shukria Bela Sis shukria . . .wo0o0ow bht khubsurat ha ye ghazal........
jug jug jiyo........
shukria Bela Sis shukria . . .wo0o0ow bht khubsurat ha ye ghazal........
jug jug jiyo........
Shukria shukria ji haan bohot hi ukta gaya tha tab tehreer huwi yeh ghazalbohat khOob.! very nice Laken bohat uktaye huye andaz main likhi hay..!
keep writin..!
thik kaha bhaiyabohat achi shairi hai.. lekan ap ko chahe iqbal wali shairi karain. Jis se sab ka bala ho
ap ko mian shairi mian jowab deta hun.thik kaha bhaiya
yeh mamla bohat gherai wala hai.. S..chiragh ne jo ghalaz post ki woh kisi hoor kay liey gai thi.. Lekan Ilam / knowelge esi jannat hai jis ko talash mian lag gaya tau phir us ko saroor milay ga or kisi hoor ka diyan nahi rahay ga.. Ilam ki talab yeh cheez bhi kisi jannat se kaam nahi.. ..Yani ilam aik jannat hai.. Jannat jaisa saroor hai.. lekan ess mian hoor nahi hai..dil bina bhi kr khuda se talab
aankh ka noor dil ka noor nahin
wah bilkul
but ye hoor wala kia ma'mla hai
ap ne iqbal ki shairi samjni hoi ye kisi bhi sher ka matlib samj na aye main hazir hun.. ap aik naya thread bhi laga sakti hai.... Thanks and peacelike this n thankssssssssssss bhaya
hmmm main khas tor se to nai padhti but jo mil jay .....n bar bar gor krne ne ALLAH MIYAN kuchh na kuchh paly daal deta hai..,,ap ne iqbal ki shairi samjni hoi ye kisi bhi sher ka matlib samj na aye main hazir hun.. ap aik naya thread bhi laga sakti hai.... Thanks and peace
{(upset)} es trha sad sad ghazal na likha kren chigoo bhiaya ..be happy alwaz .but any waz beautifull ghazalAssalamo alaikum TM meri eik taazi ghazal aap subke khidmat mein peish hai
Insha'ALLAH azwajal subhi ko pasand aayegi aur taalib e ghour ghazal hai kyunke
bare hi udaas sanjeeda ranjeeda o haqeeqi mizaj o tabiyat rakhte huwe is ghazal
ko tehreer kiya mene so umeed hai ke insha'ALLAH
nigah e dil se ghour o fikar kiya jaayega is ghazal per
Use meri dilruba na kehna
Rakhna adab use ab meri dilruba na kehnauske iqrar kabhi inqar ko uski khata na kehnaho sakta hai youn tauheen mere pyaar kamere dildaar se kisi ko tum bhala na kehnauski saadgi yeh ke use saadgi bhi nahi naatimere jaana ki ada ko chalaki ki ada na kehnasuna hai dawa badalne se marz barhta hai aksaryaad e jana ke siwa kisi ko dard ki dawa na kehnamohabbat aur ibadat jabran nahin hote so hum nenaa maan liya uska haan keh kar naa naa kehnamajboori apni rani ki lekin dil samajh chukaaye zaman mere yaar ko tu bewafa na kehnakahin kabhi mere haal se use dukh na pohncheis jalte ChiragH ka sanam ko kabhi pata na kehna***S_ChiragH***
Ab qalam hi ro raha tha so rota qalam aise hi ashaar tehreer farmata hai Aasho baji{(upset)} es trha sad sad ghazal na likha kren chigoo bhiaya ..be happy alwaz .but any waz beautifull ghazal
qalam ka kaam to tehreer krna hota hy bhaii ..rotye to jazbat hian ..dil k jazabat agr rnjeeda hon to khud b khud qlam chlne parta hy ..Ab qalam hi ro raha tha so rota qalam aise hi ashaar tehreer farmata hai Aasho baji
Ameen
Shukria shukria
ALLAH aapko hamesha khush ibaadtguzaar shukrguzaar bandon mein se kar de Ameen sum Ameen . . .
Hmmmm hoshiyar ho rahi hain Aaso bajiqalam ka kaam to tehreer krna hota hy bhaii ..rotye to jazbat hian ..dil k jazabat agr rnjeeda hon to khud b khud qlam chlne parta hy ..
thanxx for sweeet dua chigoo bhaiya so sweet of ukhush rho