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ღ*HõOriã*ღ said:
Bohat khObsurat likha hay aap nay sis..!

aur itnay sada se wOrds main Bohat deep feelings chupi hain aur Maa bhi aak aise hi hasti hay Jis k belose pyar ko samjha nahi Ja sakta..! woh bhi apni Muhabbat aur Care main utne hi Gahari hote hay..!

thx 4 sharin..!
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aweeeee thats so sweeeeeeeeeeeet of u sisoooo thankuu so much dear{(thx)}

very sweet comments from u:)
 
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thanxx alot ag..{(thx)}
ye rishta hy hi aisa k her aankh nam hojti hy..
dua hy her aulad k dil me maa k liye beinteha mohhobat bhar dey..maa ki izat se barh ker duniya me aur kya chezz hogi bhala..ajakl kuch bache maa ka kaha nahi mantey kitna dard hota hoga aik maa jab koi aulad apni maa ki baat na maney..ALLAH hm sab ki maa ko lambi umar aur uski aulad se use bht sara pyara de aameen:)
 
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Asma24 said:



thankuuuuuuuuuuuu so much chigoo bhaiya..apki trha urdu me perfect to nahi hoon bas koshish kerti hoon ..kuch alg share kerni ki...:)thanxxxx for ur sweet commentss
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hmmmm
per Urdu mein to koi bhi perfect nahin Aaso baji infact Ghalib tak ka ustad tha naa
unhein bhi kisi ne sikhaya how to do it but we dont have any teacher
aur mene to aaj tak sirf eik hi ghazalon ki kitaab parhi hai woh bhi last year li thi

aur mujhe ab tak nahin pata ke ghazal mein maqta kise aur misra kise kehte hain
aur yaqeenan aapke saath bhi kuch aisa hi scene hoga to....

its just that ke humare ashaar ke mutaliq maloomaat kam hain aur kuch nahin

and once more really mer bhi aankhein pur aab ho gaiyn touchy poetry keep writing
 
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dosto thanxx alot for liking my this little effort..{(thx)}
poetry k end me mene jo line share ki hian agr aap sab us per b kuch apne vies denge to mujhe bht khushi hogi:)
 
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S_ChiragH said:
hmmmm
per Urdu mein to koi bhi perfect nahin Aaso baji infact Ghalib tak ka ustad tha naa
unhein bhi kisi ne sikhaya how to do it but we dont have any teacher
aur mene to aaj tak sirf eik hi ghazalon ki kitaab parhi hai woh bhi last year li thi

aur mujhe ab tak nahin pata ke ghazal mein maqta kise aur misra kise kehte hain
aur yaqeenan aapke saath bhi kuch aisa hi scene hoga to....

its just that ke humare ashaar ke mutaliq maloomaat kam hain aur kuch nahin

and once more really mer bhi aankhein pur aab ho gaiyn touchy poetry keep writing
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han bhai ye funda mre sath b hy...well me kabhi kabhi poetry likhit hoon...moslty tab jab udas hoti hoon..coz meri poetry aksar tragic hoti hy..i know ye mujhpe suit to nahi kerta..hehe but kya karon fact is fact...ashaar aur correct wording..ka taal mel kabhi kabhi nahi b jamta but baz dafa aik dam correctly jam jata hy mera to...well jitna b likha hy sb dilse likha hy,,,ur poetry is awesome chigoo bhaiya..:)u also keep writing.....:)and thanxx for comments
 
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wow bht khoob asma, such hai maa jesi hasti dunia me hai kaha :)

nothing in this world is as pure as mothers love :)

i love my mum :)

beautiful share asma​
 
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acha jee u ko link milgya akhir kar..
thanxxx adi for such a sweet coment..:)veryyy trueeee
 
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ohooooooooooo bhai to ye sab hmari ustadi ka kamal hy{(haha)}
 
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