TM Poet Muqabla - Nov 2011

[Prince-Farry]

walakumsalam wrwb..
kia talent hai bhai ap mei...2 ghante mei itna sab kuch likh diya..
bht hi khobsurat likha hai...
mashaAllah...
bht hi tough competition hogia hai ab to

Assalam o alaikum doston meri nazm peish hai doston ki khidmat mein
don din 2-2 ghante sochne aur koshish ke bawajood mujhe is topic pe
dil ki janib se kuch alfaaz nahin aaye phir bhi kuch khaas doston ke liye
mujh se jo bhi ho saka yahan shirkat ke liye peish kar raha hoon
umeed hai mer tooti phooti nazm aap logon ko pasand aayegi

Yeh khushboo ujale rang o bahaar
tere bin sub hi lagein mujhe bekaar
chhor kar ghussa ab maan jaa yaar

teri yaadon mein raat din tarapta hoon
teri kami ko har jageh mehsoos karta hoon
aur jab yaad teri narazgi aati hai mujhe
mein baraah e nigah badal se zyada barasta hoon

Yeh khushboo ujale rang o bahaar
tere bin sub hi lagein mujhe bekaar
chhor kar ghussa ab maan jaa yaar


naa dekhta din na hoon dekhta raat
bas har ghari karta rehta hoon ibadaat
rehti hai labon pe jaari yehi dua ke
phir apni dosti ke hon pehle se halaat

Yeh khushboo ujale rang o bahaar
tere bin sub hi lagein mujhe bekaar
chhor kar ghussa ab maan jaa yaar


ab tu nahin hai mujh se naraaz
hai hasrat ke sunoon yeh awaaz
mere dil ko bada chubhta hai
teri be rukhi ka dilnasheen yeh andaaz

Yeh khushboo ujale rang o bahaar
tere bin sub hi lagein mujhe bekaar
chhor kar ghussa ab maan jaa yaar


tere bin to be naseeb o be muqaddar mein
mehel hote huwe bhi jaise fard e be dar mein
ho chuka hai khata ka ehsaas kya tab hi maanoge
jab baha doon nigahon se samandar ke samandar mein

Yeh khushboo ujale rang o bahaar
tere bin sub hi lagein mujhe bekaar
chhor kar ghussa ab maan jaa yaar

jaanta hoon teri bhi bigri si haalat hai
tere dil mein bhi ubharti milne ki chahat hai
to kyun bandhi hai dunyavi roothne ke rasm se
to kyun nahin kar rahi to firaq se baghawat hai

Yeh khushboo ujale rang o bahaar
tere bin sub hi lagein mujhe bekaar
chhorh kar ghussa ab maan jaa yaar

***S_ChiragH***
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[Prince-Farry]

ALL THE BEST ASMA, CHIRAGH bro and HOOR Sis

 

[Hoorain]

ahan
thanx PF bro

 

[NamaL]

Assalam-o-alaikum
ye meri pehli poetry sharing ha TM pe jisy meine khud likha ha
I hope k aap logun ko pasand aye gi

Tmain Maloom To Ho Ga
K Mere Aasman Per Faqaat
Ek Hi Sitara Ha
Chamkta Ha Jo Ratoon Ko
Wohi Naam Tmhara Ha
Magar Jab Rooth’ty Ho Tum
Sitara Dhoob Jata Ha
K jesy Taiz Lehrun Main
Kinara Dhoob Jata Ha
K jesy Taiz Aandhi Main
Sahara Choyt Jata Ha
To Lagta Ha K Sansoon Ka
Tasalsal Toot’ny Ko Ha
Tmain Maloom Ha ye B
K Meri Zindagi Ho Tum
To Q Tum Rooth Jaty Ho
Jo Mujh Se Rooth Ker Tum B
Skun Se Reh Nae Paty
Khushi Zahir To Kerty Ho
Magar Khush Reh Nae Paty
Agar Tum Maan Jao To
Skhun Donun Ko Mil Jaye
Skun Tum Ko Muyassar Ho
Hansi Mjhe B Mil Jaye ​

 

[Hans_Mukh]

Woooooooooooooooooooooow sis nice poetry

Kiay baat hay app nay khud likhi hay

app tu bohat acah likh laiti hay

BEst of luck Sis
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Assalam-o-alaikum
ye meri pehli poetry sharing ha TM pe jisy meine khud likha ha
I hope k aap logun ko pasand aye gi

Tmain Maloom To Ho Ga
K Mere Aasman Per Faqaat
Ek Hi Sitara Ha
Chamkta Ha Jo Ratoon Ko
Wohi Naam Tmhara Ha
Magar Jab Rooth’ty Ho Tum
Sitara Dhoob Jata Ha
K jesy Taiz Lehrun Main
Kinara Dhoob Jata Ha
K jesy Taiz Aandhi Main
Sahara Choyt Jata Ha
To Lagta Ha K Sansoon Ka
Tasalsal Toot’ny Ko Ha
Tmain Maloom Ha ye B
K Meri Zindagi Ho Tum
To Q Tum Rooth Jaty Ho
Jo Mujh Se Rooth Ker Tum B
Skun Se Reh Nae Paty
Khushi Zahir To Kerty Ho
Magar Khush Reh Nae Paty
Agar Tum Maan Jao To
Skhun Donun Ko Mil Jaye
Skun Tum Ko Muyassar Ho
Hansi Mjhe B Mil Jaye ​

 

[NamaL]

Woooooooooooooooooooooow sis nice poetry

Kiay baat hay app nay khud likhi hay

app tu bohat acah likh laiti hay

BEst of luck Sis
​

thanx HM brother ye likhne ki himmat meine hi ki ha

 

[Asma24]

bohot hi umda asma...
bht acha likhti ho ap...
idhar to sab shayer hein..mashaAllah...
stay happy always

thanxx alot PF..aab b banjao poet..dair kis baat ki hy

 

[Asma24]

Assalam-o-alaikum
ye meri pehli poetry sharing ha TM pe jisy meine khud likha ha
I hope k aap logun ko pasand aye gi

Tmain Maloom To Ho Ga
K Mere Aasman Per Faqaat
Ek Hi Sitara Ha
Chamkta Ha Jo Ratoon Ko
Wohi Naam Tmhara Ha
Magar Jab Rooth’ty Ho Tum
Sitara Dhoob Jata Ha
K jesy Taiz Lehrun Main
Kinara Dhoob Jata Ha
K jesy Taiz Aandhi Main
Sahara Choyt Jata Ha
To Lagta Ha K Sansoon Ka
Tasalsal Toot’ny Ko Ha
Tmain Maloom Ha ye B
K Meri Zindagi Ho Tum
To Q Tum Rooth Jaty Ho
Jo Mujh Se Rooth Ker Tum B
Skun Se Reh Nae Paty
Khushi Zahir To Kerty Ho
Magar Khush Reh Nae Paty
Agar Tum Maan Jao To
Skhun Donun Ko Mil Jaye
Skun Tum Ko Muyassar Ho
Hansi Mjhe B Mil Jaye ​

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaow amazing and superb poetry bp ..i love it alot..HMM MASHAALLAH bht uumda poet ho tm dear keep it up

 

[NamaL]

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaow amazing and superb poetry bp ..i love it alot..HMM MASHAALLAH bht uumda poet ho tm dear keep it up

thanks asma sisooooooooooooooo for liking

 

[Sara Cilli Milli]

wowwwwwwwwwww bp kia baat hy u ki nyc poetry dear

 

[HuriYa]

en lamhon se guzarish kerta hy dil
dil ki dhadkno ki aah abhi baki hy
chahaton ka sisila abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
waqt ka karwan abhi ruka nahi
hawaon ka sama abhi thama nahi
phoolon ka jharna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aankho se khuwabon ka parda hat jane do
neendon se aankhien oujhal ho jane do
raaton me jugna ka chamkna abi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
aati jati muskurati yaadon ka tasawar
gaya nahi mere her pal se door
abhi lamhon pe hasraton ka chehra hata nahi
tum na jao rooth ker
wo rahat jo tmhne dekh k mil jati hy
wo betabi jo tere aane se mit jati hy
me kerlon qaid tmko apni aankhon me
tmhen jee bhar k dekhna abhi baki hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum bin kuch nahi
bas aik baat hy mere hoonto pe
k mujhe tmse mohobat hy
tum na jao rooth ker
tum na jao rooth ker.........
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Very nice poetry sis..!

Bohat acha likha..!

Gud Luck

 

[Nelly]

ahan, sooperb poetry everyone
wish u all da best​

 

[HuriYa]

Assalam o alaikum doston meri nazm peish hai doston ki khidmat mein
don din 2-2 ghante sochne aur koshish ke bawajood mujhe is topic pe
dil ki janib se kuch alfaaz nahin aaye phir bhi kuch khaas doston ke liye
mujh se jo bhi ho saka yahan shirkat ke liye peish kar raha hoon
umeed hai mer tooti phooti nazm aap logon ko pasand aayegi

Yeh khushboo ujale rang o bahaar
tere bin sub hi lagein mujhe bekaar
chhor kar ghussa ab maan jaa yaar

teri yaadon mein raat din tarapta hoon
teri kami ko har jageh mehsoos karta hoon
aur jab yaad teri narazgi aati hai mujhe
mein baraah e nigah badal se zyada barasta hoon

Yeh khushboo ujale rang o bahaar
tere bin sub hi lagein mujhe bekaar
chhor kar ghussa ab maan jaa yaar


naa dekhta din na hoon dekhta raat
bas har ghari karta rehta hoon ibadaat
rehti hai labon pe jaari yehi dua ke
phir apni dosti ke hon pehle se halaat

Yeh khushboo ujale rang o bahaar
tere bin sub hi lagein mujhe bekaar
chhor kar ghussa ab maan jaa yaar


ab tu nahin hai mujh se naraaz
hai hasrat ke sunoon yeh awaaz
mere dil ko bada chubhta hai
teri be rukhi ka dilnasheen yeh andaaz

Yeh khushboo ujale rang o bahaar
tere bin sub hi lagein mujhe bekaar
chhor kar ghussa ab maan jaa yaar


tere bin to be naseeb o be muqaddar mein
mehel hote huwe bhi jaise fard e be dar mein
ho chuka hai khata ka ehsaas kya tab hi maanoge
jab baha doon nigahon se samandar ke samandar mein

Yeh khushboo ujale rang o bahaar
tere bin sub hi lagein mujhe bekaar
chhor kar ghussa ab maan jaa yaar

jaanta hoon teri bhi bigri si haalat hai
tere dil mein bhi ubharti milne ki chahat hai
to kyun bandhi hai dunyavi roothne ke rasm se
to kyun nahin kar rahi to firaq se baghawat hai

Yeh khushboo ujale rang o bahaar
tere bin sub hi lagein mujhe bekaar
chhorh kar ghussa ab maan jaa yaar

***S_ChiragH***
​

Bohat khOob Bhae..!

ZabErdast Likha..!

Gud luck for result..!

 

[HuriYa]

ASSALAM O ALAIKUM
Topic se related kuch random lines likhi thi maine
wo aap sab k saath share karti hun
aur main ye lines apni ammi jaan ko dedicate karna chahungi

meri pyari ammi jaan
muj se na aap rootha karain
yun na moun mora karain
k aap k rooth jaane se
ye dil seham sa jaata hay
bohat takleef hoti hay
kahi na chain paata hay
dunya wairan lagti hay
kabhi jo sochti thi main
kabhi aap jo rooth jayain gi
aaram se main mna lungi
k ye to hay aasan bohat
magar ab aap roothi hain
ye dunya ajnabi se lagti hay
muje aisa kio lagta hay
k dunya naraz hay muj se
sab hi k chehre kio lag rhe hain
yun tanney hue be tasur se
kisse sunaun gi qisse
apni nadan yaadon k
kis se maangugi jawab
apne bemaani sawalon k
kon muje samjhaayega
meri bejor baaton pe
hans k kon taalega
meri in kotahio ko
k muj se hui hay bhool barri
par aap muj se na roothi rhain
k aap hi to meri
zindagi ka mehwar hain
udaas to hain aap bhi
jaanti hun ye baat main
aapki aankhon k aansu
karte hai ghamnaak muje
aap yun na roya karain
warna main bhi rooth jaungi
phir nhi mnaugi
kia maaf nhi kar payaingi
muj se khafa reh payain gi?

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BOhat khOob..!

Impressive poetry very sweet n sensitive feelings..!

Gud Luck..!

 

[HuriYa]

Assalam-o-alaikum
ye meri pehli poetry sharing ha TM pe jisy meine khud likha ha
I hope k aap logun ko pasand aye gi

Tmain Maloom To Ho Ga
K Mere Aasman Per Faqaat
Ek Hi Sitara Ha
Chamkta Ha Jo Ratoon Ko
Wohi Naam Tmhara Ha
Magar Jab Rooth’ty Ho Tum
Sitara Dhoob Jata Ha
K jesy Taiz Lehrun Main
Kinara Dhoob Jata Ha
K jesy Taiz Aandhi Main
Sahara Choyt Jata Ha
To Lagta Ha K Sansoon Ka
Tasalsal Toot’ny Ko Ha
Tmain Maloom Ha ye B
K Meri Zindagi Ho Tum
To Q Tum Rooth Jaty Ho
Jo Mujh Se Rooth Ker Tum B
Skun Se Reh Nae Paty
Khushi Zahir To Kerty Ho
Magar Khush Reh Nae Paty
Agar Tum Maan Jao To
Skhun Donun Ko Mil Jaye
Skun Tum Ko Muyassar Ho
Hansi Mjhe B Mil Jaye ​

Wah bOhat khOob..!

sis aap ka Likhnay ka andaz bOhat Acha laga.

wonderful writing..!

Gud luck

 

[Prince-Farry]

thanxx alot PF..aab b banjao poet..dair kis baat ki hy

lolz..tm poet par jayein..meri poetry dikh jaegi apko

 

[Zee Leo]

nice poetries bp asma chiragh hoorain wish u all best of luck