Ghazal Competition {august 2013}

[Hoorain]

hhhmm achhi thread banayi hai jarur kuchh umdaa padhne ko milegaa[DOUBLEPOST=1377356970][/DOUBLEPOST]Marne ka tere gham mein irada bhi nahi hai,
Hai ishq magar itna zyada bhi nahi hai.

Hai yoon ke ibadat ki zubaan aur hai koi,
Kagaz meri taqdeerka sada bhi nahi hai.

Kyun dekhte rehte hain sitaron ki taraf ham,
Jab unse mulaqat ka wada bhi nahi hai.

Kyun raah ke manzar mein ulajh jaati hain aankhen,
Jab dil mein koi aur irada bhi nahi hai.

Kyun uski taraf dekh ke paon nahi uth-te,
Wo shakhs haseen itna zyada bhi nahi hai.

Kis mod pe le aaya hamen hijr-e-musalsal,
Ta had-e-nigah vasl ka wada bhi nahi hai.

Patthar ki taraf sard hai kyun aankh kisi ki,
Amjad jo bichhadne ka irada bhi nahi hai.

wow khubsurat intekhab

Kyun dekhte rehte hain sitaron ki taraf ham,
Jab unse mulaqat ka wada bhi nahi hai.

 

[Azeyy]

hmmmm nyc contets @Azeyy bhaya
ME BI POST KROON GE

acha jaldy krna .............

 

[Azeyy]

Wa'alaikumussalaam nice contest ​

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Ek kaam karo aaj mujhe muhabbat ka pata do​

agar ye haqeeqat hai to haqeeqat ka pata do ​

ya mein samajh paun mohabbat ki sachai waqai​

tum mujhe kisi aisi anokhi taaqat ka pata do​

kya yeh hai mohabbat ke tum mujhe wafa ki saza do​

to tum mujhe kisi rouz shouq e zalaalat ka pata do​

ya ye mohabbat hai ke mein pal pal tumhe jafa ka gila dun​

agar hai ye mohabbat to tum inteha e shikayat ka pata do​

jo log kar ke pyar umr bhar khamosh reh jaate hain​

un pyar ke maaron ko aaj hadd e sharaafat ka pata do​

murjha gaye jitne bhi phool pyaar mein khile the​

hai salaamat koi to mujhe us phool e salaamat ka pata do​

apni majburian bata kar mehboob ka dil jalaana​

jo ise pyaar kahen tum unhein ibtida e nafrat ka pata do​

sath nibhate hain to bas apne matlab ke liye​

ye mohabbat hai to tum mujhe usool e zarurat ka pata do​

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***S_ChiragH***​

@Azeyy brother ye meri first ghazal thi​

bhoot hi koobsurat inteekaab
and best o0o0f luck....

 

[Azeyy]

waalaikum assalam
Interestinggg

nazam b share kar sakte hain na?

Chalo Choro​

Muhabbat Jhoot Hai​

Aihd-e-Wafa Ik Shugal hai Bey'kar Logoun Ka​

"Talaab" Sukhey Huey patoun ka Bey Ronaq Jazeera Hai,​

"khalish" Deemak Zada Uraaq Per Boseeda Satroun ka Zakhera Hai,​

"khumar-e-Wasal" Tapti Dhoop key Senay Pey Urtey Badaloun ki Raegan Bak'shish Hai​

"Ghubar-e-Hijrr" Sehra Mey Saraboun Sey Attey mosaam ka khamyaza!​

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Chalo Choroo,​

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key Abb Mey Andheroun ki Damakh Mey Sanss ki Manzil Pey​

Chahat ki Bina Rakh ker Safar kerta Rahun Ga,​

Mujhey Ahsaas Hi kab Thaa​

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key Tum Bhi Mosamoun key Sath Apnay Pearhan key Rang Badlo Ge!​

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Chalo Choro,​

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Mera Hona Na Hona Ik Barabar Hai​

Tum Apnay khado'khal ko Ainey Mey Phir Nikharney Do'​

Tum Apni Ankh ki Basti Mey Phir Sey Ik Naya Mosaam Utarney Do!​

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"Meray khuwaboun ko Marney Do"​

Naee Tasveer Dekhoo​

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Phir Naya Maktoob Likhoo​

Phir Naye Mosaam' Naye Lafzoun Sey Apna Silsila Joroo'​

Meray mazi ki Chahat Raigaan Samjhoo​

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Meri Yadoun Sey Kachey Rabtey Toro!​

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Chalo choro!​

Mohabbat Jhoot Hai'​

Aihd-e-Wafa Ik Shugal Hai Bey'kar Logoun Ka​

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Sori @Hoorain sis ye Gazals competion ha nazam ka nai .....

 

[Azeyy]

hhhmm achhi thread banayi hai jarur kuchh umdaa padhne ko milegaa[DOUBLEPOST=1377356970][/DOUBLEPOST]Marne ka tere gham mein irada bhi nahi hai,
Hai ishq magar itna zyada bhi nahi hai.

Hai yoon ke ibadat ki zubaan aur hai koi,
Kagaz meri taqdeerka sada bhi nahi hai.

Kyun dekhte rehte hain sitaron ki taraf ham,
Jab unse mulaqat ka wada bhi nahi hai.

Kyun raah ke manzar mein ulajh jaati hain aankhen,
Jab dil mein koi aur irada bhi nahi hai.

Kyun uski taraf dekh ke paon nahi uth-te,
Wo shakhs haseen itna zyada bhi nahi hai.

Kis mod pe le aaya hamen hijr-e-musalsal,
Ta had-e-nigah vasl ka wada bhi nahi hai.

Patthar ki taraf sard hai kyun aankh kisi ki,
Amjad jo bichhadne ka irada bhi nahi hai.

nicee sahring...............:_)

 

[Wafa_Khan]

walaikum assalam ...
nyc contest .......bht maza aye ga

 

[m0hiD]

 

[Hoorain]

Sori @Hoorain sis ye Gazals competion ha nazam ka nai .....

oh no
is topic par ghazal meri pasand ki to meko nhi miling

 

[whiteros]

waalaikum assalam
Interestinggg

nazam b share kar sakte hain na?

Chalo Choro​

Muhabbat Jhoot Hai​

Aihd-e-Wafa Ik Shugal hai Bey'kar Logoun Ka​

"Talaab" Sukhey Huey patoun ka Bey Ronaq Jazeera Hai,​

"khalish" Deemak Zada Uraaq Per Boseeda Satroun ka Zakhera Hai,​

"khumar-e-Wasal" Tapti Dhoop key Senay Pey Urtey Badaloun ki Raegan Bak'shish Hai​

"Ghubar-e-Hijrr" Sehra Mey Saraboun Sey Attey mosaam ka khamyaza!​

​

Chalo Choroo,​

​

key Abb Mey Andheroun ki Damakh Mey Sanss ki Manzil Pey​

Chahat ki Bina Rakh ker Safar kerta Rahun Ga,​

Mujhey Ahsaas Hi kab Thaa​

​

key Tum Bhi Mosamoun key Sath Apnay Pearhan key Rang Badlo Ge!​

​

Chalo Choro,​

​

Mera Hona Na Hona Ik Barabar Hai​

Tum Apnay khado'khal ko Ainey Mey Phir Nikharney Do'​

Tum Apni Ankh ki Basti Mey Phir Sey Ik Naya Mosaam Utarney Do!​

​

"Meray khuwaboun ko Marney Do"​

Naee Tasveer Dekhoo​

​

Phir Naya Maktoob Likhoo​

Phir Naye Mosaam' Naye Lafzoun Sey Apna Silsila Joroo'​

Meray mazi ki Chahat Raigaan Samjhoo​

​

Meri Yadoun Sey Kachey Rabtey Toro!​

​

Chalo choro!​

Mohabbat Jhoot Hai'​

Aihd-e-Wafa Ik Shugal Hai Bey'kar Logoun Ka​

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bilkul bilkul...............GOODLUCK

 

[whiteros]

oh no
is topic par ghazal meri pasand ki to meko nhi miling

CHALO MARE TAREEF WAPAS KRO

 

[Hoorain]

CHALO MARE TAREEF WAPAS KRO

aap ne tareef ki hi nhi ab tak @whiteros

 

[Masoom_girl]

walikum a salam =)​

Tere ikhlas se mohabbat ki hai​

Tere ehsas se mohabbat ki hai​

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Tu mere pass nahn he phir bhi​

Tere yad se mohabbat ki hai​

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kabhi to tu ne bi mujhe yad kia hoga​

Me ne un lamhaat se mohabbat ki hai​

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Jin mein hoon tere mere batein ​

Main ne un auqaat se mohabbat ki hai​

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Aur mehky hon sirf tere mohabbat se ​

Main ne un jazbaat se mohabbat ki hai​

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Tujh se milna to ab khawab sa lagta hai​

Main ne tere intezar se mohabbat ki hai.. ​

 

[Azeyy]

ye kiya sahring ki ha ap ney

 

[Azeyy]

walikum a salam =)​

Tere ikhlas se mohabbat ki hai​

Tere ehsas se mohabbat ki hai​

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Tu mere pass nahn he phir bhi​

Tere yad se mohabbat ki hai​

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kabhi to tu ne bi mujhe yad kia hoga​

Me ne un lamhaat se mohabbat ki hai​

​

Jin mein hoon tere mere batein ​

Main ne un auqaat se mohabbat ki hai​

​

Aur mehky hon sirf tere mohabbat se ​

Main ne un jazbaat se mohabbat ki hai​

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Tujh se milna to ab khawab sa lagta hai​

Main ne tere intezar se mohabbat ki hai.. ​

u ko muhabbat hu b gai ha.......

 

[m0hiD]

ye kiya sahring ki ha ap ney

ghazal about love ! kiyo aapko acha nahi laga

 

[Azeyy]

walaikum assalam ...
nyc contest .......bht maza aye ga

mejy inteezar rahey ga ap u ki sharing ka...

 

[Azeyy]

ghazal about love ! kiyo aapko acha nahi laga

acha lagney ki nai khuch Show nai hu raha ic leye ap ko kaha

 

[Azeyy]

Aslamu Alikum TM........​

i hope sary Memberz kariyat or mazey me hogey or jo nai ha wo ab hu jaye theek....​

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so0o0 me ap logo k leye aik competion ley kr aya hu titell ce tu andaza hu raha ha k kisi​

cheez ka compeition Strt honey wala hey....​

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Starting Gazal Competition Thiz Month​

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ic thread me ap ney apni choice ki gazal post krni ha....​

Topic Is​

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MOHABBAT​

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Rules...​

1. aik member aik hi gazal post kr sakta ha....
2. dosra ye k jo gazal phely post ki gai hu koi dosra member wo gazal post ni kary ga
3. topic ce haat kr kisi ney gazal post ki tu us post ko mana nai jaye ga.... THe last date of Gazal competion iz 30/8/2013......

@faari @lazy_misbah

 

[m0hiD]

acha lagney ki nai khuch Show nai hu raha ic leye ap ko kaha

but mujhai to show ho raha hai ...

 

[Azeyy]

but mujhai to show ho raha hai ...

per mejy nai.......