Tm's Poet Competition December 2013

[*Sarlaa*]

And The Winner Is..
S_Chiraghh..
Bohat zabardastttt..
Superbbb....

fatiiiiiiiiiiiiii ap be kren share

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

umdaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa sharing is it urs own poem

LoLzzz ji bilkul thanks for liking yehi to likh raha tha pichle aadhe ghante se
aakhri band abhi 6 minutes pehle likha aur add kiya

 

[AnadiL]

LoLzzz tumhara winner ho gaya
ab contest ka banun nahin koi gal nahin
Thankyou so much for liking this much @Haya_Fatima

Lollxx..
meri bhi help kar dete zara.. mujhe bhi likhni thi..:/

 

[*Sarlaa*]

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teri halki halki si yadoon ka qohar​

esa jam sa gaya hai mere dil par​

kabhi shabnam ki tara ankhoon se gary​

kabhi dhond ki tara samne aa jaye​

phir yun qatra qatra giry mujhy jalane k lye​

aur us ki tara kanoo me unkahi baatein kr jaye​

phir se girne lgy darakhtoon k wohi sokhy paty​

jesy tery tooty wadoon se bhar gya samondar​

lo phir se aa gya wohi december​

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@sarlaa_saddiqui @Hoorain @S_ChiragH @Kit_Kat @LaaraibLikhaari

nice sharing

 

[AnadiL]

fatiiiiiiiiiiiiii ap be kren share

sis main kal tak karun share.???

 

[*Sarlaa*]

ala likha hai gud

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Lollxx..
meri bhi help kar dete zara.. mujhe bhi likhni thi..:/

Hahha I did nt know that tum bol deti mein tumhen dasion baar madad karta

 

[*Sarlaa*]

Assalam -0- Alaiukm ​

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Tm, yeh rahi hmari sharing Umeed hy pasand aegi yeh meny khud likhi hy ​

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Rim Jhim Rim Jhim Barsi Barish ​

Halki Halki Qatra Qatra December ki lambi Tanha raten Dil jalaen​

Halki Halki Qatra Qatra ​

Sham Sehar me Zardi chalki ​

Halki Halki Qatra Qatra ​

Zalim December me likhi judayi ​

Ankhon me pani boonden ayi ​

Halki Halki Qatra Qatra ​

Pairhon py ek koyal kooki ​

baaghon me bhi chiriya chehki​

Mast hawa me raag lagaye ​

Halki Halki Qatra Qatra ​

Nandiya kinary me aaj bhi rooyiDecember aya tu na aya​

yaad teri Q phir sy ayi ​

Halki Halki Qatra Qatra ​

Zalim December tera yeh aalam ​

Kaly badal behta jharna Hawa ka jhonkA ​

har zarry me teri khushboo ​

Halki Halki Qatra Qatra ​

Written By Me ( poetess Chaya )​

@King_Kong @-Mahi- @MEEsUMRAZA @Redvirus @Star24 @Sanandreas @LaaraibLikhaari @Nighaat @Fanii @Sonu59 @Bela @Star24 @Adnan1 @Miss_Tittli @Hoorain @Abidi @Haya_Fatima @Iceage-TM @Shiraz-Khan @Toobi @Khushboo @Haya_Fatima @Pakistani_angel @whiteros @whiteros @sweet_angel @S_ChiragH @Guriya_Rani @Pakistani_angel @Don @faari @Pari @fareena_01 @shzd ​

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nice sharing

 

[AnadiL]

sis main kal tak karun share.???

@Sarlaa_Siddaqui

 

[LaaraibLikhaari]

was salam janab.............
zyada tar ne aazaad nazmein kaheen .....hamne qata likha mehnat se.......................
uffffffffff yeh december................
jazbaat ki akkaasi ki hai............
muqaddas saahab se bichhar kar kuchh yahi hashr hua hai dil ka..............................................................................
yeh shairi aap ke liye hai muqaddas aur yeh shairah bhi aap ke liye........................................

 

[*Sarlaa*]

@Sarlaa_Siddaqui

g kal rat tak ka time hai sis

 

[Aks_]

nice sharing

 

[Aks_]

walikumasaalam
nice sharing

thank y0u ..

 

[Just_Like_Roze]

ye DECEMBER akhir q aata hy ??????????

Nafrat hy mujy DEcember se
ager na hota ye DECEmber
to ajj mein bh hansta hota
December bss itna kehta hn
to na aya kr nazer humy
q k tera ana toor daita hy
hum jaisoon k sapny
acha chlta hn DECember
tu ager mannta hota to
Hum jaisy bh khush howa krty
tera to kaam hi aag k angaron pr chlana hy
tooty howon ko oar toorny....................




oar koi humary laik ???

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

ye DECEMBER akhir q aata hy ??????????

Nafrat hy mujy DEcember se
ager na hota ye DECEmber
to ajj mein bh hansta hota
December bss itna kehta hn
to na aya kr nazer humy
q k tera ana toor daita hy
hum jaisoon k sapny
acha chlta hn DECember
tu ager mannta hota to
Hum jaisy bh khush howa krty
tera to kaam hi aag k angaron pr chlana hy
tooty howon ko oar toorny....................




oar koi humary laik ???

Ye december aapki 'unka' naam hai kya

 

[Hoorain]

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teri halki halki si yadoon ka qohar​

esa jam sa gaya hai mere dil par​

kabhi shabnam ki tara ankhoon se gary​

kabhi dhond ki tara samne aa jaye​

phir yun qatra qatra giry mujhy jalane k lye​

aur us ki tara kanoo me unkahi baatein kr jaye​

phir se girne lgy darakhtoon k wohi sokhy paty​

jesy tery tooty wadoon se bhar gya samondar​

lo phir se aa gya wohi december​

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@sarlaa_saddiqui @Hoorain @S_ChiragH @Kit_Kat @LaaraibLikhaari

just wowwwwwwwwww superb fareena ahem ahem yahan sab chuppey rustam hain

 

[Hoorain]

hahaha bas kia kare waqt nay chonni bana dia app ko bhi sekha don ge ap bole to

haha hye barri sad story hay
jee jee kio nhi ye to maire liye garv ki bata hogi aap se seekhna

 

[Miss_Tittli]

haha hye barri sad story hay
jee jee kio nhi ye to maire liye garv ki bata hogi aap se seekhna

hahaha je kab se start kare phir class

 

[Miss_Tittli]

ye DECEMBER akhir q aata hy ??????????

Nafrat hy mujy DEcember se
ager na hota ye DECEmber
to ajj mein bh hansta hota
December bss itna kehta hn
to na aya kr nazer humy
q k tera ana toor daita hy
hum jaisoon k sapny
acha chlta hn DECember
tu ager mannta hota to
Hum jaisy bh khush howa krty
tera to kaam hi aag k angaron pr chlana hy
tooty howon ko oar toorny....................




oar koi humary laik ???

hahaha insaan se bhi itni nafrat nhi ki ho ge jitni december se hahaha

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Assalaamu alaikum doston @Haya_Fatima
ki likhi nazam share karne ko hazir hun
unki behalf per cause her system is nt
working

Ufff dekho tanha nahin aaya december
saath apne dukh bhi laaya december

Taaze phir saare zakham huwe hain
Aankh ye mere phir se nam huwe hain
Kya kahun kitni gehraiy tak
Taaza mere saare zakham huwe hain

Aaya hai jese rone ka maheena
Yaadon ka samndar sath laaya hai december

Guzarte shayad ek aadh sham araam se
Per teir mehek aa rahi hai
mere dar o baam se
Me jiske ghum me udaas hun bohot
Wo khush hai bicharh kar mere zaat o naam se

Tumsa zalim hai ye maah mere liye
aate hi ashk ki barsat laaya hai december

Tum mere aks ban kar saath ho
kabhi shoq e raqs ban kar saath ho
Mein jab bhi khoiy udasion mein
Tum eik ashk ban kar saath ho

Pal pal har pal ae bewafa tu yaad raha
Koun kehta hai tanha bitaya hai december
Dekho apne saath ghum bhi laaya december
koun kehta hai ke tanha aaya hai december

@Mahen @khusboo