"TM pe Aapka Safar" Article COntest 2012!

[Hoorain]

Assalam o ALaikum

TM ki 6th Birthday k special Event pe aap sab k liye aik special contest!

Bohat hi Simple Contest hay Is contest may AAP sab ko ko aik aik article likhna ha!

article may aapko TM k baare may aur TM pe aap k safar k baare may kuch Special likhna hay, apni true feelings ko arrange kar k article ki soorat deni hay!

TM pe aap k pehle din se ab tak ka safar kaisa rha TM kaisa laga Is safar may kis kis se mulaqat hui aur kia special hay about TM sab btana hay!

Points to remember!

1. Aap jo bhi likhain article ki soorat may hona chahiye,, Koshish karain k thora professional touch dain article ko!

2. Article Urdu ya English kisi bhi language, ROman ya Urdu kisi bhi font may likh sakte hain!

3. Article interesting way may likhain tan k parh k bhi maza aaye!

4. Sirf maske nhi maarne apni true feelings btayain apne is safar k baare may!

5. Aur koshish karain k words 500 se ziada na hon!

6. Aap apna article 25th may raat 12 bajey tak submit karwa sakte hain!

7. Article ka title sab members apni marzi se dain gaye aur title k bhi points hon gaye,jis ka ziada acha title hoga usko ziada points milain gaye!

8. aap jab article likhen tou usey isi section main ek thread laga kar share karen n then us thread ka link idhar share kar den

Result main aur RR decide karain gaye!

in sab points k mutabiq jis ka article ziada interesting, words limits k andar aur overall aik acha article laga wohi winner hoga/gi.

Results TM Birthday pe announce kiye ayain gaye INSHA ALLAH

NOTE!

All Members' participation is must!(dehan se sun lain)
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[Nelly]

walaikum assalam
OK i will try to write my Safar Nama

 

[Qawareer]

Wssalam u alaikum
hmmm interesting
inshaAllah mai b participate kron..!

 

[Toobi]

walikum asalam...
i will try also..​

 

[HuriYa]

Nice Contest sis..!

I'll try to Participate.

 

[Toobi]

HAMSAFAR
Tooba khan say Fatima khan tak...


Aug2009
dhoper ka waqt
copmuter screen k peechay ake makhboot al hawas, khoyi khoyi c larki
14 august k hawalay say ake artical chapnay k chakkar may te...k kahe say kuch mil jaye or wo usay ake or jaga chap daylakin hay re qismatsearch kartay kartay Tafreehmela nam k 1 jangal may aa nikli wo masoom

bs pir kia ta bechare yaha phance k reh gaye...asa jal pehnka..asa jal k jitna nikalte wo mazloom utna he phancte chali jate...

nam bechare nay tooba khan rakka...k kahe asli nam diya to larkay us k gar tak na pohanch jaye...(haye re khush fehmiya..)bs pir kia ta 1 safray musalsal shoro hwa dosto...
is safar nay us larki ko kafe had tak badal diya...
rasta dikanay walay..samjhnay walay..zindage ki talkh haqeqato say roshnas karanay walay...himmat dilanay walay bht say log aye...bht say rehnuma aye...bht say mukhlis dost aye...kis ka nam lay..kis ka choray..kuch pata ne us jhalii ko...
wo to aj tak nasir bhai,noor bhai,tariq hameed,hoorain,Anaaya, amreen,fahad,hannia,zeeshan,adi.rr,firasat,waqas nili,sajid bhai,ahsan,saif ,tayyab, Cheerful jasay or latadad logo k ahsano talay dub gaye hay...kis ka or kasay shukriya ada karay..k jinho nay is khoye khoye c larki ko jeenay ka ake maqsad ata kia...iske mehroomio ko iski taqat qarar day kar zindage may kuch karnay ka hosla ada kia...
kia Tafreehmela ka ye ahsan kabe b bhoklaye hove larki ada kar paye ge.....???
haye ray zindage...to b kasay kasay rang dikata hay apnay...jub sare donia usay neecha dikanay may lage hove te..to asay maytm@com ki donia may to nay us larki k la dhakela...k ja ja fatima to b kuch seek lay...zindage gozarnay k huner to b kuch seek lay...
seek to lia bechare nay...eent ka jawab pattar say dayna ka....thore chalaki,thore masti,tohre hazir jawabi...thora nakhra...thore hoshyare...
haq bat ka sat...doshmano say 2,2 hat karna

islam mokhalif logo ko munh tor jawab...watan ki shan may gosthaki karnay walo ka tiya pancha karna

ye sab,apnay jazbat ahsasat log tak pohanchanay ka zarya usay usk TM nay ata kia...

mana k wo larki ab bht say log ko pasand nae..q k zindage k talkh haqeqato nay usay b qadray talkh bana diya...
lakin apnay dosto ka piyar,khatti meethi laraya yahe to uski zindage ka hasil hay...

na naraz hwa karo logo us bechare say...woh dil ki bare saf hay...masoom haybholi bhali hay

ye sab say barh kar TFREEHMELA di jan A...

tooba khan A....

ap soch rhay hongay ji k may kon ho bhala?jo itne dair say uski khani sunanay may lage hove ho...

lo ji may batate ho...may ho

{(viannon)}FATIMA KHAN{(viannon)}

wohe jalli,khoye khoye c larki,aj ap sab k samnay
fatima khan k roop may hazir e kidmat hay...

aj tooba khan,bhalay mera nick ho..but fatima khan,jis ki shaksiyat k saray nuks tm nay khatam kardiye..

sab k samany sar utha k jeenay k laiq hay...donia ka mqabla karnay aj may b khare hogaye ho...

ise tm nay mujy zindage say apnay haq wasool karnay ka rasta dikaya...apnay karobar ise palteform say sohro kia.

kasay shukriya apnay RUB ka ada karo k mujy TM jesa mukhlis hamsafar ata kia....jo mujy apni sare khamio or khobio k sat qabool karta hay...

mare zindage ka hasil mera TM hay...mare pehli r akhri mohabbat

siraf TAFREEHMELA.COM hay





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[whiteros]

zabardast kheyal hai try kren gay
inshallah

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Wa'alaikum assalam wow masha'ALLAH kya contest aaya hai
bohot hi zabardast so is tarah eik muqabla reh jaayega naa
jab sub masha'ALLAH se kar hi rahe hain to
TM ke liye poetry ka contest bhi hona tha naa khair
Hoor sis contest bara zabardast hai insha'ALLAH i will participate

 

[Sabah]

Walaikum Salam Wrwb!
thats really good
abhi yeh mere type k contest hogae
I was looking forward to such a contest from long time ago
thanks for arranging this, InshAllah I'll try my best to write a good article related to my journey in TM.
by the way yeh word limitation na huti tu acha hota, kia pata 500 words bhi kum padhe tu

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

HAMSAFAR
Tooba khan say Fatima khan tak...


Aug2009
dhoper ka waqt
copmuter screen k peechay ake makhboot al hawas, khoyi khoyi c larki
14 august k hawalay say ake artical chapnay k chakkar may te...k kahe say kuch mil jaye or wo usay ake or jaga chap daylakin hay re qismatsearch kartay kartay Tafreehmela nam k 1 jangal may aa nikli wo masoom

bs pir kia ta bechare yaha phance k reh gaye...asa jal pehnka..asa jal k jitna nikalte wo mazloom utna he phancte chali jate...

nam bechare nay tooba khan rakka...k kahe asli nam diya to larkay us k gar tak na pohanch jaye...(haye re khush fehmiya..)bs pir kia ta 1 safray musalsal shoro hwa dosto...
is safar nay us larki ko kafe had tak badal diya...
rasta dikanay walay..samjhnay walay..zindage ki talkh haqeqato say roshnas karanay walay...himmat dilanay walay bht say log aye...bht say rehnuma aye...bht say mukhlis dost aye...kis ka nam lay..kis ka choray..kuch pata ne us jhalii ko...
wo to aj tak nasir bhai,noor bhai,tariq hameed,hoorain,Anaaya, amreen,fahad,hannia,zeeshan,adi.rr,firasat,waqas nili,sajid bhai,ahsan,saif ,tayyab jasay or latadad logo k ahsano talay dub gaye hay...kis ka or kasay shukriya ada karay..k jinho nay is khoye khoye c larki ko jeenay ka ake maqsad ata kia...iske mehroomio ko iski taqat qarar day kar zindage may kuch karnay ka hosla ada kia...
kia Tafreehmela ka ye ahsan kabe b bhoklaye hove larki ada kar paye ge.....???
haye ray zindage...to b kasay kasay rang dikata hay apnay...jub sare donia usay neecha dikanay may lage hove te..to asay maytm@com ki donia may to nay us larki k la dhakela...k ja ja fatima to b kuch seek lay...zindage gozarnay k huner to b kuch seek lay...
seek to lia bechare nay...eent ka jawab pattar say dayna ka....thore chalaki,thore masti,tohre hazir jawabi...thora nakhra...thore hoshyare...
haq bat ka sat...doshmano say 2,2 hat karna

islam mokhalif logo ko munh tor jawab...watan ki shan may gosthaki karnay walo ka tiya pancha karna

ye sab,apnay jazbat ahsasat log tak pohanchanay ka zarya usay usk TM nay ata kia...

mana k wo larki ab bht say log ko pasand nae..q k zindage k talkh haqeqato nay usay b qadray talkh bana diya...
lakin apnay dosto ka piyar,khatti meethi laraya yahe to uski zindage ka hasil hay...

na naraz hwa karo logo us bechare say...woh dil ki bare saf hay...masoom haybholi bhali hay

ye sab say barh kar TFREEHMELA di jan A...

tooba khan A....

ap soch rhay hongay ji k may kon ho bhala?jo itne dair say uski khani sunanay may lage hove ho...

lo ji may batate ho...may ho

{(viannon)}FATIMA KHAN{(viannon)}

wohe jalli,khoye khoye c larki,aj ap sab k samnay
fatima khan k roop may hazir e kidmat hay...

aj tooba khan,bhalay mera nick ho..but fatima khan,jis ki shaksiyat k saray nuks tm nay khatam kardiye..

sab k samany sar utha k jeenay k laiq hay...donia ka mqabla karnay aj may b khare hogaye ho...

ise tm nay mujy zindage say apnay haq wasool karnay ka rasta dikaya...apnay karobar ise palteform say sohro kia.

kasay shukriya apnay RUB ka ada karo k mujy TM jesa mukhlis hamsafar ata kia....jo mujy apni sare khamio or khobio k sat qabool karta hay...

mare zindage ka hasil mera TM hay...mare pehli r akhri mohabbat

sirat TAFREEHMELA.COM hay





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Masha'ALLAH aapi first try mein sixer
bohot hi achha article likhe ho aap
wish u best of luck for the contest
insha'ALLAH u will be winner

 

[Atif-adi]

zaberdast toobi

 

[Dreamy Boy]

asalam o alaikum
MASHALLAH bohat acha likha hai ap nae tooba name bhe acha rahkha hai humsafar
all the best
ap ka hamara sath aise hi hamesha bana rahe Ameen

 

[Hoorain]

Walaikum Salam Wrwb!
thats really good
abhi yeh mere type k contest hogae
I was looking forward to such a contest from long time ago
thanks for arranging this, InshAllah I'll try my best to write a good article related to my journey in TM.
by the way yeh word limitation na huti tu acha hota, kia pata 500 words bhi kum padhe tu

thanx

words limitation to sab ki aasani k liye hi rakhi ,,,words limit may reh k article likhain gaye tabhi to competition bna rhega ,,,warna to obviously sab ka safar apni apni jaga maze ka n interesting hi rha hay,,,to daikhna ye hay k is limit may kon apne safar ko jamya tor par aur interesting way may sab k saath share kar pata hay
sahi competiton inhi words ka hay
zarur participate kariye intazar rhega aap sab ki sharing ka

 

[Zee Leo]

HAMSAFAR
Tooba khan say Fatima khan tak...


Aug2009
dhoper ka waqt
copmuter screen k peechay ake makhboot al hawas, khoyi khoyi c larki
14 august k hawalay say ake artical chapnay k chakkar may te...k kahe say kuch mil jaye or wo usay ake or jaga chap daylakin hay re qismatsearch kartay kartay Tafreehmela nam k 1 jangal may aa nikli wo masoom

bs pir kia ta bechare yaha phance k reh gaye...asa jal pehnka..asa jal k jitna nikalte wo mazloom utna he phancte chali jate...

nam bechare nay tooba khan rakka...k kahe asli nam diya to larkay us k gar tak na pohanch jaye...(haye re khush fehmiya..)bs pir kia ta 1 safray musalsal shoro hwa dosto...
is safar nay us larki ko kafe had tak badal diya...
rasta dikanay walay..samjhnay walay..zindage ki talkh haqeqato say roshnas karanay walay...himmat dilanay walay bht say log aye...bht say rehnuma aye...bht say mukhlis dost aye...kis ka nam lay..kis ka choray..kuch pata ne us jhalii ko...
wo to aj tak nasir bhai,noor bhai,tariq hameed,hoorain,Anaaya, amreen,fahad,hannia,zeeshan,adi.rr,firasat,waqas nili,sajid bhai,ahsan,saif ,tayyab jasay or latadad logo k ahsano talay dub gaye hay...kis ka or kasay shukriya ada karay..k jinho nay is khoye khoye c larki ko jeenay ka ake maqsad ata kia...iske mehroomio ko iski taqat qarar day kar zindage may kuch karnay ka hosla ada kia...
kia Tafreehmela ka ye ahsan kabe b bhoklaye hove larki ada kar paye ge.....???
haye ray zindage...to b kasay kasay rang dikata hay apnay...jub sare donia usay neecha dikanay may lage hove te..to asay maytm@com ki donia may to nay us larki k la dhakela...k ja ja fatima to b kuch seek lay...zindage gozarnay k huner to b kuch seek lay...
seek to lia bechare nay...eent ka jawab pattar say dayna ka....thore chalaki,thore masti,tohre hazir jawabi...thora nakhra...thore hoshyare...
haq bat ka sat...doshmano say 2,2 hat karna

islam mokhalif logo ko munh tor jawab...watan ki shan may gosthaki karnay walo ka tiya pancha karna

ye sab,apnay jazbat ahsasat log tak pohanchanay ka zarya usay usk TM nay ata kia...

mana k wo larki ab bht say log ko pasand nae..q k zindage k talkh haqeqato nay usay b qadray talkh bana diya...
lakin apnay dosto ka piyar,khatti meethi laraya yahe to uski zindage ka hasil hay...

na naraz hwa karo logo us bechare say...woh dil ki bare saf hay...masoom haybholi bhali hay

ye sab say barh kar TFREEHMELA di jan A...

tooba khan A....

ap soch rhay hongay ji k may kon ho bhala?jo itne dair say uski khani sunanay may lage hove ho...

lo ji may batate ho...may ho

{(viannon)}FATIMA KHAN{(viannon)}

wohe jalli,khoye khoye c larki,aj ap sab k samnay
fatima khan k roop may hazir e kidmat hay...

aj tooba khan,bhalay mera nick ho..but fatima khan,jis ki shaksiyat k saray nuks tm nay khatam kardiye..

sab k samany sar utha k jeenay k laiq hay...donia ka mqabla karnay aj may b khare hogaye ho...

ise tm nay mujy zindage say apnay haq wasool karnay ka rasta dikaya...apnay karobar ise palteform say sohro kia.

kasay shukriya apnay RUB ka ada karo k mujy TM jesa mukhlis hamsafar ata kia....jo mujy apni sare khamio or khobio k sat qabool karta hay...

mare zindage ka hasil mera TM hay...mare pehli r akhri mohabbat

sirat TAFREEHMELA.COM hay





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agar aaj mera naam na likhti toe apna hashar dekhti tum {(Angry)} btw very nice article .. dekhta hon main kya teer marta hon . shayad maar doon ({kopping)}

 

[Zee Leo]

nice contest.. will try my best to take participate InshaAllah

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Mera sunehra safar

Assalamo alaikum TM
MeRa SuNeHrA SaFaR
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sach baat hai doston jab tak ke mene intro ka thread lagaya tha
aur wahaan aa ker lougon ne mujhe welcome kiya tha tab tak mein
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yeh koi aur forum hota ya Zeeshan bhai strict type ke hote to shaayad mein
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at the end mere is sunehre safar ke khaas aur sunehre dost saathion ke naam
bhi shaamil karna chaahta hoon

Zeeshan Bahaar Hans mukh Tooba aapi Aasho baji Wasif bhai
Nelli sis Hoorain sis Hooria sis Sara sis nanhi chiriya
Atif bhai Khushi sis DB bro SHB bro
Faari sis Mohtarma masooma bibi
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Amreen sis Mirza bhai Sona sis Khwahish sis
aur mere kuch naye per inki tarah hi mere azeez dost
Muskaan sis Zeri sis Ayeshi sweet doll do lambe nick waale
sweet si kuri Unpredictable
Cheerful aur agar kisi ka naam reh gaya to sorry

Thats it​

 

[Dreamy Boy]

nice contest
mai apna safar sunate sunate coma mai chala jaunga lol
so best of luck all mem

 

[Hoorain]

HAMSAFAR
Tooba khan say Fatima khan tak...


Aug2009
dhoper ka waqt
copmuter screen k peechay ake makhboot al hawas, khoyi khoyi c larki
14 august k hawalay say ake artical chapnay k chakkar may te...k kahe say kuch mil jaye or wo usay ake or jaga chap daylakin hay re qismatsearch kartay kartay Tafreehmela nam k 1 jangal may aa nikli wo masoom

bs pir kia ta bechare yaha phance k reh gaye...asa jal pehnka..asa jal k jitna nikalte wo mazloom utna he phancte chali jate...

nam bechare nay tooba khan rakka...k kahe asli nam diya to larkay us k gar tak na pohanch jaye...(haye re khush fehmiya..)bs pir kia ta 1 safray musalsal shoro hwa dosto...
is safar nay us larki ko kafe had tak badal diya...
rasta dikanay walay..samjhnay walay..zindage ki talkh haqeqato say roshnas karanay walay...himmat dilanay walay bht say log aye...bht say rehnuma aye...bht say mukhlis dost aye...kis ka nam lay..kis ka choray..kuch pata ne us jhalii ko...
wo to aj tak nasir bhai,noor bhai,tariq hameed,hoorain,Anaaya, amreen,fahad,hannia,zeeshan,adi.rr,firasat,waqas nili,sajid bhai,ahsan,saif ,tayyab jasay or latadad logo k ahsano talay dub gaye hay...kis ka or kasay shukriya ada karay..k jinho nay is khoye khoye c larki ko jeenay ka ake maqsad ata kia...iske mehroomio ko iski taqat qarar day kar zindage may kuch karnay ka hosla ada kia...
kia Tafreehmela ka ye ahsan kabe b bhoklaye hove larki ada kar paye ge.....???
haye ray zindage...to b kasay kasay rang dikata hay apnay...jub sare donia usay neecha dikanay may lage hove te..to asay maytm@com ki donia may to nay us larki k la dhakela...k ja ja fatima to b kuch seek lay...zindage gozarnay k huner to b kuch seek lay...
seek to lia bechare nay...eent ka jawab pattar say dayna ka....thore chalaki,thore masti,tohre hazir jawabi...thora nakhra...thore hoshyare...
haq bat ka sat...doshmano say 2,2 hat karna

islam mokhalif logo ko munh tor jawab...watan ki shan may gosthaki karnay walo ka tiya pancha karna

ye sab,apnay jazbat ahsasat log tak pohanchanay ka zarya usay usk TM nay ata kia...

mana k wo larki ab bht say log ko pasand nae..q k zindage k talkh haqeqato nay usay b qadray talkh bana diya...
lakin apnay dosto ka piyar,khatti meethi laraya yahe to uski zindage ka hasil hay...

na naraz hwa karo logo us bechare say...woh dil ki bare saf hay...masoom haybholi bhali hay

ye sab say barh kar TFREEHMELA di jan A...

tooba khan A....

ap soch rhay hongay ji k may kon ho bhala?jo itne dair say uski khani sunanay may lage hove ho...

lo ji may batate ho...may ho

{(viannon)}FATIMA KHAN{(viannon)}

wohe jalli,khoye khoye c larki,aj ap sab k samnay
fatima khan k roop may hazir e kidmat hay...

aj tooba khan,bhalay mera nick ho..but fatima khan,jis ki shaksiyat k saray nuks tm nay khatam kardiye..

sab k samany sar utha k jeenay k laiq hay...donia ka mqabla karnay aj may b khare hogaye ho...

ise tm nay mujy zindage say apnay haq wasool karnay ka rasta dikaya...apnay karobar ise palteform say sohro kia.

kasay shukriya apnay RUB ka ada karo k mujy TM jesa mukhlis hamsafar ata kia....jo mujy apni sare khamio or khobio k sat qabool karta hay...

mare zindage ka hasil mera TM hay...mare pehli r akhri mohabbat

sirat TAFREEHMELA.COM hay





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Speechless Toobi!

true feelings k jawab may kuch kehna ,,comment karna bohat mushkil hota hay!
MASHA ALLAH itni jaldi aap en sharing ki ussi pe hayran thi main

aur jo likha hay aap ne hufffff truely amazing,beautiful journey n beautiful style of narration
GUD LUCK!

 

[Hans_Mukh]

Walaikumsalam,


Ma Shaa Allah Toop khan app k safar naama tu bohat acaha raha aur app nay Tm say bohat kuch seekha aur article be kiya khoob likha hy jitni tareef kijye utni he kum hy


i can say only beautiful wording


Best of Luck Toop Khan

HAMSAFAR
Tooba khan say Fatima khan tak...


Aug2009
dhoper ka waqt
copmuter screen k peechay ake makhboot al hawas, khoyi khoyi c larki
14 august k hawalay say ake artical chapnay k chakkar may te...k kahe say kuch mil jaye or wo usay ake or jaga chap daylakin hay re qismatsearch kartay kartay Tafreehmela nam k 1 jangal may aa nikli wo masoom

bs pir kia ta bechare yaha phance k reh gaye...asa jal pehnka..asa jal k jitna nikalte wo mazloom utna he phancte chali jate...

nam bechare nay tooba khan rakka...k kahe asli nam diya to larkay us k gar tak na pohanch jaye...(haye re khush fehmiya..)bs pir kia ta 1 safray musalsal shoro hwa dosto...
is safar nay us larki ko kafe had tak badal diya...
rasta dikanay walay..samjhnay walay..zindage ki talkh haqeqato say roshnas karanay walay...himmat dilanay walay bht say log aye...bht say rehnuma aye...bht say mukhlis dost aye...kis ka nam lay..kis ka choray..kuch pata ne us jhalii ko...
wo to aj tak nasir bhai,noor bhai,tariq hameed,hoorain,Anaaya, amreen,fahad,hannia,zeeshan,adi.rr,firasat,waqas nili,sajid bhai,ahsan,saif ,tayyab jasay or latadad logo k ahsano talay dub gaye hay...kis ka or kasay shukriya ada karay..k jinho nay is khoye khoye c larki ko jeenay ka ake maqsad ata kia...iske mehroomio ko iski taqat qarar day kar zindage may kuch karnay ka hosla ada kia...
kia Tafreehmela ka ye ahsan kabe b bhoklaye hove larki ada kar paye ge.....???
haye ray zindage...to b kasay kasay rang dikata hay apnay...jub sare donia usay neecha dikanay may lage hove te..to asay maytm@com ki donia may to nay us larki k la dhakela...k ja ja fatima to b kuch seek lay...zindage gozarnay k huner to b kuch seek lay...
seek to lia bechare nay...eent ka jawab pattar say dayna ka....thore chalaki,thore masti,tohre hazir jawabi...thora nakhra...thore hoshyare...
haq bat ka sat...doshmano say 2,2 hat karna

islam mokhalif logo ko munh tor jawab...watan ki shan may gosthaki karnay walo ka tiya pancha karna

ye sab,apnay jazbat ahsasat log tak pohanchanay ka zarya usay usk TM nay ata kia...

mana k wo larki ab bht say log ko pasand nae..q k zindage k talkh haqeqato nay usay b qadray talkh bana diya...
lakin apnay dosto ka piyar,khatti meethi laraya yahe to uski zindage ka hasil hay...

na naraz hwa karo logo us bechare say...woh dil ki bare saf hay...masoom haybholi bhali hay

ye sab say barh kar TFREEHMELA di jan A...

tooba khan A....

ap soch rhay hongay ji k may kon ho bhala?jo itne dair say uski khani sunanay may lage hove ho...

lo ji may batate ho...may ho

{(viannon)}FATIMA KHAN{(viannon)}

wohe jalli,khoye khoye c larki,aj ap sab k samnay
fatima khan k roop may hazir e kidmat hay...

aj tooba khan,bhalay mera nick ho..but fatima khan,jis ki shaksiyat k saray nuks tm nay khatam kardiye..

sab k samany sar utha k jeenay k laiq hay...donia ka mqabla karnay aj may b khare hogaye ho...

ise tm nay mujy zindage say apnay haq wasool karnay ka rasta dikaya...apnay karobar ise palteform say sohro kia.

kasay shukriya apnay RUB ka ada karo k mujy TM jesa mukhlis hamsafar ata kia....jo mujy apni sare khamio or khobio k sat qabool karta hay...

mare zindage ka hasil mera TM hay...mare pehli r akhri mohabbat

sirat TAFREEHMELA.COM hay





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[Hoorain]

nice contest
mai apna safar sunate sunate coma mai chala jaunga lol
so best of luck all mem

ye to participate na karna ka bahana hay