Suraj Chand aur Sitare- by ADi

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Asma24

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hey guys
kal raat me apne bhatijey sufiyan ko sula raha tha​
to ek ese hi zehen me poem agai​
aj mene use pora kia hai​
n ap logo se share ker raha hun​
is se ap logo k giley bhi duur hojaeinge k me sirf sad poetry hi kerta hun :p
- Suraj Chand aur Sitare -
ye suraj chand sitare hain
dekho to kitne pyare hain
Allah ne inhe banaya hai
asma pe inko sajaya hai
dekho to kitne pyare hain
ye suraj chand sitare hain
jag-mag jag-mag se taare hain
dekho to kitne sare hain
suraj sawere ughta hai
ankhu me bht ye chubta hai
in me jo sab se pyara hai
wo mama chanda humara hai
per dost ye sab humare hain
ye suraj chand sitare hain
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ADi
how cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute and sweeet poem adi{(heart)}
but aasma ko asma kun likha hy u ne?:p
 
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~Bahaar~

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hey guys
kal raat me apne bhatijey sufiyan ko sula raha tha​
to ek ese hi zehen me poem agai​
aj mene use pora kia hai​
n ap logo se share ker raha hun​
is se ap logo k giley bhi duur hojaeinge k me sirf sad poetry hi kerta hun :p
- Suraj Chand aur Sitare -
ye suraj chand sitare hain
dekho to kitne pyare hain
Allah ne inhe banaya hai
asma pe inko sajaya hai
dekho to kitne pyare hain
ye suraj chand sitare hain
jag-mag jag-mag se taare hain
dekho to kitne sare hain
suraj sawere ughta hai
ankhu me bht ye chubta hai
in me jo sab se pyara hai
wo mama chanda humara hai
per dost ye sab humare hain
ye suraj chand sitare hain
designed n written by
ADi
Accha lagraha hai Bachpan ki taraf laut gaye ho..
Good good keep it up...
Pyara Bachpan na koi Fikr na pareshani na tension
Kash mei bhi pahunch jaaun apne Bachpan me wthout any connection
Suraj bhi wahi hai chand bhi wahi
Taray bhi wahi aur Sitaray bhi wahi
Badlay Hain Bas Hum aur humari kahaniyan
Kehne Ko to Raaten Bhi wahi aur Naani bhi wahi
 
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Atif-adi

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Accha lagraha hai Bachpan ki taraf laut gaye ho..
Good good keep it up...
Pyara Bachpan na koi Fikr na pareshani na tension
Kash mei bhi pahunch jaaun apne Bachpan me wthout any connection
Suraj bhi wahi hai chand bhi wahi
Taray bhi wahi aur Sitaray bhi wahi
Badlay Hain Bas Hum aur humari kahaniyan
Kehne Ko to Raaten Bhi wahi aur Naani bhi wahi
wah wah bahara g ap to shyera hogai :p
 

Toobi

dhondo gy molko molko milnay k nae,nayab hum..
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behtareen kawish adi....bht bht zabar10....u nay to kamal kar diya...bht piyare poetry nd bht piyara dizine kia hay...shabshah adi...good work...keep it up..:)
 
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Toobi

dhondo gy molko molko milnay k nae,nayab hum..
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adi sach bolo manay ye b itefaq say deki...ab may treadz may nae jate..dil he nae chata...but sche u ki ye potry dek kar mood acha hogiya...mujy baccho ko poetry parhana bht acha laghta hay
 
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