Haal-e-Dil by Db

[sOhNi_]

bht bht bht hi achi he............ Very nyc. Weldone...

Keep sahring.....

 

[Noor_Afridi]

great job DB
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[Sabah]

even i have no word DB your poem is just incredible..
keep it up...

 

[Huda]

Very nice work....

 

[Princess Mahi]

niceeeeeeeeeeeee
Taraste rahe sirf un ki ek jhalak ke liye hum
Aur wo guzarte he nahi hamare dil ki galiyun se
Gila hume ye nahi ke chaha nahi hume
Gila sirf itna hai kai tora mera dil kise aur kai liye wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

 

[Qawareer]

Wah db........
Kya bat hai u ki.......
Booooooht aala..........
Keep it up................

 

[Zaheer-ul-abideen]

very nice sharing .... db

 

[Dreamy Boy]

wowowowwo...
Tareef k liye alfaaz nahi.....
Khuda kare zor e qalam aur zyada...
&
U r welcome DB...No Thanks Plzz..
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God bless u Bahar

 

[Dreamy Boy]

ahan zabardast Farasat....
keep it up.....

Thanks u so Much SANA

 

[Dreamy Boy]

beautiful poetry DB bro
keep it up

Shukriya SIS

 

[Dreamy Boy]

great DB=D>

keep it up...!!!​

shukriya

 

[Dreamy Boy]

well done DB
keep it up....

shukriya

 

[Dreamy Boy]

wow zabardast poetry

well done

shukriya

 

[Dreamy Boy]

Bhut khoob..............

shukriya

 

[Dreamy Boy]

good job

shukriya

 

[Dreamy Boy]

stperb

shukriya Nelli

 

[Dreamy Boy]

zabardasttttttttttttttttttt....

thanks bro

 

[Dreamy Boy]

nice DB...
carry on...

yep Shukriya Marina

 

[Dreamy Boy]

Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb
masha Allah bohot hi umdah peshkash mohtaram shayar sahab
bohot achi koshish

Bohat bohat shukriya Bro

 

[Dreamy Boy]

bht bht bht hi achi he............ Very nyc. Weldone...
Keep sahring.....

Shukriya DL