Haan wahi to @faari ab mene iske liye
saaaaaaaaaaare staff se help leni hogi
aur aap subki sharing kahan hain
...@Miss_Khan @Shailina @rahath @Prince_Farry @hoorain @Nelly @sabha_khan40 @ChoCo
and otherssssssssssssssssssssss ??
To jaldi se laayen use zehen mein abhi kam time bacha haimeki sharing to ab tak maire mind may b nhi aayi
ok khosis karo gi..........Lekin aati to hai naa : )
aur aap bhi bakamal ho shayara ho I know MASHA'ALLAH
jaldi jaldi likh kar share karein @Shailina .
Wahh wahhh wahhhhhh, tum ne to mehfil hi loot li, *Whistle*, kamaal hi kr diya rubiMain actually aisa e kch socha tha jysa fari darling ny share kiya bt fahadd bro & fari donon ki nazam thi so ab main ghazal likh k share kr rhi hunachi na lagy toh bataana agr apna hashar nashar krwana hy toh Mujhy lahu pr lahu-luhan sy acha word nii suja Sharm-o-haya ky pardy mein lipti gairat lahu-luhan hy ,Tery ghar ky kony mein simti pari izzat lahu-luhan hy ,Kahin nanhe-paudy pr sy hy paed ka saya uth gaya ,Kahin be-zubaan bachy ki masumiyat lahu-luhan hy ,Jhoot ko chupany ki mijalen pakar rahin hyn zor ,Aaj sach kehny ki himmat lahu-luhan hy ,Kahin daulat ki hawis , Koi bhuka shohrat ka ,Ae shehr-e-khwahish teri badolat insaniyat lahu-luhan hy ,Hasad sy chalni hy har kaleja yahan ,Aaj bhai-chary ki riwayat lahu-luhan hy , Khaak-nasheenon mein hy akad chit'tanon ki si ,Qaum ko sudharny chali hakumat ' lahu-luhan hy ... ![DOUBLEPOST=1361103343][/DOUBLEPOST]
Guneh-gari mein inteha kr chuka jo ,Us musalman ki ibadat lahu-luhan hy ... !
.............................................!!Main actually aisa e kch socha tha jysa fari darling ny share kiya bt fahadd bro & fari donon ki nazam thi so ab main ghazal likh k share kr rhi hunachi na lagy toh bataana agr apna hashar nashar krwana hy toh Mujhy lahu pr lahu-luhan sy acha word nii suja Sharm-o-haya ky pardy mein lipti gairat lahu-luhan hy ,Tery ghar ky kony mein simti pari izzat lahu-luhan hy ,Kahin nanhe-paudy pr sy hy paed ka saya uth gaya ,Kahin be-zubaan bachy ki masumiyat lahu-luhan hy ,Jhoot ko chupany ki mijalen pakar rahin hyn zor ,Aaj sach kehny ki himmat lahu-luhan hy ,Kahin daulat ki hawis , Koi bhuka shohrat ka ,Ae shehr-e-khwahish teri badolat insaniyat lahu-luhan hy ,Hasad sy chalni hy har kaleja yahan ,Aaj bhai-chary ki riwayat lahu-luhan hy , Khaak-nasheenon mein hy akad chit'tanon ki si ,Qaum ko sudharny chali hakumat ' lahu-luhan hy ... ![DOUBLEPOST=1361103343][/DOUBLEPOST]Guneh-gari mein inteha kr chuka jo ,Us musalman ki ibadat lahu-luhan hy ... !
waah waah TM ki anarkaliOkesh g chiraghu bhaya k kehne pey main b try karing shayron ki roohon ko besakun krne ki
Main kis baat par karun matam aey DunyaAuron ki tara wo bhi bewafa nikla,aur to kuch nhi!Kio har waqt k giley shikwe Rona DhonaBas lahu k Rishton may na rhi Wafa,Aur to Kuch nhi!Kio Hama Waqt Poochtey rehte ho saba-e-bezariDil ko na rha ab kisi ka aitbaar,aur to kuch nhi!Dukh nhi us k yun badal jaane ka aey dostbas usse samjha tha dunya se juda,aur to kuch nhi!na kar zeya-e-waqt hamdardiyan jataney maybas yhi na k main aitbara haar betha hun? aur to kuch nhi!ye na samajh k ik main hi hun bawafa bharri dunya maybewafayi ka na mil sakka mujey moqa ,aur to kuch nhi!na daikh yun afsurda si nazron se chehrey ko mairebas kuch aansu hi to hain zabt-e-gham se mawra, aur to kuch nhi!
Okesh g chiraghu bhaya k kehne pey main b try karing shayron ki roohon ko besakun krne ki
Main kis baat par karun matam aey DunyaAuron ki tara wo bhi bewafa nikla,aur to kuch nhi!Kio har waqt k giley shikwe Rona DhonaBas lahu k Rishton may na rhi Wafa,Aur to Kuch nhi!Kio Hama Waqt Poochtey rehte ho saba-e-bezariDil ko na rha ab kisi ka aitbaar,aur to kuch nhi!Dukh nhi us k yun badal jaane ka aey dostbas usse samjha tha dunya se juda,aur to kuch nhi!na kar zeya-e-waqt hamdardiyan jataney maybas yhi na k main aitbara haar betha hun? aur to kuch nhi!ye na samajh k ik main hi hun bawafa bharri dunya maybewafayi ka na mil sakka mujey moqa ,aur to kuch nhi!na daikh yun afsurda si nazron se chehrey ko mairebas kuch aansu hi to hain zabt-e-gham se mawra, aur to kuch nhi!
lol thnx [DOUBLEPOST=1361188103][/DOUBLEPOST]Wahh wahhh wahhhhhh, tum ne to mehfil hi loot li, *Whistle*, kamaal hi kr diya rubi
Bht achi ghazal likhi hai
thnx broMasha Allah
kaafi sanjeeda kalaam hai mohtarma
aur mauzu jo simeta hai aap ne wo bhi kaafi hassaas hai
bohot khoob
Allah aap ke qalam me barkat de Aameen
thnxxxx jaan
eik waqt tha tere intzaar me bethta tha
ab wo kal wala waqt nahi ,aur tu kuch nahi
very nice buhat achi likhi best of luck
shankuuuwaah waah TM ki anarkali
bahut acha likha hy sachi
bas usse samjha tha dunya se juda,aur to kuch nhi!bewafayi ka na mil sakka mujey moqa ,aur to kuch nhi!
MASHA'ALLAH MASHA'ALLAH bohot bohot achhi ghazal likhi hai @hoorain sisterOkesh g chiraghu bhaya k kehne pey main b try karing shayron ki roohon ko besakun krne ki
Main kis baat par karun matam aey DunyaAuron ki tara wo bhi bewafa nikla,aur to kuch nhi!Kio har waqt k giley shikwe Rona DhonaBas lahu k Rishton may na rhi Wafa,Aur to Kuch nhi!Kio Hama Waqt Poochtey rehte ho sabab-e-bezariDil ko na rha ab kisi ka aitbaar,aur to kuch nhi!Dukh nhi us k yun badal jaane ka aey dostbas usse samjha tha dunya se juda,aur to kuch nhi!na kar zeya-e-waqt hamdardiyan jataney maybas yhi na k main aitbara haar betha hun? aur to kuch nhi!ye na samajh k ik main hi hun bawafa bharri dunya maybewafayi ka na mil sakka mujey moqa ,aur to kuch nhi!na daikh yun afsurda si nazron se chehrey ko mairebas kuch aansu hi to hain zabt-e-gham se mawra, aur to kuch nhi!
thanx for encouragement broMASHA'ALLAH MASHA'ALLAH bohot bohot achhi ghazal likhi hai @hoorain sister
bilkul dil chhu gaiy aapki ye ghazal
hmm main tag krti toh milta nawbht khoob @Rubi MASHALLAH!
Bht zabardast sharing hai! yh me ne nahi parhi thi muje iss ka tag ni mila tha
oh tau ap ne khud he tag ni kia me smjha shayad bhool gai hohmm main tag krti toh milta naw
khair thnx
haan toh aap aisa e smjjh lo mjhy koi masla nioh tau ap ne khud he tag ni kia me smjha shayad bhool gai ho