Complete the Shair by Adding a " Misra"

[فہد]

han right chalo next misra do

 

[Hoorain]

hum ko ilm hay katil k sab thikano ka...............

 

[فہد]

Hum Ko Ilm Hai Qatil Ke Sab Thikanon Ka
Ek Dil Main Rehta Hai Or Baqi Zehen Main

 

[Hoorain]

ahan nice one

hum ko ilm hay qatil k sab thikano ka
shareek_e_jurm na hote to mukhbari kartey

agla aap do?

 

[فہد]

Na Mile Zeher TO Apna Hi Lahu Peete Hain...

 

[Hoorain]

is ka nhi ban rha

na miley zehar to apna hi lahu peete hain
hum to bas naam hi ka jeetey hain??

 

[فہد]

wah wah kya shair hai
bt sahi wala shair yun hai


Na Mile Zeher To Apna Hi Lahu Peete Hain
Jaam Khali Nahi Rehte Kabhi Suqraaton ke

 

[Hoorain]

na titly hay na jugnoo aah sham_e_bekasi

 

[فہد]

Na Titly Hai Na Jugno Ahh SHam e Bekasi
Bas Sochen Hain Jo Soch Rhi Hain Woh Sham e DilNasheen?

 

[Hoorain]

Na Titly Hai Na Jugno Ahh SHam e Bekasi
Bas Sochen Hain Jo Soch Rhi Hain Woh Sham e DilNasheen?

wow superb

koi titly hay na jugnoo aah shaam_e_bekasi
aaj dil may nastran ki shaakh phir chubne lagi


ur turn

 

[فہد]

Yeh Wafa Un DIno Ki Baat Hai Faraz..

 

[Hoorain]

ye wafa un dino ki baat hay faraz
jab hum waile hue kartey thay

 

[فہد]

wah wah ek dam truth
yeh wafa un dino ki baat hai faraz
jab log suche or makan kuche hoa karte the

 

[Hoorain]

wah wah ek dam truth
yeh wafa un dino ki baat hai faraz
jab log suche or makan kuche hoa karte the

haha thanx

nice shaer

main chahti hi na thi tujhe lajwab karna,.............

 

[فہد]

Main Hi Na Chahti Thi TUjhe LaJawab Karna
Warna Javab Mere Pas Tere Har Sawal Ka Tha

 

[saba123]

good idea....................

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Humein aap ki baat durust tarah se samajh nahin aaiy
humein wahi ghazal ka misra peish karna hai
yaa misra khud bana kar peish karna hai umeed
hai aap ya koi bhi wazahat jald peish karega Thanks

 

[Hoorain]

Humein aap ki baat durust tarah se samajh nahin aaiy
humein wahi ghazal ka misra peish karna hai
yaa misra khud bana kar peish karna hai umeed
hai aap ya koi bhi wazahat jald peish karega Thanks

waise to wohi ghazal ka misra paish karna tha

par us k baad baqi members ne apni taraf se bhi bna kar misrey paish kiye
so aap bhi agar chaho to apni taraf se bhi bna saktey hain
yaqeen hay k aapko samajh aa gai hogi

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Ji hum bilkul samajh gaye aur shukria reply ka

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Main Hi Na Chahti Thi TUjhe LaJawab Karna
Warna Javab Mere Pas Tere Har Sawal Ka Tha

Hum shikwa bhi karne aaye hain to tujh se tere hi liye jaana
mouzoon kab hi aaj tak chhira mere haal ka tha

***S_ChiragH***​

 

[Hoorain]

Ji hum bilkul samajh gaye aur shukria reply ka

---------- Post added at 11:13 PM ---------- Previous post was at 11:10 PM ----------

Hum shikwa bhi karne aaye hain to tujh se tere hi liye jaana
mouzoon kab hi aaj tak chhira mere haal ka tha

***S_ChiragH***​

ahan bohat khoob
par aap shayed samjhey nhi


aap kisi bhii shaer ka sirf aik misra dain gaye
aur agla member us ka agla misra bnaayega khud se ya jo asal misra hay wohi likheyga

jaise main aapko aiik misra deti hoon aapko us se agla bnana hay


"tu to hamain bura mat keh aey dunya"..............next misra aap bnayain