Complete the Shair by Adding a " Misra"

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  1. ZeeShan

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    Salam to All of You!

    Dear Participents lets we prove ourselves as if we are the best coordinator and reader of the poetry and have a fruitful stuff for others here, by completing the Shair with a line..

    here we go..........

    Is qadar musalsal theen, shiddatain judai ki...
     
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    jayse tapish ho kissi aftab ki .....
     
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    Is qadar musalsal theen, shiddatain judai ki
    Phir bhi dillon mein thein, Khuwahishein Shanasai ki

    Woh mugh se door reh kar bhi mere pass rehta tha Aksar
    Magar us ke pyar mein thein ulfattein Ruswai Ki.
     
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    very nice
     
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    Is qadar musalsal theen, shiddatain judai ki...
    k tum sun na sako ge baat meri tanhai ki
     
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    hmmm nice game chalo yeh shair complete kro

    Kya Sitam Hai Ke Ab Teri Sorat...
     
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    is qadar musalsal theen shiddatain judayi ki
    phir bhi aankhon may thi ramaq shansai ki {(popcorn)}
     
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    kia sitam hay k ab tairi surat :s

    kia sitam hay k ab tairi surat................
    waisi nhi dikhti jaisi fair&lovely lagane se pehle hua karti thi ;))
     
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    Array seriouse wala batao na
     
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    kia sitam hay k ab tairi surat.
    aayne may bhi hamain khud ko dikhne nhi daiti :s


    pata nhi aur koi ban nhi rha tha me se fahad bhai ap khud hi bta dain doosra misra {(popcorn)}
     
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    Kya Sitam Hai Ke Ab Teri Sorat
    Ghor Karne Per Yaad Ati Hai

    now u koi shair do
     
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    aey dil_e_nadan tujhe hua kia hay ........
     
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    itna easy
    Dil e Nadan Tujhe Hoa Kya Hai
    Akhir Is Dard Ki Dawa Kya Hai
    Hum Hain Mushtaq Or Woh Hain Bezaar
    ilaahi Yehi Maajra Kya Hai
     
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    oh qacha ye tha in fact me ko agli lines yaad nhi aa rhi thi is lie poocha {(popcorn)}

    aik misra daina hay aur next memebrs apni marzi se agla misra bna sakte hain ya phir agle wala sahi misra hi dhoondhna hay?


    acha ye banayain

    phirti hay sar_e_shaam chadar may lipat kar..................
     
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    Apni marzi se nhe banana hota balke shair ko usi misre se complet krna hota hai jo real shair hota hai n u ne jo dya wo nhi ata muje
     
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    ooooooooooopsh wo shaer abhi tak bna hi nhi to aap ko aayega kaise ;))

    fahad bhaya format change kartey hain
    koi bhi misra dain aur apni marzi se agla misra bna k shaer complete karte hain

    in fact ye misra maine khud hi dia baqi saare to easy thay wo to sab ko aate hon gaye is lie nhi diye


    aap issi misre k aage apni marzi se koi misra banayain .......??
     
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    Ok bt istarha to sab hi apni marzi se bna lya karenge to next misrah kon dya krega phr?
     
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    yahan aata hi kon hay :s

    hmm aise kartey hain k jis ne pehla misra dia hay wo hi bataye ga k ab kon agla misra de ga

    shaer poora hone k baad

    chalain ab aap agla misra banyain
     
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    Ok thek hai
    Dewaar Kya Giri Mere Kuche Makan Ki..
     
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    hmm ye aap ne agla misra bataya hay pichle shaer ka

    ya koi misra dia hay next person k lie?
     

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