Ek Shaks Wo Aj Is Tarha Se Chor Gaya - By Adi

[Fa!th]

bht khoob likha hai

 

[Rubi]

kaatil ko talash akhir kis simt me karo
baad-e-halaakat jane wo kis oor gaya

 

[marzish]

very beautiful words nd design [DOUBLEPOST=1363192786][/DOUBLEPOST]Ankhon ko intazar ka dy k hunar chala gaya
Chaha tha aik shakhs ko jany kidhr chala gaya ???

 

[Mahen]

really awesome sharing @Atif-adi

 

[FallenAngeL]

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Rishta mera yun ghum se wo jor gaya​

Ek shaks wo aj is tarha se chor gaya​

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rishta mera yun ghum se wo jor gaya​

ek shaks wo aj is tarha se chor gaya​

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aatish me azmaish ki phenk ker mujhe​

tarapta hua wo mujh ko piche chor gaya​

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baab-e-umeed charo su ke band hue​

gira ker nazar se wo jo mun mor gaya​

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kya pukaro us ko be-dard ya be-kadar​

jo dil me bas ker dil ko mere tor gaya​

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kaatil ko talash akhir kis simt me karo​

baad-e-halaakat jane wo kis oor gaya​

​

kese lote pal wo jo guzre khushi ke​

kuch is tarha se waqt ko mere rok gaya​

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dikha ker muhabbat kia yun waar us ne​

khanjar jiger k par wo bhok gaya​

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Written & design​

by ​

ADi​

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Awesomeeeeee poetryyyy !
masha ALLAH bht achi likhi hai ...

 

[Tishna-Kaam]

xabardast poetry aur design dono

 

[ShyPrincess]

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Rishta mera yun ghum se wo jor gaya​

Ek shaks wo aj is tarha se chor gaya​

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​

rishta mera yun ghum se wo jor gaya​

ek shaks wo aj is tarha se chor gaya​

​

aatish me azmaish ki phenk ker mujhe​

tarapta hua wo mujh ko piche chor gaya​

​

baab-e-umeed charo su ke band hue​

gira ker nazar se wo jo mun mor gaya​

​

kya pukaro us ko be-dard ya be-kadar​

jo dil me bas ker dil ko mere tor gaya​

​

kaatil ko talash akhir kis simt me karo​

baad-e-halaakat jane wo kis oor gaya​

​

kese lote pal wo jo guzre khushi ke​

kuch is tarha se waqt ko mere rok gaya​

​

dikha ker muhabbat kia yun waar us ne​

khanjar jiger k par wo bhok gaya​

​

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Written & design​

by ​

ADi​

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Beautifullly written and designed Keep it up!

 

[Sweet-doll]

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Rishta mera yun ghum se wo jor gaya​

Ek shaks wo aj is tarha se chor gaya​

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​

rishta mera yun ghum se wo jor gaya​

ek shaks wo aj is tarha se chor gaya​

​

aatish me azmaish ki phenk ker mujhe​

tarapta hua wo mujh ko piche chor gaya​

​

baab-e-umeed charo su ke band hue​

gira ker nazar se wo jo mun mor gaya​

​

kya pukaro us ko be-dard ya be-kadar​

jo dil me bas ker dil ko mere tor gaya​

​

kaatil ko talash akhir kis simt me karo​

baad-e-halaakat jane wo kis oor gaya​

​

kese lote pal wo jo guzre khushi ke​

kuch is tarha se waqt ko mere rok gaya​

​

dikha ker muhabbat kia yun waar us ne​

khanjar jiger k par wo bhok gaya​

​

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Written & design​

by ​

ADi​

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wow adi itni udasi kaun chor gaya apko??
jis ki judae men poet ban gaye??

 

[Atif-adi]

wow adi itni udasi kaun chor gaya apko??
jis ki judae men poet ban gaye??

lols poet to hum bht pehle se hain

 

[Sweet-doll]

han ho tou par itni udasi q

 

[Atif-adi]

han ho tou par itni udasi q

udas to nai hun me?

 

[Sweet-princess]

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Rishta mera yun ghum se wo jor gaya​

Ek shaks wo aj is tarha se chor gaya​

====================================​

​

rishta mera yun ghum se wo jor gaya​

ek shaks wo aj is tarha se chor gaya​

​

aatish me azmaish ki phenk ker mujhe​

tarapta hua wo mujh ko piche chor gaya​

​

baab-e-umeed charo su ke band hue​

gira ker nazar se wo jo mun mor gaya​

​

kya pukaro us ko be-dard ya be-kadar​

jo dil me bas ker dil ko mere tor gaya​

​

kaatil ko talash akhir kis simt me karo​

baad-e-halaakat jane wo kis oor gaya​

​

kese lote pal wo jo guzre khushi ke​

kuch is tarha se waqt ko mere rok gaya​

​

dikha ker muhabbat kia yun waar us ne​

khanjar jiger k par wo bhok gaya​

​

====================================​

Written & design​

by ​

ADi​

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hmmmmmm...nice..

 

[Atif-adi]

hmmmmmm...nice..

lols kya hua?

 

[Sweet-princess]

lols kya hua?

itni sad poetry.....

 

[Atif-adi]

itni sad poetry.....

hmm kabhi kabi esi bhi kerni chaiye na

 

[Syeda Fatima]

nysshhhhh.....

 

[whiteros]

woww wah bohat ZABADAST w+d .................thanks share kia

 

[Silent_tear_hurt]

itni tareef to ho gai hain jnb ab hum kia kheain koi alfaz he nai bachy

"Ruksat hva to wo hath mila kr nahi gia
wo khan gia ye bhe bta kr nahi gia
ais alagta hai abi loat aiiy ga
jaaty hvay wo cherag bujha kr nahi gia "

 

[Seemab_khan]

MASHALLAH

 

[soul_of_silence]

nice poetry....