keep sharing.....

 

[Asma Shah]

hmmmm nice....wese tu mera dil o demagh buht dry hai laikn jab achi poetry ko partha hun tu dil o damagh ko tar kar daite hai... keep sharing.....

hmmm..mtlb u ko meripoetry achi lagi...hahah...

 

[Babar-Azam]

hmmmm

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Wa'alaikum assalam

har ishq naya zaiyqa rakhta hai Faraz
aaj kal phir tere ghazalon ki ada aur lagi

masha'ALLAH bohot hi zabardast likha hai
aur pur dard kalaam hai mujhe bohot pasand hain aise kalaam
aage bhi share karte rahiyega plzzzzzzz

 

[Asma Shah]

Wa'alaikum assalam

har ishq naya zaiyqa rakhta hai Faraz
aaj kal phir tere ghazalon ki ada aur lagi

masha'ALLAH bohot hi zabardast likha hai
aur pur dard kalaam hai mujhe bohot pasand hain aise kalaam
aage bhi share karte rahiyega plzzzzzzz

ohhh....wao....

ok jnb...n thnx for liking.............hehehee

 

[Babar-Azam]

wese mai soch rha hun mai pe peotry shoro karun sab shayarun ki chutte....

 

[Asma Shah]

hahahah......nai plz tum na krna........plzzzzzzz...sab behosh ho jain gy.....plzzzzzzzzzz

 

[Babar-Azam]

u ko mazak lagging maire 2 kitabain chapty chapty bachi hain

 

[Asma Shah]

uffffff...bas kro yar....itna bara jhut mere se hazam nahi ho rha.......u r shair..ho hi na jo..........

 

[Babar-Azam]

kaho tu sunaon???