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[H@!der]

lolxxx abhi aap ny shairi ky kafi maraahal tay karny hain na... ek din mein tu koi shaair nahi ban jata.. it's your first try i guess. iss liye ab is ko first time mein he BEST tu nahi ka ja sakta.. but aap koshish karain gy tu behtar sy behtar hoty jaain gy

bahut shukriyaa ap ki input kaa.. well 1st to nai he.. but .. siadi ke baad u can say 1st hi he.. so shadi ke baad wese b men r re-born naa pehly ke to sab jazbaat dil ke aur alfaaz dimag ke kone khadron se nikaal kar nichawar kar chuka hon

koshish karta hon ke kuch pukhtagi aaey..

 

[H@!der]

lolxxx abhi aap ny shairi ky kafi maraahal tay karny hain na... ek din mein tu koi shaair nahi ban jata.. it's your first try i guess. iss liye ab is ko first time mein he BEST tu nahi ka ja sakta.. but aap koshish karain gy tu behtar sy behtar hoty jaain gy

bahut shukriyaa ap ki input kaa.. well 1st to nai he.. but .. siadi ke baad u can say 1st hi he.. so shadi ke baad wese b men r re-born naa pehly ke to sab jazbaat dil ke aur alfaaz dimag ke kone khadron se nikaal kar nichawar kar chuka hon

koshish karta hon ke kuch pukhtagi aaey..

 

[Rubi]

achaa

bahut shukriyaa..
pasandeedgi ke liye

well.. kabi kabhar likhta hon magar.. be-tukaa. ghazal kafi time se koi nahi bandhi.. ek aadha shair bana liya wese hi.. aur phir bhool gyaa
ab soch raha hon ke jo banaon.. us ko note kar lon