Yeh bheid hum ab tak jaan nahin paaye

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Assalam o alaikum TM ke tamam achhe achhe dil azeez doston
jaise ke aap sub jaante hain ke guzre dinon yeh ChiragH shadeed
masaaiyb o bimaarion mein mubtila tha aur us hi dauran yani 103-4
level wale bukhar ki haalat mein hum ne kuch ishaar likhe jo is waqt
aap doston ke peish e khidmat hain, umeed hai aap logon ko pasand aayengeen

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Yeh bheid hum ab tak jaan nahin paaye
ke insanon ke nagri mein insan nahin paaye

yeh jo apna samajhte hain is dunya ko inhein
hosh do ke yahan kabhi kisi ne mezban nahin paaye

tang aa kar chorh gaye hum bhi dunya ke riwajon ko
barson rul kar bhi hum ne wafa ke qadardan nahin paaye

insanon ke naam pe bane huwe kaiyn ghar the magar
jin mein insan baste bhi hon waise makan nahin paaye

***S_ChiragH***​

 

[*khushi*]

insanon ke naam pe bane huwe kaiyn ghar the magar
jin mein insan baste bhi hon waise makan nahin paaye

bohat bohat khhobsoorat poetry hai

i really liked it

nd very true
bemaari or preshani ki halat main itni achi poetry likhty hain to theek hon gay to aap ki poetry ka kia aalam hoga

keep it up

 

[Asma24]

wah wah bhai bht khooooooooooob ..jawab nahi aapka chigoo bhiya .aap kya khatey ho jo itni poetry aapke maind me aati rehti hy..?tell me the raz{(dancing)}

 

[Khwahish]

wow
bohot hi khobsurat lekha hai
aap ne
keep sharing with us
or mujhe ye line bohot hi passand ay
tang aa kar chorh gaye hum bhi dunya ke riwajon ko
barson rul kar bhi hum ne wafa ke qadardan nahin paaye

 

[Amreen]

wah kya bat hai saif...bohat umdah shayri hai...

 

[Jiya.]

wow MASHALLAH v.nycc chiragh
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[SHB_Bhaiya]

Mashallah bohat khoobsurat superb poetry....

 

[Hans_Mukh]

Bohat Khoob janab

Bohat achi poetry likhy hay saif bhai app nay

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

bohot bohot shukria pyare pyare doston
yunhi housla afzaiy karte rahein meri thanks 2 all