Suraj Chand aur Sitare- by ADi
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kya baaaat hai, acche khasay poet bante jaa rahe hohey guyskal raat me apne bhatijey sufiyan ko sula raha thato ek ese hi zehen me poem agaiaj mene use pora kia hain ap logo se share ker raha hunis se ap logo k giley bhi duur hojaeinge k me sirf sad poetry hi kerta hun
- Suraj Chand aur Sitare -ye suraj chand sitare haindekho to kitne pyare hainAllah ne inhe banaya haiasma pe inko sajaya haidekho to kitne pyare hainye suraj chand sitare hainjag-mag jag-mag se taare haindekho to kitne sare hainsuraj sawere ughta haiankhu me bht ye chubta haiin me jo sab se pyara haiwo mama chanda humara haiper dost ye sab humare hainye suraj chand sitare haindesigned n written byADi
har week ese hi bhanje ko sulaya karo taa k kidz poem ki category fill hovery nicely written tho
wese mama chanda ki jagah agar chanda mama likhte tou ziyada accha sound karta adiiiiii
overall nice work
lol im moody dear mood per depend kerta hai, jo bhi likhta hun wese chanda mama to hai per mene mama chanda likha kyu k ye usi tarha fit ho raha tha n wese lafzo ko agey piche ker k likhna hi to shairo ka kamal haikya baaaat hai, acche khasay poet bante jaa rahe ho
very nicely written tho
mashaAllah
Oh aap mukkamal taur per shayer bane hue hain, yeh jho chand sitare hain dekho kitne pyaray hain waah,
mere choti sis ko vaise bhi raat ko neend nai athe usay yahi poem sunaker sulaungi I hope k neend aye usay pir.
mere choti sis ko vaise bhi raat ko neend nai athe usay yahi poem sunaker sulaungi I hope k neend aye usay pir.
zabardast Adi reallyy very nice written .. mere bachoon ke lye loorian tu he likhey ga dudehey guyskal raat me apne bhatijey sufiyan ko sula raha thato ek ese hi zehen me poem agaiaj mene use pora kia hain ap logo se share ker raha hunis se ap logo k giley bhi duur hojaeinge k me sirf sad poetry hi kerta hun- Suraj Chand aur Sitare -ye suraj chand sitare haindekho to kitne pyare hainAllah ne inhe banaya haiasma pe inko sajaya haidekho to kitne pyare hainye suraj chand sitare hainjag-mag jag-mag se taare haindekho to kitne sare hainsuraj sawere ughta haiankhu me bht ye chubta haiin me jo sab se pyara haiwo mama chanda humara haiper dost ye sab humare hainye suraj chand sitare haindesigned n written byADi
arz kia hai,Oh aap mukkamal taur per shayer bane hue hain, yeh jho chand sitare hain dekho kitne pyaray hain waah,
mere choti sis ko vaise bhi raat ko neend nai athe usay yahi poem sunaker sulaungi I hope k neend aye usay pir.
"me shayar to nahi, mager aey haseen jab se dekha mene tujhko, mujhko shyeri agai"
lols sabah ap try karein n use nino ajae to hume batana hum or bhi 5 se 6 likhdenge apki siso k lie
buddy kaho to u k lie bhi lorry likhdunzabardast Adi reallyy very nice written .. mere bachoon ke lye loorian tu he likhey ga dude
surearz kia hai,
"me shayar to nahi, mager aey haseen jab se dekha mene tujhko, mujhko shyeri agai"
lols sabah ap try karein n use nino ajae to hume batana hum or bhi 5 se 6 likhdenge apki siso k lie
Ohhhh kia baat haindekho sirf apko dekh ker hi hum shyer ban gae
is me humari nai ap ki bat hai, k ap ko dekh ker koi shyer ban gaeOhhhh kia baat hain
Hmmmm lagta hain aaj apka fast nai hain, tabhe aap itne shayerana mizaaj mei hainis me humari nai ap ki bat hai, k ap ko dekh ker koi shyer ban gae
hihi fast to hai na is per mene kaha na "mager aey haseen jab se dekha mene tujhko mujhko shyeri agai" means k ap ko dekh k hum shyerana mizaj ho rahe hainHmmmm lagta hain aaj apka fast nai hain, tabhe aap itne shayerana mizaaj mei hain
Haa voh tu samajh gaye mai, buss pir bhi pocha,hihi fast to hai na is per mene kaha na "mager aey haseen jab se dekha mene tujhko mujhko shyeri agai" means k ap ko dekh k hum shyerana mizaj ho rahe hain
hihi ap bari samjhdar hogain hain
wese suboo, ap humare sath chalna kabhi mehfil-e-shyeri me. ap sath hungi to hum ese ese sher sunaenge k mehfil hi lot lenge[DOUBLEPOST=1343193086][/DOUBLEPOST]sabah ap k yaha koi nani dadi ya or koi old women hain jo pan khati hain? 
wese suboo, ap humare sath chalna kabhi mehfil-e-shyeri me. ap sath hungi to hum ese ese sher sunaenge k mehfil hi lot lenge
[DOUBLEPOST=1343193086][/DOUBLEPOST]sabah ap k yaha koi nani dadi ya or koi old women hain jo pan khati hain? 
