my first ghazal

[anniasim]

jo toot k bhikren wo taare dard dete hain
teri palkon k bhige kinare dard dete hain

tujhe awaz deti hon to palat k loot atti hai
yun meri zaat main utre weerane dard dete hain

tera wo bolna,hansna palat k muskura dena
bite din,,yadoon k bahane dard dete hain

naye kissi phool ka khilna mohhabat k sahare pe
baraste mosamoon k ye ishare dard dete hain​

 

[yoursks]

nice collection..

thanks for sharing and keep it up

 

[saviou]

jo toot k bhikren wo taare dard dete hain
teri palkon k bhige kinare dard dete hain

tujhe awaz deti hon to palat k loot atti hai
yun meri zaat main utre weerane dard dete hain

tera wo bolna,hansna palat k muskura dena
bite din,,yadoon k bahane dard dete hain

naye kissi phool ka khilna mohhabat k sahare pe
baraste mosamoon k ye ishare dard dete hain​

masha Allah bohot acha likha hai apne

 

[anniasim]

thanks

shukriya apki pasand ka ab main apni aur poem bhi share karne ki himmat kar sakti hon​

 

[saviou]

shukriya apki pasand ka ab main apni aur poem bhi share karne ki himmat kar sakti hon​

zaroor mohtarma
apne bohot acha likha hai hamare sath share karte rahiye

 

[Qawareer]

mashallah..boht khoob,,
ap zarur or likhna ap me damm hai

 

[~Bahaar~]

MashAllah bahut umda likha hai...

Allah karay Zor e bayan aur zyada...
Ameen

​

 

[Raaz]

Zabrdast Nice

 

[Fa!th]

superb sharing....

 

[Hoorain]

tujhe awaz deti hon to palat k loot atti hai
yun meri zaat main utre weerane dard dete hain


awesome lajawab

keep sharing siso

 

[Qawareer]

Boht khoob..........

tujhe awaz deti hon to palat k loot atti hai
yun meri zaat main utre weerane dard dete hain


awesome lajawab

keep sharing siso

 

[Tooba Alvi]

wow touching...