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h@!der said:
well.. i said it bcoz its no good :p
anyway if u wana waste ur time.. b my guest :D

after .. lets say Ages.. i tried to write something.. thats bcoz i read too many Shair d other day.. and i guess usi ki waja se Shayri ki badhazmi ho gyee muje..
so jaisey choti moti biymarion ke liye ghareloo totkey use kiye jaty hen.. like "Zahida Aapa ke Ghareloo Totkey", wese hi me ne b kuch try kiya he
ab yeh aap log hi bataaen ke is se muje Afaqa ho sakta he ke nai.. means Yehi medicen jaari rahon yaa fir.....
kisi Hakeem se rabta karon :D

please spare me if its prior d case :D

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h@!der said:
lolzz.. yeh tareef thi kyaa???

n selection nahi mohterma.. khud ki hey yeh to =))

n student for what?? to keep an eye on me??? ":D
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ye poetry aap en khud likhi:-? main nae maanti ,,yaqeen dilayain :D

yeah student "two in one" ;))
 
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Rubi said:
nice try :-bd
akhri 2 shaer mujhy achy lagy sabsy
baqi b achy hyn.. :happy
ab nhi likhty??
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bahut shukriyaa..
pasandeedgi ke liye :)

well.. kabi kabhar likhta hon magar.. be-tukaa. :p ghazal kafi time se koi nahi bandhi.. ek aadha shair bana liya wese hi.. aur phir bhool gyaa :D
ab soch raha hon ke jo banaon.. us ko note kar lon :)
 
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Hoorain said:
hahaha ahem ahem :p
acha ab yaqeen dilayain ye aapne likhi :D
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3 tareeqe hen..

ya to aap ko raw file bhaij don??

yaa fir .. ek aur shair se explain karon..

yaa fir new ghaal likhon aur apa ki khidmat me paish kar don??
 
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h@!der said:
3 tareeqe hen..

ya to aap ko raw file bhaij don??

yaa fir .. ek aur shair se explain karon..

yaa fir new ghaal likhon aur apa ki khidmat me paish kar don??
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ahan
aap sirf itna b keh sakte thay,,k "naam hi akfi hay" main maan jaati :D

anywayz mazaq kr rhi thi,,,,really awesome main baar baar parhi scroll up kr kr k ,,,muje ane pta tha apa itne ache poet b ho MashaALlah,,,ab to competition rakhwana parega TM poets k darmyan :-bd
 
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aila.. bhagoooooooooooooooooooooooo

arry nahi sisi.. ab aisa b nahi.. asal me rawani tab aati he jab ap likhty rahen .. magar jab salon me kuch likhney baitho to alfaaz hi zehen me nahi baithty..

aur.. bahut shukriyaa.. apa ki tehseen ka.. :) .. sairon khoon badhaa diiyaa mer aap ne :p

aur.. NAAM pe manwaney waly aye aasman nahi hum..
agar Sabat jo karna he to apney dam pe karna he.

=))
 
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h@!der said:
aila.. bhagoooooooooooooooooooooooo

arry nahi sisi.. ab aisa b nahi.. asal me rawani tab aati he jab ap likhty rahen .. magar jab salon me kuch likhney baitho to alfaaz hi zehen me nahi baithty..

aur.. bahut shukriyaa.. apa ki tehseen ka.. :) .. sairon khoon badhaa diiyaa mer aap ne :p

aur.. NAAM pe manwaney waly aye aasman nahi hum..
agar Sabat jo karna he to apney dam pe karna he.

=))
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hahaha wah wah

jis naam ki baat hum kar rhe hain wo bazat-e-khud bohat damdaar hay to naam b kaafi hay idhar ;))
 
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Hoorain said:
hahaha wah wah

jis naam ki baat hum kar rhe hain wo bazat-e-khud bohat damdaar hay to naam b kaafi hay idhar ;))
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kal ko aap ne muje kisi Sabun waly Sufi..ya kisi Daldey waly Habib bhai ke sath jorr dena he :p
 
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h@!der said:
Wese.. Sab ke comments aur funny ratings dekh ke muje b lagney lag gya he k yeh ek funny ghazal hi he.. Halanke likhaa to seriously hi thaa. Magar lagta he meri tamheed ne marwa diya muje.. Kyun @Shizu @Hoorain @DesiGirl @thefire1 @Rubi ..aisa hi he na kuch? :(
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lolxxx abhi aap ny shairi ky kafi maraahal tay karny hain na... ek din mein tu koi shaair nahi ban jata.. it's your first try i guess. iss liye ab is ko first time mein he BEST tu nahi ka ja sakta.. but aap koshish karain gy tu behtar sy behtar hoty jaain gy
 
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