Shukria bilkul kharab hain bhai bas ALLAH rehem o karam farmaye aurBuht ALLA........
Waqai karachi k halat buht bury ho gaye hain..
Ji bilkul andaaza laga sakte ho bhai aur waqai yahaan har subh ghar se nikalneWa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb
masha Allah bohot umdah bro
aap wahan rehte hain aur us shahar ki halat ham se bakhubi apko waqif hai
sirf parh ka ham ye andaza laga rahe hain ke kaise honge wahan ke halat
Allah raham farmaye Aameen
khaas kar ye share me kaafi sachai lagi hame
aur nasha jaam se zyada lalach ka hota hai
youn huwe tamam ulma madhosh shehr ke
Shukria bhai aur sum AmeenBohot A'la Saif....
ALLAH TAALA Karachi ke haalat me behtari laye Ameen....
BilkulBohit hi umda or true poetry ak ak sachy pak ki feryad,
Sum ameenbOhat khOob..!
Bohat acha likha reality based..! Allah Humray Pakistan aur Khas tor pe Karachi k Aman aur Khush Hali ko phir se Aabad keray Aameen.
Thankyou so much bhaizaberdast bro bht ache tareeke se bayan kia hia u ne
thanks bro.........very nice poetry bro . karachi ko proud hai aap jaise karachi lovers par MashaAllah
ek to taareef karo or baatien bhi suno
Thanks
nahin kahunga u ko{(Angry)}
yeh asaan alfaaz wali saadi shayari bhi
poori samajh nahin aaiy u ko.....?
Bohot bohot shukria sisaur nasha jaam se zyada lalach ka hota hai
youn huwe tamam ulma madhosh shehr ke
wah zabardast bro bohat khoob likha
Ur nick deserves it{(haha)}
ek to taareef karo or baatien bhi suno
Thankyou so muchits really heart rending
but nicely written
Bohot bohooooooooot shukria Annu sis...wssalam u alaikum
mashaAllah..boht khoooooooooob..!
di gaiy saaz ko jagah azaan ki phir
kar gaye shayateen aman nosh shehr ke
Allah humare haal pe reham kre..Ameen
ese muzoaat pe likhte rahe aur share karte rahen
Assalamo alaikum TM doston mene humare shehr ke haal pe
eik ghazal likhi aur bare saade andaaz me hi likhi umeed hai
pasand aayegi..........
Mar gaye naujawan pur josh shehr ke
phir rahe har simt khanabadosh shehr ke
aur nasha jaam se zyada lalach ka hota hai
youn huwe tamam ulma madhosh shehr ke
di gaiy saaz ko jagah azaan ki phir
kar gaye shayateen aman nosh shehr ke
wafadaaron ka to yahaan thikana nahin
jab se harkat me ulfat faramosh shehr ke
iske beton ko iske aage kaata gaya to
huwe ghumgheen saare aaghosh shehr ke
hawa e maghrib aisi chali yahaan ke huwe
ChiragH e roshan huwe be hosh shehr ke
***S_ChiragH***
Bohot bohot shukria aap bhi achhe khaase bella hoWALAIKUM-ASSALAM
bohot Aalaa
S_Chiragh{(goodpost)}
Ap to achey khasey SHAAIR hain