ohhhhh achaaaaaaMatlab ke jin pages pe jin messeges me ghazalen likheen
baad me wahan dhoondhin to meri ghazalen nahin thi aise [DOUBLEPOST=1346435325][/DOUBLEPOST]
Shukria shukria
hmmmm aap ki baat theek se samajh nahin aaiy . . .
Hahha LoLzzz ab aisa bhi nahin hai ji [DOUBLEPOST=1346437209][/DOUBLEPOST]hmmmmm shukar hai samjh a gai warna pta nae kese samjhana parta
Thanks for liking my ghazal bro . . .[DOUBLEPOST=1346437243][/DOUBLEPOST]wa'laikum us salaam...
wonderful
aisa saaniha phir shaayad hi kisi ko naseeb ho
humen dushman ki bad dua lagi bohot pyaari
nice and keep sharing..
Bohot bohot shukria insha'ALLAH I will share more . . .[DOUBLEPOST=1346437269][/DOUBLEPOST]Mashallah
Zabardast
La jawab
Thnks for sharing
Keeep it up bro
Haan jiohhhhh achaaaaaa
Shukria bhai jan shukria . . .[DOUBLEPOST=1346446020][/DOUBLEPOST]bohat khoob janab ap ny tu mehfil loot le
aye haye!
Bewafa bhi kabhi kisi ko pyari lagte hain???
sach mein be misal hai appke ghazal bro
Shukria shukria Masoom sisaye haye!
Bewafa bhi kabhi kisi ko pyari lagte hain???
sach mein be misal hai appke ghazal bro
yeh bhi sahi hai1Shukria bhai jan shukria . . .[DOUBLEPOST=1346446020][/DOUBLEPOST]
Shukria shukria Masoom sis
ab kisi ke dil ka haal kisi khud jaane
hum ne to apne dil ke sadaon ko
soorat e ghazal de kar peish kiya hai
hahaAap bhi kar leti hain shayari ??
Hmmmm Masha'ALLAH good sohaha
kabhi aise likha toh nahi hain
but haa akele mein bait kar kuch lines khud bana lete hon.....
i like poetry
aur poet's se kafi inspired hoon
mein ne kabhi himmat nahi ki likhne kiHmmmm Masha'ALLAH good so
thori aur koshish karogi aap to Insha'ALLAH
aap ko achhi tarah se shayari likhna aa jayega . . .
Mein bhi shuru me sirf fan tha sisomein ne kabhi himmat nahi ki likhne ki
aur itni bhi achi poetry nahi ati mujhe!
mei just fan hon...
omg yr,itni achi poetry kahan se kr lety ho,phr se classess shoro kro meri,mje ni pta.Assalaamu alaikum TM meri taaza ghazal peish haiinsha'ALLAH aap sub ko pasand aayegiAda lagi bohot pyaariChiragH ho kar bhi aaj hawa lagi bohot pyaarimujh ko aaj us zaalim ki ada lagi bohot pyaarikese na chal dete hum qaatil ke peeche peechedil ko humare qatil ki sada lagi bohot pyaarihumen ishq per ta dam e aakhir fakhr rahawoh bhi hai khush jise ana lagi bohot pyaariaisa saaniha phir shaayad hi kisi ko naseeb hohumen dushman ki bad dua lagi bohot pyaarinajaane kyun loug wafadaar dhoondhte hainChiragH ko to bas ek bewafa lagi bohot pyaari***S_ChiragH***
Bohot bohot shukria Faith sis . . .[DOUBLEPOST=1346481139][/DOUBLEPOST]wah wah wahhhhh
zabardast
Hmmmmm thankss [DOUBLEPOST=1346481203][/DOUBLEPOST]opssss so sad
najaane kyun loug wafadaar dhoondhte hain
ChiragH ko to bas ek bewafa lagi bohot pyaari
Shukria ji shukria : )[DOUBLEPOST=1346481240][/DOUBLEPOST]aisa saaniha phir shaayad hi kisi ko naseeb ho
humen dushman ki bad dua lagi bohot pyaari
wah wah bohat he ZABARDAST
Shukria ji insha'ALLAH mazeed bhi likhengen . . .[DOUBLEPOST=1346481357][/DOUBLEPOST]2nd shair is really nice..............
likhty raha krin chiragh bhiya.............
Ji bas ata ALLAH PAK kiomg yr,itni achi poetry kahan se kr lety ho,phr se classess shoro kro meri,mje ni pta.
Bohot bohot shukria Hooooooor sis meri ghazal se to aapkewaalaikum assalam
aisa saaniha phir shaayad hi kisi ko naseeb ho
humen dushman ki bad dua lagi bohot pyaari
najaane kyun loug wafadaar dhoondhte hain
ChiragH ko to bas ek bewafa lagi bohot pyaari
wah wah wah kia baat hay chiraghu bhayaaaa
BOhat khoob,,bohat dilchasp andaz hay
KEEP it up
STA BLESSED!