*~TM Poet Competition- Sep 2011 ~*

[Sabah]

Assalam o alaikum dosto kaise ho umeed k inshaAllah theek hi honge sb.
dosto main apni pahli aazaad nazm k saath yahan aapki khidmat me haazir hon.umeed k aapko pasand aayegi aur main aapki daad ka mustahiq qarar paaunga inshaAllah.

mujhe yaad aata hai beeta zamana

mujhe yaad aata hai wo beeta zamana
har ek zuban pe tha mera fasana

wo sawan ka mousam wo baarish ka paani
mujhe yaad dilaata hai beeti kahani

wo sarsabz kheton ki thandi hawayen
wo chirya o bulbul ki dilkash adayen

wo barish k paani me unka nikalna
wo chirya o bulbul wo titli pakrna

agar na mile to unpar bigarna
hame dekhte hi bikhar kar sawarna

wo thi ek larki bholi si nadan
na daulat ki khuwahish na chahat ka armaan

mujhe yaad aata hai wo beeta zamana
har ek zuban pe tha mera fasana.

(written by Arshad)​

MashAllah aapka first try tu Brilliant Poetry hai :
so very good aisa lagta nahin k pahla poem ho buhut acha hain
hope k aapse aur bhi poems read kerne ko mele..InshAllah
Best Of Luck

 

[Dawn]

shukriya aap tamam dosto ka k aapne isse pasand kia aur meri hausla afzai ki.

 

[Zee Leo]

Assalam Walaikum here is My Sharing on Barsaat well abhi recently half hours pehle likhi Hai


Barsaat Main


Kuch Qisey Puraney Yaad Aye,Ye Ankhain Num Huwin Barsaat Main
Meri Hasrat Bhari Nazrein Aaj Usey Dhondti Rahien is Barsaat Main

Har Garaj Par Ye Mera Dil Tarpa, Har Karak Par ye Mera Dil Tarsa Hai
Jo Yaad Aya mujhe Uska Seham Kar Mujhse Lipat Jana In Barsaat Main

Ye Kaisi Aag Lagi Hai Mere Dil Main Ke Dhuwa Dhuwa Sa Hai Badan
Jab Se Totey Us Se Rishtey Natey Phr Na Mili Koi Khushi Barsaat Main

Har Shay Ko Nikhaar Agaya, Aur Bujhi Hai ub Pyas In Sehraon ki Bhi
Kab Khiley Gi Kali Mere Dil Main Ye Kis Se Pochon ub Barsaat Main

Ye Kaisi Kismat Pai Maine Aur Ya Kaisa Roog Mujhe Laga Hai Zeeshan
Woh Jo Qadam Qadam Pe Sath Tha Ub Kahan Dhondo usey Barsat Main

Chupa Hai Jo Soraj Badaloon Main Woh Bhi Youn He Ojhal Hai Mujhse
Shayad Dikh Jaye Phr Ik Jhalak ye Soch Ke Nikla Phr Aaj Barsaat Main

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[saviou]

Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb
masha Allah bohot achi koshish janab

 

[*Sonu*]

wow masha'Allah bht hi acha likha hai bhai

best of luck​

 

[Amreen]

here is my entry...

annu ne mujhe poet bana hi dala...aur pata nahi maine bhi kese tukbandi kar dali hai...mujhe abhi tak yaqeeen hi nahi ho pa raha...ab jesi bhi hai pehli poetry hai meri ye...achi to nahi hi kahi ja sakti...per phir bhi maine koshish to ki hai...


Barsat ka ye mausam kyun mujhko rulata hai
toote huwe mere dil ka ye dard barhata hai

kyun iski haseen boonden mere man ko satati hain
kyun beeti huwi baaten ye yad dilati hain

bujhti huwi aankhon ko kuch aur bujahti hain
mere zeest ka sannata kuch aur barhata hai
Barsaat ka ye mausam kyun mujhko rulata hai

Ek aas mere dil mein reh reh ke machalti hai
Ab ke koi aayega ye ummeed jagati hai

Her baar ye ummeed be aas hi jati hai
Dil agle baras phir se ye aas lagata hai

Barsaat ka ye mausam kyun mujhko rulata hai
Toote huwe mere dil ka ye dard barhata hai...
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[~Bahaar~]

Amreen Sisssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Kya baat hai......acchi koshish hai,aur kahte hain k jahan dard ho Shayeri ki khubsurti aur barhti hai

Allah kare zore Qalam aur zyada aur zyadaaa............

 

[Nelly]

walaikum assalam
interesting topic main koshish karuungi koi tooti phooti poetry likh k share karne ki

Assalm u alaikum wrwb
umeed hai Alhamdulillah ap zindgi ko behtareen andaz me ji rahe ho ge..
har mah ki tarha is dafa b apko ek topic diya jaye ga..
is topic k mutaliq apko shairy likh kr yahan share krni hai
apko is muqable me jo topic diya ja rha hai.. woh hai

"Sawan/ Barish / Barsaat "
ap ki shairy me is me se kisi b lafz pe ho sakti hai.

Rules:
1=shairy apki apni likhi huvi ho.
2=shairy Nazm,Ghazal ya aazad nazm kisi b surat me ho sakti hai.
3=jo shairy ap is muqable k liye share kren woh pehle kisi jaga share na ki gyi ho.
4=ek member sirf ek hi sharing kr sakta hai.
5=sharing krne ki akhri tareekh 20 sep hai.
umeed hai ap bharpor shirkat kren ge..
best of luck

 

[Qawareer]

ok Neelam pari hume apki sharing ka intazar rahe ga..

 

[Nelly]

....ok

 

[Qawareer]

HIHIHI..ok NELLO PELLO:x

 

[Nelly]

ab theek hai:x

 

[Dawn]

here is my entry...

annu ne mujhe poet bana hi dala...aur pata nahi maine bhi kese tukbandi kar dali hai...mujhe abhi tak yaqeeen hi nahi ho pa raha...ab jesi bhi hai pehli poetry hai meri ye...achi to nahi hi kahi ja sakti...per phir bhi maine koshish to ki hai...


Barsat ka ye mausam kyun mujhko rulata hai
toote huwe mere dil ka ye dard barhata hai

kyun iski haseen boonden mere man ko satati hain
kyun beeti huwi baaten ye yad dilati hain

bujhti huwi aankhon ko kuch aur bujahti hain
mere zeest ka sannata kuch aur barhata hai
Barsaat ka ye mausam kyun mujhko rulata hai

Ek aas mere dil mein reh reh ke machalti hai
Ab ke koi aayega ye ummeed jagati hai

Her baar ye ummeed be aas hi jati hai
Dil agle baras phir se ye aas lagata hai

Barsaat ka ye mausam kyun mujhko rulata hai
Toote huwe mere dil ka ye dard barhata hai...
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wowww amreen ye kia kardia aapne mere umeedon par paani phare dia kitni mehnat se maine apni pahli ghazal likhi thi aur sooncha tha k yahi winning poetry hogi {(Sad1)}.

lagta to nahi hai k ye tumhari pahli poetry hai kyunke itna accha likha k mahsoos hi nahi hota.aapme itni salahiat hain fir kyun nahi likhtin aap?likha karen bhai.

Alff Mabrook Amreen First Poetry Is Ur Best Poetry​

 

[saviou]

here is my entry...

annu ne mujhe poet bana hi dala...aur pata nahi maine bhi kese tukbandi kar dali hai...mujhe abhi tak yaqeeen hi nahi ho pa raha...ab jesi bhi hai pehli poetry hai meri ye...achi to nahi hi kahi ja sakti...per phir bhi maine koshish to ki hai...


Barsat ka ye mausam kyun mujhko rulata hai
toote huwe mere dil ka ye dard barhata hai

kyun iski haseen boonden mere man ko satati hain
kyun beeti huwi baaten ye yad dilati hain

bujhti huwi aankhon ko kuch aur bujahti hain
mere zeest ka sannata kuch aur barhata hai
Barsaat ka ye mausam kyun mujhko rulata hai

Ek aas mere dil mein reh reh ke machalti hai
Ab ke koi aayega ye ummeed jagati hai

Her baar ye ummeed be aas hi jati hai
Dil agle baras phir se ye aas lagata hai

Barsaat ka ye mausam kyun mujhko rulata hai
Toote huwe mere dil ka ye dard barhata hai...
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mahsa Allah
kya baat hai
pehli koshish aur itni achi
bohot khoob mohtarma

 

[saviou]

walaikum assalam
interesting topic main koshish karuungi koi tooti phooti poetry likh k share karne ki

apki tooti phooti poetry ka hame intezar rahega

 

[Zee Leo]

nice ammieeeeeeeeeee buhat achi likhi u ne mashaAllah {(dancing)}

 

[Sabah]

last date kub hain?

 

[Qawareer]

last date kub hain?

20 sep last date hai

 

[Sabah]

20 sep last date hai

Sahi, Thank you Dear

 

[Qawareer]

welcome
ap participate kren gi?