Ghazal Competition {august 2013}

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Azeyy

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Aslamu Alikum TM........{(lai67)}
i hope sary Memberz kariyat or mazey me hogey or jo nai ha wo ab hu jaye theek....:p
so0o0 me ap logo k leye aik competion ley kr aya hu titell ce tu andaza hu raha ha k kisi
cheez ka compeition Strt honey wala hey....:)
Starting Gazal Competition Thiz Month
ic thread me ap ney apni choice ki gazal post krni ha....
Topic Is
MOHABBAT
Rules...
  1. aik member aik hi gazal post kr sakta ha....
  2. dosra ye k jo gazal phely post ki gai hu koi dosra member wo gazal post ni kary ga
  3. topic ce haat kr kisi ney gazal post ki tu us post ko mana nai jaye ga.... THe last date of Gazal competion iz 30/8/2013......
 

Shiraz-Khan

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Aslamu Alikum TM........{(lai67)}
i hope sary Memberz kariyat or mazey me hogey or jo nai ha wo ab hu jaye theek....:p
so0o0 me ap logo k leye aik competion ley kr aya hu titell ce tu andaza hu raha ha k kisi
cheez ka compeition Strt honey wala hey....:)
Starting Gazal Competition Thiz Month
ic thread me ap ney apni choice ki gazal post krni ha....
Topic Is
MOHABBAT
Rules...
  1. aik member aik hi gazal post kr sakta ha....
  2. dosra ye k jo gazal phely post ki gai hu koi dosra member wo gazal post ni kary ga
  3. topic ce haat kr kisi ney gazal post ki tu us post ko mana nai jaye ga.... THe last date of Gazal competion iz 30/8/2013......
Ws

Nice contest Azeyy bro
best of luck to al memberzzz :D
 
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Azeyy

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Aug 17, 2012
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Aslamu Alikum TM........{(lai67)}
i hope sary Memberz kariyat or mazey me hogey or jo nai ha wo ab hu jaye theek....:p
so0o0 me ap logo k leye aik competion ley kr aya hu titell ce tu andaza hu raha ha k kisi
cheez ka compeition Strt honey wala hey....:)
Starting Gazal Competition Thiz Month
ic thread me ap ney apni choice ki gazal post krni ha....
Topic Is
MOHABBAT
Rules...
  1. aik member aik hi gazal post kr sakta ha....
  2. dosra ye k jo gazal phely post ki gai hu koi dosra member wo gazal post ni kary ga
  3. topic ce haat kr kisi ney gazal post ki tu us post ko mana nai jaye ga.... THe last date of Gazal competion iz 30/8/2013......
@Abidi
 

Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh

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Wa'alaikumussalaam nice contest :-bd
Ek kaam karo aaj mujhe muhabbat ka pata do
agar ye haqeeqat hai to haqeeqat ka pata do

ya mein samajh paun mohabbat ki sachai waqai
tum mujhe kisi aisi anokhi taaqat ka pata do

kya yeh hai mohabbat ke tum mujhe wafa ki saza do
to tum mujhe kisi rouz shouq e zalaalat ka pata do

ya ye mohabbat hai ke mein pal pal tumhe jafa ka gila dun
agar hai ye mohabbat to tum inteha e shikayat ka pata do

jo log kar ke pyar umr bhar khamosh reh jaate hain
un pyar ke maaron ko aaj hadd e sharaafat ka pata do

murjha gaye jitne bhi phool pyaar mein khile the
hai salaamat koi to mujhe us phool e salaamat ka pata do

apni majburian bata kar mehboob ka dil jalaana
jo ise pyaar kahen tum unhein ibtida e nafrat ka pata do

sath nibhate hain to bas apne matlab ke liye
ye mohabbat hai to tum mujhe usool e zarurat ka pata do
***S_ChiragH***

@Azeyy brother ye meri first ghazal thi
 

whiteros

'"The queen of kindness''
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Wa'alaikumussalaam nice contest :-bd
Ek kaam karo aaj mujhe muhabbat ka pata do
agar ye haqeeqat hai to haqeeqat ka pata do
ya mein samajh paun mohabbat ki sachai waqai
tum mujhe kisi aisi anokhi taaqat ka pata do
kya yeh hai mohabbat ke tum mujhe wafa ki saza do
to tum mujhe kisi rouz shouq e zalaalat ka pata do
ya ye mohabbat hai ke mein pal pal tumhe jafa ka gila dun
agar hai ye mohabbat to tum inteha e shikayat ka pata do
jo log kar ke pyar umr bhar khamosh reh jaate hain
un pyar ke maaron ko aaj hadd e sharaafat ka pata do
murjha gaye jitne bhi phool pyaar mein khile the
hai salaamat koi to mujhe us phool e salaamat ka pata do
apni majburian bata kar mehboob ka dil jalaana
jo ise pyaar kahen tum unhein ibtida e nafrat ka pata do
sath nibhate hain to bas apne matlab ke liye
ye mohabbat hai to tum mujhe usool e zarurat ka pata do
***S_ChiragH***

@Azeyy brother ye meri first ghazal thi
NICE..........GOODLUCK......:)
 

Hoorain

*In search of Oyster Pearls*
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A n3st!
waalaikum assalam
Interestinggg :-bd

nazam b share kar sakte hain na?
Chalo Choro
Muhabbat Jhoot Hai
Aihd-e-Wafa Ik Shugal hai Bey'kar Logoun Ka
"Talaab" Sukhey Huey patoun ka Bey Ronaq Jazeera Hai,
"khalish" Deemak Zada Uraaq Per Boseeda Satroun ka Zakhera Hai,
"khumar-e-Wasal" Tapti Dhoop key Senay Pey Urtey Badaloun ki Raegan Bak'shish Hai
"Ghubar-e-Hijrr" Sehra Mey Saraboun Sey Attey mosaam ka khamyaza!

Chalo Choroo,

key Abb Mey Andheroun ki Damakh Mey Sanss ki Manzil Pey
Chahat ki Bina Rakh ker Safar kerta Rahun Ga,
Mujhey Ahsaas Hi kab Thaa

key Tum Bhi Mosamoun key Sath Apnay Pearhan key Rang Badlo Ge!

Chalo Choro,

Mera Hona Na Hona Ik Barabar Hai
Tum Apnay khado'khal ko Ainey Mey Phir Nikharney Do'
Tum Apni Ankh ki Basti Mey Phir Sey Ik Naya Mosaam Utarney Do!

"Meray khuwaboun ko Marney Do"
Naee Tasveer Dekhoo

Phir Naya Maktoob Likhoo
Phir Naye Mosaam' Naye Lafzoun Sey Apna Silsila Joroo'
Meray mazi ki Chahat Raigaan Samjhoo

Meri Yadoun Sey Kachey Rabtey Toro!

Chalo choro!
Mohabbat Jhoot Hai'
Aihd-e-Wafa Ik Shugal Hai Bey'kar Logoun Ka
 

Mahen

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waalaikum assalam
Interestinggg :-bd

nazam b share kar sakte hain na?
Chalo Choro
Muhabbat Jhoot Hai
Aihd-e-Wafa Ik Shugal hai Bey'kar Logoun Ka
"Talaab" Sukhey Huey patoun ka Bey Ronaq Jazeera Hai,
"khalish" Deemak Zada Uraaq Per Boseeda Satroun ka Zakhera Hai,
"khumar-e-Wasal" Tapti Dhoop key Senay Pey Urtey Badaloun ki Raegan Bak'shish Hai
"Ghubar-e-Hijrr" Sehra Mey Saraboun Sey Attey mosaam ka khamyaza!
Chalo Choroo,
key Abb Mey Andheroun ki Damakh Mey Sanss ki Manzil Pey
Chahat ki Bina Rakh ker Safar kerta Rahun Ga,
Mujhey Ahsaas Hi kab Thaa
key Tum Bhi Mosamoun key Sath Apnay Pearhan key Rang Badlo Ge!
Chalo Choro,
Mera Hona Na Hona Ik Barabar Hai
Tum Apnay khado'khal ko Ainey Mey Phir Nikharney Do'
Tum Apni Ankh ki Basti Mey Phir Sey Ik Naya Mosaam Utarney Do!
"Meray khuwaboun ko Marney Do"
Naee Tasveer Dekhoo
Phir Naya Maktoob Likhoo
Phir Naye Mosaam' Naye Lafzoun Sey Apna Silsila Joroo'
Meray mazi ki Chahat Raigaan Samjhoo
Meri Yadoun Sey Kachey Rabtey Toro!
Chalo choro!
Mohabbat Jhoot Hai'
Aihd-e-Wafa Ik Shugal Hai Bey'kar Logoun Ka
ahan really nishh sharing {(vian)}
 
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vamp545

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hhhmm achhi thread banayi hai jarur kuchh umdaa padhne ko milegaa[DOUBLEPOST=1377356970][/DOUBLEPOST]Marne ka tere gham mein irada bhi nahi hai,
Hai ishq magar itna zyada bhi nahi hai.

Hai yoon ke ibadat ki zubaan aur hai koi,
Kagaz meri taqdeerka sada bhi nahi hai.

Kyun dekhte rehte hain sitaron ki taraf ham,
Jab unse mulaqat ka wada bhi nahi hai.

Kyun raah ke manzar mein ulajh jaati hain aankhen,
Jab dil mein koi aur irada bhi nahi hai.

Kyun uski taraf dekh ke paon nahi uth-te,
Wo shakhs haseen itna zyada bhi nahi hai.

Kis mod pe le aaya hamen hijr-e-musalsal,
Ta had-e-nigah vasl ka wada bhi nahi hai.

Patthar ki taraf sard hai kyun aankh kisi ki,
Amjad jo bichhadne ka irada bhi nahi hai.
 
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