~~my own poetry~~

[Nelly]

Woh ajnabhi!
Jis ka har lafz
Moti ki maala hai
Woh ajnabhi……….!
Jis ki khamoshian
Bhi kayi
Daastanen sunati hain
Kayi ankahee tehreeron
Se roshnas
Karati hain………………..woh ajnabhi!
Us ki be nayazi ka
Thikana nahin koi
Apne sapnon ka
Khuwabon, khayalon ka,
Apni umangon ki
Basti ka
Makeen hai woh.
Woh ajnabhi!
Jis se koi rishta,
Naata, ta’alluq,
Koi bandhan judha nahin
Magar phir bhi
Na jaane kyun
Shanasa maloom hota hai
WOH AJNABHI………!

 

[Tariq Saeed]

hmmm,,,,

 

[Nelly]

thankoo

 

[mashraki.larka]

=D> Bohat khub.......

 

[Nelly]

thanx

 

[Lightman]

Hmmm Very Nice...

 

[Nelly]

thankoo​

 

[419]

nice.......

 

[waqas naseer]

neilli ye aap ki apni poetry hai?

 

[Nelly]

jee waqas maine khud likhi hai​

 

[*shehzadi*]

oye hoye
hmmmmm......

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oye hoye
hmmmmm......

 

[sarmad786]

nice ... coollllll

 

[Huda]

wow nelli kamal ker dya .........nice

 

[Nelly]

thanx aapi and choti

 

[*shehzadi*]

neelu ab bari hogai he bari bari baten kerne lagi he

mubarakhi neeli yar
{(ahy9)}

 

[Dreamy Boy]

Nelliiiii tum kb se shairi karne lag gaye.....
Mere sath posting ka ina asar hoga agr phele pata hota tu aj tum ek book likh chuke hote poetry ki
Hehehe
Very nice poetry Nelli

 

[Nelly]

neelu ab bari hogai he bari bari baten kerne lagi he

mubarakhi neeli yar
{(ahy9)}

Nelliiiii tum kb se shairi karne lag gaye.....
Mere sath posting ka ina asar hoga agr phele pata hota tu aj tum ek book likh chuke hote poetry ki
Hehehe
Very nice poetry Nelli

thanx both of u:x:x:x​

 

[*shehzadi*]

u welcome neeli jiger

 

[Nelly]

luv ya sisoo:x:x

 

[Sabah]

Nelli I would se superb dear...
really beautiful