Tm's Poet Competition December 2013

[Mahen]

wowwwwww awesome poetry @Haya_Fatima
keep it up dearu

 

[Hoorain]

hahaha je kab se start kare phir class

jab b aap k paass time ho mam

 

[whiteros]

Assalaamu alaikum doston @Haya_Fatima
ki likhi nazam share karne ko hazir hun
unki behalf per cause her system is nt
working

Ufff dekho tanha nahin aaya december
saath apne dukh bhi laaya december

Taaze phir saare zakham huwe hain
Aankh ye mere phir se nam huwe hain
Kya kahun kitni gehraiy tak
Taaza mere saare zakham huwe hain

Aaya hai jese rone ka maheena
Yaadon ka samndar sath laaya hai december

Guzarte shayad ek aadh sham araam se
Per teir mehek aa rahi hai
mere dar o baam se
Me jiske ghum me udaas hun bohot
Wo khush hai bicharh kar mere zaat o naam se

Tumsa zalim hai ye maah mere liye
aate hi ashk ki barsat laaya hai december

Tum mere aks ban kar saath ho
kabhi shoq e raqs ban kar saath ho
Mein jab bhi khoiy udasion mein
Tum eik ashk ban kar saath ho

Pal pal har pal ae bewafa tu yaad raha
Koun kehta hai tanha bitaya hai december
Dekho apne saath ghum bhi laaya december
koun kehta hai ke tanha aaya hai december

@Mahen @khusboo

oy hoy kia dukhi dec likha hai.....@Haya_Fatima, g good1

 

[whiteros]

jab b aap k paass time ho mam

g mam agar ap k pass bhi time ho to bta skte hain k ye competition kahatmho gaya kia

 

[Hoorain]

g mam agar ap k pass bhi time ho to bta skte hain k ye competition kahatmho gaya kia

haha jee maira khayal hay ye khatam ho gya meri sharing reh gai

 

[whiteros]

haha jee maira khayal hay ye khatam ho gya meri sharing reh gai

chalo u n main ab share krty hain

 

[Hoorain]

chalo u n main ab share krty hain

haa sahi hay
pehle aap

 

[whiteros]

haa sahi hay
pehle aap

per u na nahin ki to kon saza dega

 

[Hoorain]

per u na nahin ki to kon saza dega

main akrugi u ko muj pe khud se ziada bharosa hona chahiye

 

[whiteros]

main akrugi u ko muj pe khud se ziada bharosa hona chahiye

okay den m share krna jarahe hun ....per u kab kro ge

 

[Hoorain]

okay den m share krna jarahe hun ....per u kab kro ge

u ki daikhne k baaad

 

[whiteros]

u ki daikhne k baaad

v funny likhi hui hai na ya likho ge bhi bad main

 

[Hoorain]

v funny likhi hui hai na ya likho ge bhi bad main

aapki copy rk k likhugi warna muje kahan aata kuch likhna

 

[whiteros]

aapki copy rk k likhugi warna muje kahan aata kuch likhna

ooo shoni munni buchi ur ...main serious keh rahe hun

 

[Hoorain]

ooo shoni munni buchi ur ...main serious keh rahe hun

hahaha
maine abhi nae likhi aaj llikhugi shayed

 

[NXXXS]

hmmm....................

 

[whiteros]

hahaha
maine abhi nae likhi aaj llikhugi shayed

aj likhun ge shayad apna bata rahe ho dear ya barabr wali ka hahaha...ye TM adha adhoora q dikh raha hai

 

[Hoorain]

aj likhun ge shayad apna bata rahe ho dear ya barabr wali ka hahaha...ye TM adha adhoora q dikh raha hai

hahaha brabar wali whiteros ka
aadha adhura matlab?

 

[whiteros]

hahaha brabar wali whiteros ka
aadha adhura matlab?

haha WR barabr wali na to likhi hui hai main u ki andr wali hoor ki bat kring...
matlb writing box k colour or avi wagera ghayab hain na

 

[Hoorain]

haha WR barabr wali na to likhi hui hai main u ki andr wali hoor ki bat kring...
matlb writing box k colour or avi wagera ghayab hain na

acha screenshot dikhayain plzz