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Assalaamu alaikum doston umeedan ke sub theek thaak ALHAMDULILLAH
agar koi mere is umeed se baahir hai to bol de use duaaen dengen INSHA'ALLAH
so is waqt yahaan mein aap subke saath apni eik ghazal share kar raha hoon
jise parh kar aap subko hamesha ki tarah bolna hai ke ghazal kaisi hai
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Eik hi dua armaan aur khwahish hai tum meri ho jao​
mere dil ki tum se yehi guzarish hai tum meri ho jao​
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daawe chand taaron ke nahin lekin tere khatir​
jaan se guzarne ki gunjaiysh hai tum meri ho jao​
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meir justaju guftagu meri baaten din aur raaten​
har qadam per meri yehi koshish hai tum meri ho jao​
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masroof zindagi se waqt mile to sunne aana​
yehi kehti mere aankhon ki barish hai tum meri ho jao​
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sisakta bilakta rehta hoon ghum e firaq se aksar​
khushi milne per eik hi bandish hai tum meri ho jao​
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ye dard e judaiy zakhm e ruswaiy sada ke nahin​
bas ye tab tak ki ranjish hai tum meri ho jao​
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barson ke intizr barson ke pyaar ke baad​
ab nahin rehti koi aur azmaiysh hai tum meri ho jao​
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mere din ko din raat ko raat banane aao​
har aate jate sans ki farmaiysh hai tum meri ho jao​
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***S_Chiragh***​
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sabha_khan40 said:
Aha niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee:)
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Ahaan shukriaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

DuFFer said:
hmmmmmmmmm very nice yaar
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hummmm shukria bhai

Mahen said:
wha wha Mr Poet :p bhiya ye kisy kah rhy ap tum meri ho jao meri ho jao {(moc)}

mere din ko din raat ko raat banane aao
har aate jate sans ki farmaiysh hai tum meri ho jao {}{43r5 :p
@S_ChiragH
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Hahha shukria miss poetess :p
mein kisi ko thoraiy keh raha hoon bas shayari likhi hai {(dance)}
ab ise parh kar koi ho jaao to uski marzi na behna (213)
..@Mahen
 
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Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb :)
shayar sahab kin mohtarma se keh rahe hian ke tum meri ho jao
bohot achi koshish Ma Sha Allah :)
 
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Mahen said:
shkur hai ap py :p


























































nhi gie {(moc)}
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Haan achha hai mujh pe nahin gaiy warna aqal ke saath saath amal bhi karne lagti
aur kaam karke meri sust behna kamzour par jaati {}{456

saviou said:
Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb :)
shayar sahab kin mohtarma se keh rahe hian ke tum meri ho jao
bohot achi koshish Ma Sha Allah :)
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Kisi se nahin bhai aise hi ghazal tehreer ki hai :)
bohot bohot shukria pasand karne ka :)
 
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S_ChiragH said:
Haan achha hai mujh pe nahin gaiy warna aqal ke saath saath amal bhi karne lagti
aur kaam karke meri sust behna kamzour par jaati {}{456



Kisi se nahin bhai aise hi ghazal tehreer ki hai :)
bohot bohot shukria pasand karne ka :)
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kia matlab :eek: aqal k sath amal /:) mein ap ko puri pagal nazar ati ho kia :p thori aqal hai abi muj mein :D
mein sust nhi ho /:) mera brain bhot kam krta hai :D
 
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S_ChiragH said:
Assalaamu alaikum doston umeedan ke sub theek thaak ALHAMDULILLAH
agar koi mere is umeed se baahir hai to bol de use duaaen dengen INSHA'ALLAH
so is waqt yahaan mein aap subke saath apni eik ghazal share kar raha hoon
jise parh kar aap subko hamesha ki tarah bolna hai ke ghazal kaisi hai
​
Eik hi dua armaan aur khwahish hai tum meri ho jao​
mere dil ki tum se yehi guzarish hai tum meri ho jao​
​
daawe chand taaron ke nahin lekin tere khatir​
jaan se guzarne ki gunjaiysh hai tum meri ho jao​
​
meir justaju guftagu meri baaten din aur raaten​
har qadam per meri yehi koshish hai tum meri ho jao​
​
masroof zindagi se waqt mile to sunne aana​
yehi kehti mere aankhon ki barish hai tum meri ho jao​
​
sisakta bilakta rehta hoon ghum e firaq se aksar​
khushi milne per eik hi bandish hai tum meri ho jao​
​
ye dard e judaiy zakhm e ruswaiy sada ke nahin​
bas ye tab tak ki ranjish hai tum meri ho jao​
​
barson ke intizr barson ke pyaar ke baad​
ab nahin rehti koi aur azmaiysh hai tum meri ho jao​
​
mere din ko din raat ko raat banane aao​
har aate jate sans ki farmaiysh hai tum meri ho jao​
​
***S_Chiragh***​
​
​
​
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well done S_chiragh bhut he ala likha hai :) :) wesy ye farmish kis ko kr rahy thy ??:p :p
 
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ChoCo said:
Chiragh bro kia ap k sath b aise hota hai k kisi time bs ashaar ki amad amad hoti hai and poetry bht achi bn jati and kisi time bs jitni marzi koshish kr lo nahi bnti :)
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Ji haan bilkul aur iska zikr mene baaz dafa kiya hai doston ke saath ;)

rahath said:
well done S_chiragh bhut he ala likha hai :) :) wesy ye farmish kis ko kr rahy thy ??:p :p
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Anhaan bohot bohot shukria saraahne ka @rahath ;;) ;;) kisi ko bhi nahin :p

masoom_se_chahat said:
Walaikum salam....
Wah wah wahhhhhhhhhh.....
MashaALLAH Awesome :-bd
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Bohot bohot bohotttttttttttttttttttttttt
shukria shukriaaaaaaaaaaaaa ;;) :p
 
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