( maa )

[Asma24]

ASSALAM WALIEKUM
DOSTO
BHT DIN SE KOI POETRY SHARE NHI KI

AAJ BHT DIN BAAD AIK CHOTI SI KOSHISH KI HY
HOPE K JO PYAR BHARE COMMENTS MUJHE AP SE MILE AAJ B MERE LIYE WOHI PYAR HOGA AAP SAB KA..
AAJ JO POETRY ME SHARE KERNE JA RHI HOON
WO HY MAA


MAA
DUNIYA KI WO PYARI HASTI AUR AZEM RISHTA
JSE LAFZON ME BAYAN NAHI KIYA JA SKTA..
ES RISHTEY SE JURA HER JAZBA AUR PYAR YE WO EHSAS HY
JESE SIRF AUR SIRF MEHSOOS KIYA JATA HY..
WE ALL LOVE OUR MOTHER,,
COZ WO HY HI BHT PYARI HASTI

( MAA )



palkon ke jhooley pe jhulaya
sapno ki goudi me bithaya
tu ne maa


me bitya hoon teri
tu ne janma mujhe maa


barey nazoon se pala
hathon se khilaya
tu ne maa



mene dekhi chamak tere chehre per
jab jab khilti thi muskan mere honton per,

kitni meethi lagti thi wo lori
sehlatye hue jo sunyi thi
tu ne maa



her dardse door rakha mujhe
ponchey mere aanso


diya sahara mujhe
khushyin me her pal sanawara mujhe
tu ne maa



jab waqt aya bidyi ka
tumse door tmse judayi ka

dekh ker dulhan ke rooop me
yad hy na
kitna royi thi
tu ae maa


sasural me naye sapne lekr ayi me
anjano ko apnayi me
dekh ker
unka zulm o sitam dekh ker
girte hian mere ansoo
maa



aaj phrse mujhe wo nindiya de dey
apne hathon ki wo narmi de dey
raton ko uth ker roti hoon me

kese baton kitna yaad ati hy
tu maa




me ye poetry apni un sisters ko dedicate kerna chahti hoon jn per shadi k bad zulm hota hy

me unehn batna chahti hoon bahu ko beti ka pyar den .wo b ksi ki aulad hy jo apne parents ko chor ker
aayi hy..maa baap ki kami mehsoos hone na den beti smjh ker apanyen







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[mashraki.larka]

..beautiful thread Asmi .

Sakht Rahoon men bi Asaan Safar Lagta hai
Yeh mujko meri maan ki Duao'n ka Asar lagta hai

Aik Mudat sy meri maan nai Soi Tabish
mene aik baar kaha tha mje Dar lagta hai ..

Maan Tujy Salam ...

 

[Zee Leo]

Buhat Achi poetry likhi hai Asma u ne mujhe emotional kar dya

 

[yoursks]

Nice poetry Asma...

Maa hai hee aise azeem shakhsiyat..., jis pe Allah ka jitna bhee shukar adaa karen woh utna hee kum hai...

Allah ta'laa hum sub ko apni maa ki khidmat karne ki taufeeq ataa farmaye ameen...

 

[Jiya.]

MASHALLAH
very nyc poetry
exactly Maa sy barh kr koi cheez nahi hay

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[Jiya.]

keeeeeeep it up

 

[Sara Cilli Milli]

very nice Asma bohat achi poetry hy and very emotional also

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Wa'alaikum assalam aaso baji bohot hi achha likha hai
lajawab nazm hai inna umdah to koi na likh sake

 

[Asma24]

..beautiful thread Asmi .

Sakht Rahoon men bi Asaan Safar Lagta hai
Yeh mujko meri maan ki Duao'n ka Asar lagta hai

Aik Mudat sy meri maan nai Soi Tabish
mene aik baar kaha tha mje Dar lagta hai ..

Maan Tujy Salam ...

thankuuu so much ML

wah jee wah kya shair bola hy bht khoob...

 

[Asma24]

Buhat Achi poetry likhi hai Asma u ne mujhe emotional kar dya

thankuuuu so much deari know u will b so emotional...

 

[Asma24]

Nice poetry Asma...

Maa hai hee aise azeem shakhsiyat..., jis pe Allah ka jitna bhee shukar adaa karen woh utna hee kum hai...

Allah ta'laa hum sub ko apni maa ki khidmat karne ki taufeeq ataa farmaye ameen...

sum aameen..
thankuu so much janab

 

[Asma24]

MASHALLAH
very nyc poetry
exactly Maa sy barh kr koi cheez nahi hay

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thankuu litlle sparow jiya...

 

[Asma24]

very nice Asma bohat achi poetry hy and very emotional also

awee thankuu so much sara

 

[Asma24]

Wa'alaikum assalam aaso baji bohot hi achha likha hai
lajawab nazm hai inna umdah to koi na likh sake

thankuuuuuuuuuuuu so much chigoo bhaiya..apki trha urdu me perfect to nahi hoon bas koshish kerti hoon ..kuch alg share kerni ki...thanxxxx for ur sweet commentss

 

[Hans_Mukh]

Boaht khoob, Very beautiful , faboulus sharing Patar Patar

aik chota sa nazran meri tarf say sub ki Maaoo ki nazar


Maa Sath Hay tu Saya-e-Qudrat Be Sath hy

Maa K bagiar aisa lagay k Din Be Raat hy

Ma Dour Jao Meray sir per meri MAA k Hath Hy

Mery Liye tu Meri "MAA' he meri kaienat hy

Damaan ma MAA k sirf Wafoun K phool hy

Hum saray apni MAA ki phairon ki dhool hy

Aulad k sitam Maa Ku Hans ker qabool hy

Bacho ku Bukhsh daina he Maa Ka Asool hy

Din raat Maa nay paal phoos ker bara kiya

Girny laga tu MAA nay paker ker khara kiya


Allah Say Dua'a hy K Allah Sub Ki Maa ku Salamt Rakhay (Ameen)




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[Wasif Safi]

Walekum Assalam....

Bohot achi poetry hai Asma u ki, Mujhe bhi u ne emotional kardiya

ALLAH TAALA hum sab ke sar per Maa Baap ka saaya salaamat rakhe AMEEN..

 

[RedRose64]

beautiful and emotional sharing

 

[HuriYa]

Bohat khObsurat likha hay aap nay sis..!

aur itnay sada se wOrds main Bohat deep feelings chupi hain aur Maa bhi aak aise hi hasti hay Jis k belose pyar ko samjha nahi Ja sakta..! woh bhi apni Muhabbat aur Care main utne hi Gahari hote hay..!

thx 4 sharin..!

 

[Asma24]

Boaht khoob, Very beautiful , faboulus sharing Patar Patar

aik chota sa nazran meri tarf say sub ki Maaoo ki nazar


Maa Sath Hay tu Saya-e-Qudrat Be Sath hy

Maa K bagiar aisa lagay k Din Be Raat hy

Ma Dour Jao Meray sir per meri MAA k Hath Hy

Mery Liye tu Meri "MAA' he meri kaienat hy

Damaan ma MAA k sirf Wafoun K phool hy

Hum saray apni MAA ki phairon ki dhool hy

Aulad k sitam Maa Ku Hans ker qabool hy

Bacho ku Bukhsh daina he Maa Ka Asool hy

Din raat Maa nay paal phoos ker bara kiya

Girny laga tu MAA nay paker ker khara kiya


Allah Say Dua'a hy K Allah Sub Ki Maa ku Salamt Rakhay (Ameen)




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sum aamen..
wah bht zabrdast poetry hm bhai ..bht umda ..mene sirf aik koshish ki thi aap ne char chand lagadiye...subhanallah bhai.....thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu so much bhai and thanxx for liking my poetry also

 

[Asma24]

Walekum Assalam....

Bohot achi poetry hai Asma u ki, Mujhe bhi u ne emotional kardiya

ALLAH TAALA hum sab ke sar per Maa Baap ka saaya salaamat rakhe AMEEN..

sum aameen.....thankuu so much ssafii..really maa ka rshta hy hi aesa paak aur azeem k dil emotional hojta hy