Ek Shaks Wo Aj Is Tarha Se Chor Gaya - By Adi

[Atif-adi]

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Rishta mera yun ghum se wo jor gaya​

Ek shaks wo aj is tarha se chor gaya​

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rishta mera yun ghum se wo jor gaya​

ek shaks wo aj is tarha se chor gaya​

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aatish me azmaish ki phenk ker mujhe​

tarapta hua wo mujh ko piche chor gaya​

​

baab-e-umeed charo su ke band hue​

gira ker nazar se wo jo mun mor gaya​

​

kya pukaro us ko be-dard ya be-kadar​

jo dil me bas ker dil ko mere tor gaya​

​

kaatil ko talash akhir kis simt me karo​

baad-e-halaakat jane wo kis oor gaya​

​

kese lote pal wo jo guzre khushi ke​

kuch is tarha se waqt ko mere rok gaya​

​

dikha ker muhabbat kia yun waar us ne​

khanjar jiger k par wo bhok gaya​

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Written & design​

by ​

ADi​

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[Atif-adi]

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[faari]

buhat hoob likha nice

 

[Sabah]

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Rishta mera yun ghum se wo jor gaya​

Ek shaks wo aj is tarha se chor gaya​

====================================​

​

rishta mera yun ghum se wo jor gaya​

ek shaks wo aj is tarha se chor gaya​

​

aatish me azmaish ki phenk ker mujhe​

tarapta hua wo mujh ko piche chor gaya​

​

baab-e-umeed charo su ke band hue​

gira ker nazar se wo jo mun mor gaya​

​

kya pukaro us ko be-dard ya be-kadar​

jo dil me bas ker dil ko mere tor gaya​

​

kaatil ko talash akhir kis simt me karo​

baad-e-halaakat jane wo kis oor gaya​

​

kese lote pal wo jo guzre khushi ke​

kuch is tarha se waqt ko mere rok gaya​

​

dikha ker muhabbat kia yun waar us ne​

khanjar jiger k par wo bhok gaya​

​

====================================​

Written & design​

by ​

ADi​

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itna sad poetry??? sad poetries always make me sad that's why I mostly avoid reading them..
but kio k aapne likha tu buhut acha likha and padhna he padha... well written atif and truely TM pe kafi hidden talents hai and multi talented people..

 

[SUBHAANA]

Zabardast

Boht khub

Keep it up

 

[zonii]

hmm nicee

 

[Hoorain]

ahan umdaa jnab,,mehfil loot li aap ne
kaatil ko talash akhir kis simt me karun
baad-e-halaakat jane wo kis oor gaya

 

[Nadaan_Shazie]

wOoOooOW vryy nycee

 

[Mhk31]

Woww.........beautiful.
Bht khoob likha hai....keep it up!!!

 

[parri]

hmmmm......Nice bro.,,

 

[Fantasy]

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Rishta mera yun ghum se wo jor gaya​

Ek shaks wo aj is tarha se chor gaya​

====================================​

​

rishta mera yun ghum se wo jor gaya​

ek shaks wo aj is tarha se chor gaya​

​

aatish me azmaish ki phenk ker mujhe​

tarapta hua wo mujh ko piche chor gaya​

​

baab-e-umeed charo su ke band hue​

gira ker nazar se wo jo mun mor gaya​

​

kya pukaro us ko be-dard ya be-kadar​

jo dil me bas ker dil ko mere tor gaya​

​

kaatil ko talash akhir kis simt me karo​

baad-e-halaakat jane wo kis oor gaya​

​

kese lote pal wo jo guzre khushi ke​

kuch is tarha se waqt ko mere rok gaya​

​

dikha ker muhabbat kia yun waar us ne​

khanjar jiger k par wo bhok gaya​

​

====================================​

Written & design​

by ​

ADi​

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zaberdast poetry bro

 

[Dawn]

Assalam alaikum adi
mashaAllah adi aapne bahot pyari koshish ki.bahot badhiya likha.aur uspar design bhi bahot khoob hai. aksar urdu poetries ko agar urdu me hi likha jaaye to uska wazn bhi khoob hota hai.

 

[sabha_khan40]

Awala nice.....................

 

[~Ambitiou$ Girl~]

bohat awla
it really deserves the best compliment

 

[Farisa]

Beautiful way of expression and very nice vocabulary

 

[sweet_c_kuri]

Ohhh wow very nice well done...!!!

 

[zoonia]

wah tif bhai bohtttttttt umdaaaaaaaaah

 

[Strangr]

Zabardast likha hai bro., aur designing bhi khoob hai

 

[Binte_Hawwa]

waooooooooooooooooooooooo zaberdast

 

[Mah-e-Roo]

really awesome sharing ​