Chiragh Ho Kar Lagi Hawa Bohot Pyari

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

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Assalaamu alaikum TM meri taaza ghazal peish hai​

insha'ALLAH aap sub ko pasand aayegi​

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Ada lagi bohot pyaari​

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ChiragH ho kar bhi aaj hawa lagi bohot pyaari​

mujh ko aaj us zaalim ki ada lagi bohot pyaari​

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kese na chal dete hum qaatil ke peeche peeche​

dil ko humare qatil ki sada lagi bohot pyaari​

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humen ishq per ta dam e aakhir fakhr raha​

woh bhi hai khush jise ana lagi bohot pyaari​

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aisa saaniha phir shaayad hi kisi ko naseeb ho​

humen dushman ki bad dua lagi bohot pyaari​

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najaane kyun loug wafadaar dhoondhte hain​

ChiragH ko to bas ek bewafa lagi bohot pyaari​

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***S_ChiragH***​

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[Rubi]

walaikumsalam​

xbrdst bro​

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aisa saaniha phir shaayad hi kisi ko naseeb ho​

humen dushman ki bad dua lagi bohot pyaari​

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btw kinvi ghazal ae yeh aapki?? ​

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[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

walaikumsalam​

xbrdst bro​

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aisa saaniha phir shaayad hi kisi ko naseeb ho​

humen dushman ki bad dua lagi bohot pyaari​

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btw kinvi ghazal ae yeh aapki?? ​

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Bohot bohot shukria Rubi siso

ji mene hisab to yaad nahin rakha ab

ALHAMDULILLAH taqreeban 120 se barh hi gaye hongen . . .

 

[Aks_]

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Assalaamu alaikum TM meri taaza ghazal peish hai
insha'ALLAH aap sub ko pasand aayegi

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Ada lagi bohot pyaari​

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ChiragH ho kar bhi aaj hawa lagi bohot pyaari​

mujh ko aaj us zaalim ki ada lagi bohot pyaari​

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kese na chal dete hum qaatil ke peeche peeche​

dil ko humare qatil ki sada lagi bohot pyaari​

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humen ishq per ta dam e aakhir fakhr raha​

woh bhi hai khush jise ana lagi bohot pyaari​

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aisa saaniha phir shaayad hi kisi ko naseeb ho​

humen dushman ki bad dua lagi bohot pyaari​

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najaane kyun loug wafadaar dhoondhte hain​

ChiragH ko to bas ek bewafa lagi bohot pyaari​

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***S_ChiragH***​

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bht khoob

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

bht khoob

Shukria ji shukira . . .

 

[Rubi]

Bohot bohot shukria Rubi siso

ji mene hisab to yaad nahin rakha ab

ALHAMDULILLAH taqreeban 120 se barh hi gaye hongen . . .

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
mabrukkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
mabrukkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

Khair mubarak lekin aap ne munh kyun bigara huwa hai is baat per ??

 

[Rubi]

Khair mubarak lekin aap ne munh kyun bigara huwa hai is baat per ??

nhin em surprised actually

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

nhin em shocked actually

Shocked LoLzzz really ??

 

[Zee Leo]

wah ji nice magar kaun hai woh bewafa?

 

[Rubi]

Shocked LoLzzz really ??

yahhh
mjhy toh 160- 165 tk lg rhi theeee

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

yahhh
mjhy toh 160- 165 tk lg rhi theeee

Then you are correct

 

[Rubi]

Then you are correct

ahan
mgr beech beech mein se kch aapko psnd ni ati hongi hy naw??[DOUBLEPOST=1346434359][/DOUBLEPOST]

wah ji nice magar kaun hai woh bewafa?

btaiye bro

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

ahan
mgr beech beech mein se kch aapko psnd ni ati hongi hy naw??[DOUBLEPOST=1346434359][/DOUBLEPOST]
btaiye bro

Hmmmmm sahi kaha waise kuch gumi bhi hain

un sub ko count karke total utna hi bana hoga

 

[Rubi]

Hmmmmm sahi kaha waise kuch gumi bhi hain

un sub ko count karke total utna hi bana hoga

haaaaan
gum kyse gyinn???

 

[faari]

Masha Allah buhat hi achi gazal hai acha laga parh kr wese mera hiyaal hai k ab eik compition hona chahiye khud sahta gazal ka matlab apni likhi hoi aur eik alag se threat creat hona chahiye aur jo shair chahiye is me entry kr ly kiyu kya hiyaal hai ....................

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

haaaaan
gum kyse gyinn???

Matlab ke jin pages pe jin messeges me ghazalen likheen
baad me wahan dhoondhin to meri ghazalen nahin thi aise [DOUBLEPOST=1346435325][/DOUBLEPOST]

Masha Allah buhat hi achi gazal hai acha laga parh kr wese mera hiyaal hai k ab eik compition hona chahiye khud sahta gazal ka matlab apni likhi hoi aur eik alag se threat creat hona chahiye aur jo shair chahiye is me entry kr ly kiyu kya hiyaal hai ....................

Shukria shukria

hmmmm aap ki baat theek se samajh nahin aaiy . . .

 

[faari]

Matlab ke jin pages pe jin messeges me ghazalen likheen
baad me wahan dhoondhin to meri ghazalen nahin thi aise [DOUBLEPOST=1346435325][/DOUBLEPOST]

Shukria shukria

hmmmm aap ki baat theek se samajh nahin aaiy . . .

ary jnab mean k hum eik threat lagaein gy jahan pr sab apni best gazal share krein gy apni khud ki likhi hoi phir eik gazal jis lafz pr hatam ho gi next wala usi lafz se wo gazal ya shair likhy ga[DOUBLEPOST=1346435966][/DOUBLEPOST]

Matlab ke jin pages pe jin messeges me ghazalen likheen
baad me wahan dhoondhin to meri ghazalen nahin thi aise [DOUBLEPOST=1346435325][/DOUBLEPOST]

Shukria shukria

hmmmm aap ki baat theek se samajh nahin aaiy . . .

ary jnab mean k hum eik threat lagaein gy jahan pr sab apni best gazal share krein gy apni khud ki likhi hoi phir eik gazal jis lafz pr hatam ho gi next wala usi lafz se wo gazal ya shair likhy ga

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

ary jnab mean k hum eik threat lagaein gy jahan pr sab apni best gazal share krein gy apni khud ki likhi hoi phir eik gazal jis lafz pr hatam ho gi next wala usi lafz se wo gazal ya shair likhy ga[DOUBLEPOST=1346435966][/DOUBLEPOST]
ary jnab mean k hum eik threat lagaein gy jahan pr sab apni best gazal share krein gy apni khud ki likhi hoi phir eik gazal jis lafz pr hatam ho gi next wala usi lafz se wo gazal ya shair likhy ga

Ahaan matlab bait baazi qism ka thread ji samajh gaya
bohot hi aala sochi ho aap per sheir nahin phir ghazal
hi hone chahiyen is tarah to bohot hi maza aayega insha'ALLAH

 

[faari]

hmmmmm shukar hai samjh a gai warna pta nae kese samjhana parta