*~TM Poet Competition- Sep 2011 ~*

[Dawn]

Assalam o alaikum dosto kaise ho umeed k inshaAllah theek hi honge sb.
dosto main apni pahli aazaad nazm k saath yahan aapki khidmat me haazir hon.umeed k aapko pasand aayegi aur main aapki daad ka mustahiq qarar paaunga inshaAllah.

mujhe yaad aata hai beeta zamana

mujhe yaad aata hai wo beeta zamana
har ek zuban pe tha mera fasana

wo sawan ka mousam wo baarish ka paani
mujhe yaad dilaata hai beeti kahani

wo sarsabz kheton ki thandi hawayen
wo chirya o bulbul ki dilkash adayen

wo barish k paani me unka nikalna
wo chirya o bulbul wo titli pakrna

agar na mile to unpar bigarna
hame dekhte hi bikhar kar sawarna

wo thi ek larki bholi si nadan
na daulat ki khuwahish na chahat ka armaan

mujhe yaad aata hai wo beeta zamana
har ek zuban pe tha mera fasana.

(written by Arshad)​

 

[Jiya.]

wo sawan ka mousam wo baarish ka paani​

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mujhe yaad dilaati hai beeti kahani

so nyc sharing bro
aap nay khud likhi hay kiya?
bohat achi likhi hay
ZABARDAST

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[Dawn]

wo sawan ka mousam wo baarish ka paani​

mujhe yaad dilaati hai beeti kahani

so nyc sharing bro
aap nay khud likhi hay kiya?
bohat achi likhi hay
ZABARDAST

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shukriya jiya.haan maine hi likhi hai.

 

[Nelly]

ahan nicely written bro all da best

 

[mirza37]

wow zaberdast poetry arshed bhai,,

 

[-Mahi-]

time kab tak hai
Or kitni posts ho

 

[saviou]

Assalam o alaikum dosto kaise ho umeed k inshaAllah theek hi honge sb.
dosto main apni pahli aazaad nazm k saath yahan aapki khidmat me haazir hon.umeed k aapko pasand aayegi aur main aapki daad ka mustahiq qarar paaunga inshaAllah.

mujhe yaad aata hai beeta zamana

mujhe yaad aata hai wo beeta zamana
har ek zuban pe tha mera fasana

wo sawan ka mousam wo baarish ka paani
mujhe yaad dilaata hai beeti kahani

wo sarsabz kheton ki thandi hawayen
wo chirya o bulbul ki dilkash adayen

wo barish k paani me unka nikalna
wo chirya o bulbul wo titli pakrna

agar na mile to unpar bigarna
hame dekhte hi bikhar kar sawarna

wo thi ek larki bholi si nadan
na daulat ki khuwahish na chahat ka armaan

mujhe yaad aata hai wo beeta zamana
har ek zuban pe tha mera fasana.

(written by Arshad)​

Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb
masha Allah mohtaram apto shayar bangaye
aur pehli koshish bohot hi umdah hai

Allah apke qalam me aur barkat de Aameen

 

[Qalandar]

Assalam o alaikum dosto


wo barish k paani me unka nikalna
wo chirya o bulbul wo titli pakrna

(written by Arshad)
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وہ بارش کے پانی میں ان کا نکلنا
وہ چڑیا و بلبل یا تتلی پکڑنا
بہت عمدہ، خوبصورت
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[MSC]

Assalam o alaikum dosto kaise ho umeed k inshaAllah theek hi honge sb.
dosto main apni pahli aazaad nazm k saath yahan aapki khidmat me haazir hon.umeed k aapko pasand aayegi aur main aapki daad ka mustahiq qarar paaunga inshaAllah.

mujhe yaad aata hai beeta zamana

mujhe yaad aata hai wo beeta zamana
har ek zuban pe tha mera fasana

wo sawan ka mousam wo baarish ka paani
mujhe yaad dilaata hai beeti kahani

wo sarsabz kheton ki thandi hawayen
wo chirya o bulbul ki dilkash adayen

wo barish k paani me unka nikalna
wo chirya o bulbul wo titli pakrna

agar na mile to unpar bigarna
hame dekhte hi bikhar kar sawarna

wo thi ek larki bholi si nadan
na daulat ki khuwahish na chahat ka armaan

mujhe yaad aata hai wo beeta zamana
har ek zuban pe tha mera fasana.

(written by Arshad)​

walaikum salam

Wah wah wahhhhhhh
simply awesome
bht umdaah poetry hain
Gud luck Arshad

 

[*Sonu*]

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Assalam o alaikum dosto kaise ho umeed k inshaAllah theek hi honge sb.
dosto main apni pahli aazaad nazm k saath yahan aapki khidmat me haazir hon.umeed k aapko pasand aayegi aur main aapki daad ka mustahiq qarar paaunga inshaAllah.

mujhe yaad aata hai beeta zamana

mujhe yaad aata hai wo beeta zamana
har ek zuban pe tha mera fasana

wo sawan ka mousam wo baarish ka paani
mujhe yaad dilaata hai beeti kahani

wo sarsabz kheton ki thandi hawayen
wo chirya o bulbul ki dilkash adayen

wo barish k paani me unka nikalna
wo chirya o bulbul wo titli pakrna

agar na mile to unpar bigarna
hame dekhte hi bikhar kar sawarna

wo thi ek larki bholi si nadan
na daulat ki khuwahish na chahat ka armaan

mujhe yaad aata hai wo beeta zamana
har ek zuban pe tha mera fasana.

(written by Arshad)​

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walikum salam

wow masha'Allah
beautifully written bro

best of luck​

 

[Qawareer]

بارش اور برسات لفظ میں فرق ہے لیکن موضوع تو ایک ہے۔
بہر حال کوشش کرینگے
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han ji..ap in me se kisi b lafz pe likh sakte hain topic ek sa hi hai..
inshaAllah apki sharing ka intazar rahe ga..

 

[Toobi]

arshad bhai bht khobsorat bht he ziada.......
sacche laghta he nae k apnay 1st time kuch likka hay...very nice bro..best of luck.

 

[-Mahi-]

time kab tak hai
Or kitni posts ho

merii baat ka koi jawab deh

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Assalam o alaikum dosto kaise ho umeed k inshaAllah theek hi honge sb.
dosto main apni pahli aazaad nazm k saath yahan aapki khidmat me haazir hon.umeed k aapko pasand aayegi aur main aapki daad ka mustahiq qarar paaunga inshaAllah.

mujhe yaad aata hai beeta zamana

mujhe yaad aata hai wo beeta zamana
har ek zuban pe tha mera fasana

wo sawan ka mousam wo baarish ka paani
mujhe yaad dilaata hai beeti kahani

wo sarsabz kheton ki thandi hawayen
wo chirya o bulbul ki dilkash adayen

wo barish k paani me unka nikalna
wo chirya o bulbul wo titli pakrna

agar na mile to unpar bigarna
hame dekhte hi bikhar kar sawarna

wo thi ek larki bholi si nadan
na daulat ki khuwahish na chahat ka armaan

mujhe yaad aata hai wo beeta zamana
har ek zuban pe tha mera fasana.

(written by Arshad)​

Wassalam bhai jan bohot umdaah likha hai
humein behad pasand aaya keep it up

 

[Qawareer]

time kab tak hai
or kitni posts ho

thread ghor se parhen..last date 20 hai..
Posts jitni marzi hon..

 

[Qawareer]

wassalam bhai jan bohot umdaah likha hai
humein behad pasand aaya keep it up

aur chiragh ap kb share kar rhe hain?

 

[Hoorain]

Assalam o alaikum dosto kaise ho umeed k inshaAllah theek hi honge sb.
dosto main apni pahli aazaad nazm k saath yahan aapki khidmat me haazir hon.umeed k aapko pasand aayegi aur main aapki daad ka mustahiq qarar paaunga inshaAllah.

mujhe yaad aata hai beeta zamana

mujhe yaad aata hai wo beeta zamana
har ek zuban pe tha mera fasana

wo sawan ka mousam wo baarish ka paani
mujhe yaad dilaata hai beeti kahani

wo sarsabz kheton ki thandi hawayen
wo chirya o bulbul ki dilkash adayen

wo barish k paani me unka nikalna
wo chirya o bulbul wo titli pakrna

agar na mile to unpar bigarna
hame dekhte hi bikhar kar sawarna

wo thi ek larki bholi si nadan
na daulat ki khuwahish na chahat ka armaan

mujhe yaad aata hai wo beeta zamana
har ek zuban pe tha mera fasana.

(written by Arshad)​

woww MASHAALLAH

really lovely one

bohat hi cute hay

 

[Amreen]

Assalam o alaikum dosto kaise ho umeed k inshaAllah theek hi honge sb.
dosto main apni pahli aazaad nazm k saath yahan aapki khidmat me haazir hon.umeed k aapko pasand aayegi aur main aapki daad ka mustahiq qarar paaunga inshaAllah.

mujhe yaad aata hai beeta zamana

mujhe yaad aata hai wo beeta zamana
har ek zuban pe tha mera fasana

wo sawan ka mousam wo baarish ka paani
mujhe yaad dilaata hai beeti kahani

wo sarsabz kheton ki thandi hawayen
wo chirya o bulbul ki dilkash adayen

wo barish k paani me unka nikalna
wo chirya o bulbul wo titli pakrna

agar na mile to unpar bigarna
hame dekhte hi bikhar kar sawarna

wo thi ek larki bholi si nadan
na daulat ki khuwahish na chahat ka armaan

mujhe yaad aata hai wo beeta zamana
har ek zuban pe tha mera fasana.

(written by Arshad)​

Masha Allah Arshad bhai...bohat hi achi poetry likhi hai aapne...

 

[Zee Leo]

nice janab kafi achi azad nazam likhi hai aap ne keep it up

 

[~Bahaar~]

MashAllahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Arshad bhayiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.wah wah wah...akhir ahi gaya humara asar apko....